Her complete submission-Maaneet FF#2 - Page 26

Great update..
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!

Originally posted by: SONU_29

awesome, superb part👏👏.

it going more interesting than i thought😉

poor maan😆😆😆

maan can't think dat geet going away frm him for 1 WEEK den hw can he bare to stay without geet for 3 MONTHS?????????😆😆

waitingg for maan's raction wen he will know whole thruth k she will stay @ london for whole 3 MONTHS😍😍

precap is interesting😊

maan don't forget she is also MRS.MSK' so u hv to try hard for know abt her wareabouts😆😆

continue soon

Yes for sure it's not going to be an easy task for him...

Originally posted by: Water.

Maan's POV:

The Moment

The Moment!
The moment had arrived
As it would have eventually come
It arrived without a knock on the front door of his heart
It arrived without a notification or a messenger
It arrived so suddenly that he could not fathom its changes
But it had arrived
The moment had arrived.

It arrived
Screaming to emerge from his heart and his soul
Bringing along the subtle changes in his heart
Taking him by surprise completely
As far as he could remember
It was just yesterday, when he shined in his ego and arrogance
While today brought the restlessness, the fear and the possible separation

...still typing...will do it tomorrow though...going to sleep now

Great Great start of the poem... am waiting for whole of it dear...

Originally posted by: payalpari

awesome...

now maan is suffering the same way geet suffered now he will understand her value in his life ...

he is scared just with the thought of living 1 week without her what about her she loved him even after knowing that he will never love her back in her life time then also she loved him unconditionally ...she never complained ...

Yeah lots yet to realise...

Originally posted by: tellyme

Great Great start of the poem... am waiting for whole of it dear...

will do it later on tonite...late nite...rite now it is 11:30 AM here possibiilty in 12-16 hours...have classes and den working till late...

Awesome update dear..

Read the whole FF in one go.. WOnderful work dear..

Please continue soon and add me in ur PM list

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

loving to read maan's restlessness and pain without geet being around

and not able to get to know anything abt geet is killing him...

the same room he is getting suffocated without her now...

cant wait for the next when he knows that she is off for 3 months...i wud love it if it extends her for entire proj tenure...

waiting for the next eagerly

He made her suffocated there with his prescence and behaviour in same room and now her abscnce is suffocting him

i found the link of ur FF on the daily FF update/list post and read it in one go