KriYaansh OS.- Teri meri prem kahani PART 2 PAGE 5

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-adorabubbles-

@-adorabubbles-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey PPL 😊 I'm planning of write a KriYaansh OS. Here is a tralier.

Kria Ghai is the daughter of the Most richest man in India. Saying that she wants to live a normal life and go to school and enjoy her teenage life Kria asks her father if she can go to college. Her father is reluctant to let her go out into the real world as there are many dangers and he is scared. So he hires a body guard for her. Reyaansh. Its a story of love between Kria and Rey. Will her father approve of her love for Rey or will Rey and Kria never be one.

Its like the movie Bodyguard but i will but a little KriYaansh flavour into it.
Do tell me if i should continue or not. 😊 Critism is welcomed 😃

I hope you all likeed it.

Edited by kyriareyD3 - 13 years ago

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Shaz

@..DamonCrazy..

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Posted: 13 years ago

a nice change...u shuld write it.

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tulsi agarwal

@spicyheart

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Posted: 13 years ago

thts a new n interesting concept

continue soon

n plz pm me when u continue

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Saumya Rathore

@Saumya_D3

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Posted: 13 years ago

u should definitely continue...!! and PM me when u do..!!

-Saumya

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nebu

@nebu

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Posted: 13 years ago

It was nice, you should coninue. PM me when you upadate it

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chetna

@crazysky

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Posted: 13 years ago

pm wen u continue but plz dont create maya as in bodyguard movie b/w kriyansh

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-adorabubbles-

@-adorabubbles-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you so much for the support and for liking it guys. It means A LOT to me as this is my first ever OS. I will continue very soon, well as soon as i can. It's gunna be short and sweet. Thanks again =)

@crazysky: No maya. DW =)

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Himani

@Infinities

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG OMG OMG😃 !!!!! Rey Kria"s Bodyguard 😍, N she fAlling in love wid him❤️ , Thts sooo AWESOMe🤗!!!! I am relly awaiting 2 see their Noke Jhoke 😆, Fights N LOVE 😳, haayyeee Merii Shonnaa , Dil jEET LIYA TUNE MERA❤️ !!! Ab Zyaada suspense matt rakhiyo humse !!!! Nahii tou pakka marr joungi !!!!! Love U Shonaa 🤗

Edited by kriyansh117 - 13 years ago