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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Sarzah wen is the next part coming !?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay, I know I am slightly, no actually, not slightly, but, quite late!
But believe me people, university orientations, and all the formalities are worse than actual classes!😕
I am really sorry for making you all wait, and I have such patient readers!😊 Wait, is this patience, or you all dont want me to update, because you have to read it?😕
Anyways, I have started typing the next chapter, and I will post it by Sunday night, since I have to be at the stupid university for the whole day tomorrow, and I dont think I will be human enough to update..
So, Sunday it is... till then, show me that you all are desperately waiting for the next chapter!😆
Love
Sarzah

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lol Sarzah :D
All the best with ur uni formalities.
Cant wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh alright I understand and will wait for ur update definitely !!!
Take ur time and thanxx for informing !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh dear...
pls come back soon...
nd dare u thnk dat v dnt wnt u 2 update...😡😡😡.
coz dats never gonna happen...
so b a gud grl nd update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

FANTASY

CHAPTER-35

The next morning Geet woke up with a slight headache. She sat up groggily in bed, looking around for her husband, who was nowhere to be seen. She grabbed the clock from the bedside table, and her eyes widened immediately, as she saw the time. It was half past nine.

Just as she was about to jump out of bed, the bathroom door clicked open, and Maan walked out, wearing only his jeans. He threw the towel on the bed, where it landed on Geet's head, and stood in front of the mirror, fixing his hair.

Geet got up angrily, with the towel, and walked towards Maan, who had clearly not seen her. Well, that's what she thought. As she neared him, he suddenly turned around, and pushed her back, only to catch her from falling, and held her like that. She gasped loudly, afraid of hitting the ground, while he continued staring at her, with a smirk.

" Good morning, Jaan. Did you sleep well?"he said, staring at her lips.

Geet slapped him lightly on his cheek, and threw the towel on his face, causing him to jerk himself and her straight.

" Rakkhiye aapka good morning aapke paas…it's already half past nine. Why didn't you wake me up, Maan?" she said, looking at him sternly.

" Well, for starters, paati permeshwar ka roop hota hain. One shouldn't hit him. And second, you were looking so cute while sleeping. I just couldn't bring myself to wake you up." he said, caressing her cheeks softly.

" Baare aaye, cute lagrahi thi.. chaliye jaayiye, mujhe naha na hain.. pata nahin sab kya soch rahe honge, itni der tak soti rahi, and I didn't even inform Pari and Naintara last night before you dragged me home." She quickly walked to the cupboard, and grabbed her clothes, heading towards the washroom.

" Arre, Geet, ruko, suno…" he said, stopping her by holding her wrist. She turned around impatiently, when he said, " Challo, main bhi aata hoon tumhare saath. Tumhe der ho rahi haina, toh main thoda madat kar deta hoon, challo…"

Geet stared at him angrily, and replied, " Aap naha chuke hain, Maan."

" Arre, koi baat nahin… dobara.." he replied, and started walking her towards the washroom, after grabbing his towel again, when Geet pushed him hard, and dashed into the washroom, as quickly as she could, slamming the door behind her.

" Maine aap jaisa lafanga insaan aapni saari zindagi mein nahin dekha!" she said, from the other side.

" Toh main toh tumhe dikhana hi chahta tha, Jaan. Lekin tumne hi nahin dekha!" he said, leaning against the door.

Smiling widely, he put on his shirt, and made his way out of the room.

" Good morning, Maan Veerji." Naintara, came from behind him, smirking.

Maan stopped, and stood still. She came in front of him, the smirk still plastered on her face, and said, " Kaal aap Geet ko yun achanak ghar kyun lekar aagaye? Aap ko toh sabar karna hi nahin aata."

Maan clenched his fists, and stared at her.

" Keep your nose out of my business", he gritted between his teeth maliciously.

Naintara laughed loudly, and said, " Arre, aap toh naraz ho gaye… main toh baas yunhi puch rahi thi. Nahin batana toh mat batayiyen."

She left, as Maan stared after her with furious eyes.

" Kya baat kar rahe the aap usse, Maan?" Geet walked towards him, and stood in front, facing him.

" Kuch nahin…" he said, his teeth still clenched together, and started walking away, when Geet held his hand.

