Mahsoos- THREAD 5- NOTE PG 147 - Page 66

keya plzzz jaldi na dear

The noise came as a surprise. Maan opens his eyes, inhaling geets aroma. Her ankle bracket made music as she climbed the long wooden stair . He pushes his long head up, trying to concentrate further. Hesitating rather to speak or say a word.

"maan..."'she stood there rooted. Holding her hand, wondering, looking everywhere for a word... "maan please listen to me... I know you are angry but you left without hearing the full words!"
She came and sat next to him. Unknowingly resting her hand over his thigh, gently messaging as her big tear dropped from her eyes...
"maan"
"maan..." geets worry eyes looked deep in his, tears again threatening. She took a deep breath. Helping her self to build up a sentence that would explain everything. She surly couldn't see him so restless over a word that's not true.
"why you are not talking to me?" she questioned. Much as she is missing those moment of there life, she also dreading this present time. For the first time a realization have smacked her body how important maan is to her life and the pain he must be going through hearing those untruth words. "do you remember you told me... You don't need light to see me, to feel me... To know where I am..." she pleadingly looked at his face, waiting for that stone face to show some expression those love... "you can mahsoos me... Then why can't you feel that how worried is your geet now for you..." another drop of tear crashed on his lap.

Maan sat there in a frozen state, he loved her, of-course he knew well she is not lying. He have met and examine Many people with the feeling of lie and truth, he may not have the eyes to observe to come to an conclusion but the feeling always gives it way. But some weird reason her word feared him. Feared maan khurana, who lives his life In pitch black... A light dreads to walk by... & today that maan khurana is scared with the fear of her words. Fear of such word that will tear his heart apart.
"why are you here geet?"
He questioned rather in strange manner that geet never hard of. A emotionless voice. She have never hard him this cold. This strong with a thick wall between them. She felt distant. Like he was moving far way from her. "why are you talking like that?" geet questions in fear. What else can she do to show, those word meant nothing. Nothing at all.
"you didn't here the full word maan... I was about to tell them... I was..." she pleads.
"you have to leave."
"no! NO! No I won't leave. You are here what I will do there?" she stood up with anger yet fear clearly visible. "why won't you listen!"
"I trust you! Now go!"
"then why won't you talk to me like we always have... Why are you ignoring me?" she questions further. Shouting with his silent...

Maan closed his dark eyes. All he want was silent. Nothing else. Was that to much to ask. His anger was only building up and geet was helping him to suppress. Which will burst out on her any moment. "leave geet..." he whispered again slowly.
"no! No I won't leave until you come with me. Until you talk to me with love!"
Maan frustratingly stood up and walked in to the bedroom. He locked the door so geet can no longer interfere with his silent.
Geet rushed behind him, maan guessed with all the movements of her heavy jewelry. "maan... Maan" her lips curled with worry, she have never experienced this maan and don't have siltiest clue how to Handel. She called again, suppressing her hand against the long wooden door. Making noise hoping even with irritation he will open the door.
"maan I won't leave without you. Please open the door. I will sleep here in the cold. Please open the door!"

Maan closed his eyes, trying his best to relax and think through everything that have happen today. Her nonstop noise didn't make him relax instead it dragged his thought in to a different direction. Her forcefulness was giving him hint how worry she is for him. It touched his heart, it touched his mahsoos, the same mahsoos that was there this morning, yet when he remembers those words from her lips it only frighten him. What was about her that effected his though, his heart so much since the day he smelled her. The day her warm skin touched him, the day when she spoke with anger yet he could distinguish love, and today it was still there, everything was there then why was he so frighten to be fooled again by her love... For her mahsoos.

Maan did not reply instead staid quit, 1 hour passed, little by little her voice dropped down, he hard how her body crashed on to the floor, still faintly banging on the door, whispering his name. Those soft lips, she must be tired. Her mouth must be dying for water. Why she wasn't satisfying her thirst?

Maan drank his own saliva, the thought of her word kept ringing in his ears. And the confusion was far greater at this time being. His heart bleeds with the thought how she have not told her friends, how she was still ashamed. He would have understood this after there wedding, few weeks flowed there wedding. But now? Was she still ashamed. She say she is not, her action which only show how much geet cares for him. Then? Then what?

His eyes gave way with her voice, his name from her lips... It was soothing, almost he wanted to hold her, engulf her in the warmth that she loves, then why he couldn't. Why there was an unknown pain that he was looking for any possible way to sooth...

To say the truth his name from her sweet lips was enough, far better then anything. The way she was pleading, he knew now or later eventually he will give up, then why not now? Why don't he save geet from the tiredness of calling his name nonstop...

"geet!" maan snaps open his eyes. Only to discover black in black. There was no more noise, there was nothing, not even a movement of her jewelery. Maan worriedly stood up, and opens the door to hurry out but instead his long shoe bumps in to her lifeless body. A worry covered his face. He instantly picked her up and took her to the bed. It's 9pm...

The anger and pain was still inside him, suppressing little by little. Her this behavior won't help instead it was creating another torment.

Slowly one by one he took all her jewelery off. Her hot skin Only reminded there night after night and how he loved her with passion. "maan- ple-se op-en the door" geet mumbled in her sleep. Maan took her cloths off, it was too heavy. And it probably will irritate her too much. He walked to the cupboard and took one of his kurti and dressed her when geet opens her eyes. Seeing him so close she couldn't help her self to suppress her body in his embrace. She started to wimp instantly. "promise you wont do that ever again. Promise that you will never ignore me. Promise."

Maan was holding the kurti, without words he closed all the button. "sleep, it's getting late..."
"no... Not until you tell me that everything will be back to normal between us." she cups his face with care. Looking at him with desire... "maan, I only required some time to tell the truth and I never had the courage. Thats all. I have been trying, trying my best to tell them everything... But every-time something went wrong. ... Please..." her each word only made his pounding heart week...
"you need to sleep!"
"no, tell me that you are not mad."
"I am not. Now sleep..."
"no... I want you to express with love. I want my maan back"

She brought her self even closer, suppressing her body. Only a sheet of cotton was creating a distance, other then that everything was at it's place. Maan would not lye how her warmness was inviting him in, but her feeling of shame was dragging him back...

awsome update its really painful to see geet n maan like this but i really want maan to listen her properly for once when he is trusting her so much he knew somewhere that geet is not lieinh then for atleast because of their feeling of mahssos he should listen her once try to undesrtand her side of situation also i hope everything get back to normal in their life soon n hats off to u to write such good part of mahsoos the best one was maan's self thought 👍🏼 continue soon

thank god
finally u updated

oh that was superb keya😊👏👏
👏this new mhsooos is great
but it made me cry too 😭
ohh it pains to see them in pain.😭
both r right at thier place
but still unable to understand this mehsoos
i hope they will understand this sooner

plzzz give us next upd sooner.

feeling sorry for maan now..he cant even share with her what is going on in his mind

res

finaly
loved the update.
yaar maan ko jaldi manao aur plaese us kripa ko bhi jaldi bhagao.
now going.
gd nt every one.

awsome update safi... simply awsome... continue soon

Wow!! That was awesome update man. Your such an amazing writer.