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Posted: 13 years ago
i think it will shatter maan more
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
eagerly waiting for next update
plz give update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear...
iam eager to know the next part...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh! geet disconnects the ph hmmm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Are we going to get the update today??
Luv
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 Update.. I hope Maan understands that Geet doesn't expect him to call or inquiry about her..
She has lost all her hopes on him..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 17

Maan heard all the conversation between yash and Geet since Yash took the phone to kitchen as Yash was handling phone to Geet and Geet was not taking it.

Maan is in complete shock on hearing what ever Geet said and she switched his phone off'. Geet in no case was ready to believe he could call her'.. he felt a deep pain realising that' she just disconnected the call he had done'.. Geet who would never say no or turned him down for anything today disconnected his phone' yes he realized' she did not believe it could be him in any case and that gave him more pain'

"What have I done'." He was not getiing the courage to call her again as his thought again wandered to what he has done'.

He again started analyzing his behaviour with Geet' the more he thought the more pain he felt'. The more he realized how selfish he has been throughout in their relation and how selfless she had been'. How contrast'. He felt deep pain' pain that why did he do that and he had no reason'.

His mind then went to Yash

"What the hell what that boy doing in Geet's flat at this hour'."

"No I trust Geet'. She loves me and only me' but that boy, what are his intensions"

For the first time he felt fear not for himself but for Geet'..

"This boy has been after her'. He wanted to marry her and now he was there in London in her flat'.. Geet is so inocent"

"yes she is innocent' she said me yes for marriage on my one proposal, knowing how I was with her'. Geet you loved me so much main kyun nahi samajh paya hamara rishta'."

This kind of guilt feeling kept on creeping in his mind in different way for different incidents

He had to call now, to make sure Geet was safe'.

In London at the same time

Yash:"are yu crazy or what' just check the number"

Geet could in no case believe Maan will take so much effort to find her number and call her'.. yes there can be one reason only if he really did so'. He wanted to snatch away even the freedom of few days that she has got.

She checked the number and yes it was him'.. She felt scared; she really needed few months so that she can return back with strong will, so that she can stand his torture.

Yes, it was a big torture; she loved him madly and he hated her madly and nothing can be greater pain than to be hated everyday by someone who you love from so depth of your heart.

Geet just hoped Maan gets angry and not call her back, she had no intention of calling him back.

"but what if he calls back"

"No'No, I have to be strong, Babaji just give me strength' I need to stay here' just three months is what I want babaji"

Maan needed to call her' he was upset with Yash's presence there

Yash has left by now and Meera was in deep sleep but Maan's call has taken away all Geet's sleep and chain.

The phone rings and Geet picks it up,making sure she will not be week'.

"Hello"

"Geet'.Maan this side.. how are you"

"What does it matter to him, however I am"

"Fine'..how are you'."

"Not very good' who Yash tumhare flat me kya ker raha tha" his anger on Yash brought out the angry tone and he regretted just after the moment he spoke

"Meera and I called him for dinner'." Geet was really upset that now Maan went ahead in not even trusting her

"Ohh I don't mean that'. I was just worried"

This tone of his was new to Geet'.he always confuses her but she will be strong this time.

"He is just a friend in our group" she hated to give any explaination to him, but just to respect the relation of husband and wife she said it.

Geet's tone was new for Maan'. She had never been so direct in her talk with him'

All he knew was she always talked to sooth his anger and thus she always talked in a tone to sooth his anger

But he wanted to meet her madly and bring her back and give her happiness and love.

"Geet I am coming to London'."

Geet really feel very hurt once again that now Maan don't even trust her charectar.

She can't stop from saying

"Ohh '. Tou bass yahi bacha tha na' you don't trust me' no problem aa jaiye' maine aapka sab kuch aapnaya hai abb aapko mujhpe bharosa nahi hai na'. yeh bhi seh loongee"

"Geet tum galat samajh rahee hoo' main to" but Geet was so hurt she didn't want to hear anything further that would hurt her more

"App aaiyee Maan'main aapka wait karoongee" and she cut the phoe in shock. She didn't even realize his tone.

She had taken everything from Maan'. All his anger, his rudeness, the humiliation and now distrust' she felt broken once again'. How he can come up with new ways to break her every time she wonders'. How much she tries but he is able to break her.

Maan is all confused'.

"Geet galat samajh rahee ho'. Tumpe kab shak kiya maine'. Galtee to sab main kerta hoon' tumhe takleef di hai maine' aur uss ehsaas me jal bhi raha hoon"

Maan is all confused'.. Now if he goes to London, Geet is definitely going to think he don't trust her and she will be in pain'. She will not believe in his words'.

"And ofcourse why would she trust my words now'. All I have given her is pain"

Maan madly wants to meet Geet but he is in delima'. If he goes Geet is going to be hurt and chances are she will never trust him if he goes'.

"I have always found ways to get away with my frustration and restlessness and used Geet'.. In that I have only hurt her"

He thinks if he goes to London to meet her he will definitely feel better' he can also bring her back but it will again give pain to Geet'. He had always thought of himself and gave pain to Geet to ssoth himself' "No not anymore'. I will not give you anymore pain Geet'. I know this will be a punishment for me' a big punishment' staying away from you but now I can't afford to pain you for my own self Geet"

Maan then realizes, he doesn't even know for how long this punishment is going to be' but he has decided he will take it.

He again calls Geet to tell her he will not be coming and to know his period of punishment.

Geet is still not able to sleep'. It's almost 5 am in India and around 12 am in London.

Phone rings again' Geet knows it's Maan

"Hello"

"Geet don't cut the phone' just listen to me"

"Ji"

"see Geet I trust you ' main London nahi aa raha'. But just tell me tum wahan kitne dino ke liye hoo"

Geet is surprised by his tone' she knows he is faking all just as he had faked when he was propsing her on his knees'

"3 months approximately'."

"WHAT??? "

And the phone itself gets disconnected.

Here is the beautiful song Suggested by basicquestion1

to show Maan's condition.
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wOusT18pI9Y&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
Next to be continued
Thanks to all of you for your encouragement. Keep liking and commenting.
Will keep trying to give you nice updates.
--Anu
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
loved it
Maan buth sahi ho raha hai
Maan beta kiya hua...Geet ka naya roop dek kar
Aaahhh!!!!!!!! Maan ko zoor kar jahtka lag gaya
I always wanted Geet to give this jahtka to Maan
Now he has to regain her trust first and than make her believe in his love
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

its pay back time now ... like the saying goes ... so you sow so you reap ...

he has inflicted so much pain in her ... now its his turn to bear it all ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
both wonderful
geet so broken can't believe anything maan say to her
wonder how old geet i'll be back
craving more
thnx

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