" Maan, aap itne gusse mein kyun hain? Naintara ne kuch kaha kya aapko?" she asked softly, looking into his eyes.

" Jab maine kaha ki koi baat nahin hain, toh tum meri baat sunti kyun nahin ho? Ya, you don't trust me anymore?" he said, angrily, and then lowered his eyes immediately in guilt, as Geet let go of his hand, and walked away, leaving him standing alone.

" Ek normal baat pucho, toh gusaa ho jaate hain… bhaar mein jaaye, aaj se koi sawaal hi nahin karungi unhe." She muttered to herself, as she reached the breakfast table, where everyone was getting ready to eat.

Vicky, Pari, Dev and Daadima murmured good mornings, while Naintara stared at Geet slyly. As she sat down, Maan arrived, and took his seat beside her, looking at her guiltily. She avoided looking in his direction, and started talking normally with everyone else.

" Geet, tum achanak ghar kyun aa gayii thi kal?" Pari asked.

" Woh.." Maan started to say, when Geet interrupted, " Woh, actually, Pari, main bohut thak gayii thi, and I didn't want you guys to ruin your fun for me. Isiliye, I called up Maan and asked him to bring me home."

Maan held Geet's hand under the table, when she slapped it away rudely. He looked at her pleadingly, trying to calm her anger, but she refused to even look at him. Just then, Daadima said, " Humne aap logon ko yahaan farmhouse pe isiliye bulaya hain, because I want you all to know something. We have a party tonight, and I am going to announce the big news there."

" Kya news hain, Daadima?" Vicky asked, when the elderly lady just shook her head, and said, " Woh toh aap logon ko aaj raat party mein pata chalega.."

After breakfast, as everyone sat in the living room, Maan excused himself, and went upstairs into his room, only to see Geet sitting in front of the dressing table, brsuhing her hair. She saw him, and raised herself to leave, but Maan quickly closed and locked the door, standing against it firmly.

" Geet, I'm sorry. Pata nahin mujhe kya ho gaya tha, and maine tumse waise baat kyun ki..I am really sorry, Jaan." He said, as she stood in front of him with her hands crossed over her chest.

" It's fine." She started to move towards the door, when Maan held her wrist.

"Geet, when Naintara told you that I was once in love with her, why didn't you ask me anything about it?" he asked quietly,as she stood with her back to him.

Geet turned around slowly, looking at him carefully.

" Should I ask you? Is there anything that you have to tell me about that, Maan?" she said.

Maan let go of her hand, and moved away from her. She stared at him, as he went to stand by the window, staring out without seeing anything.

" You don't have to answer that, Maan. Maybe you think I don't, but, I trust you." Geet said stiffly, and opened the door to leave when he said,

" I don't deserve your trust, Geet. Don't trust me." Geet turned back immediately, closing the door behind her, and walked up to him.

" What do you mean, Maan?" she asked desperately, turning him around.

He looked everywhere else, except her. Geet put her hands on his face, trying to make him look at her, when he whispered painfully," Naintara was saying the truth."

Precap: "She was your first love, Maan" she said, with tears in her eyes, " koi aapna pehla pyaar nahin bhul sakta!"

" Mujhe lagta hain, ke you should go back to her… because maybe you still have feelings for her!"


Please hit the like button, and comment!

Love you all

Sarzah


P.S. You all know my quota by now, right?😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaayyt me first at last 😆

Amazing part yaar.
Full of emotions. 👏
hehe loved the line " aap jaisa lafunga nahin dekha " and Maan' s reply was too good 😆
Oops Maan snapped at geet because of NT
Yaar what is this precap. Satya nash 😆 Geet koi NT se kaise pyaar kar sakta 😲 😆
Maan was a fool at that time 😆
Cant wait for more dear 😃
Edited by sonu4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeh kya kiya...NT and Maan...even as an ex...no yaar...it is too hard to digest
I did not like it yaar...somebody outside family is ok like Sameera is most FFs but NT...just hard to believe
Precap looks scary yaar...yeh kya kitta
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update !! :)
Hate NT
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG what was that
Maan & NT are ex...i am not able to digest that
Precap...its so scary...now what is going to happen
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

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