Mahsoos- THREAD 5- NOTE PG 147

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Saru

@smallville

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Posted: 13 years ago

#451

Awesome!!!
I hope geet is able to convince maan !!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

Hi Keyama...thanks 4 da pm 4 parts 45-48! Read part 45-47 already commented! Jus reda parts 48 n 49 nw! Was emotional n intense! Sad n painful. Poor Maan! Maaneet confessed der love n r happy bt Maan overhears Geet! Maaneet talk n Maan leaves ! Geet goes after Maan! Kripa sees Geet in Khurana limo! Maaneet need to talk properly. Geet needs 2 prove her love! Well written! Sorry 4 late likes n commenst bt can only read wen I can! no IF @ wrk 😭 n dnt come on IF all dat tym..please understand!

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kuhu

@kuhu18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

awww that was very good feel little sad for both of them... but you leave the story at this point and say will not update regurly now you cant do that to us [better you do not leave us hanging like this at this stage]
edi... we know study comes first and we dont want to disturb you in that but at least give us land to stand and wait for you dont leave us at cliffhanger state 😊

Edited by kuhu18 - 13 years ago

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

superb update...eagerly waitin fr nextpart yaar...continue soon

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cyum321

@cyum321

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

awesome

let maan hear her out n than take any decision...

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#456

awsome update i hope ki geet maan ko samaza paye n maan samaz bhi jaye aur unki mu lear ho jaye pls update next part soon eagerly waiting for next update

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maahi zaidi

@zaidi98

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Nice update...
Wat wil happen next...:o

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#458

i hope all will soon be fine between them...

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#459

😕 Poor maaneet!both suffering!geet kind of deserve it 4 not telling earlier but maan Loved the part,u are great describing their gestures ,i even picture them in mind!thanks alotDo update more 😃

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Maya_P

@Maya_P

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#460

thanx for the update...Maan reaction is justified...i mean after all the mahsoos they shared.hearing that from her mouth could be so unbearable..and questioning everything they shared...i liked the line where Maan thinks about how she is another person when she is not with him...how she hasn't accepted him in society...now i'm eager to see how she will make Maan mahssos her and forgive her...actually i don't mind kirpa in the middle.as it will bring jealous Geet claiming Maan to be hers and do things that will bring them more closer...waiting for the next update

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