ArHi FF: Highway to Hell, note pg 147 - Page 51

Originally posted by: sharneil92

vidhya.

very surprisingly, the moment i sensed the storm brewing between Anjali and Khushi, I knew it i'd LOVE the chapter. somehow, i dont like this Anjali. she seems... weird. I love this Arnav. I love this Khushi. and I loved how this chapter turned out to be. like really.

now i have a feeling, that this was supposed to happen. or else, it would have been too smooth. too many things could not have been resolved if it went smooth. this was the "jhatka" that Khushi Kumari Gupta needed. she still loves them. i mean her family. why else would she call herself Gupta? she's just blinded by hatred for what they'd done to her. and Arnav asking her to see reason, was what was needed. because she'd hear no one else, but him. just like, he'd listen to her more than anyone else from now on. 😳

AMAZING CHAPTER! i have to say, this is my favourite chapter after the "tai chi" chapter! 😉

Thanks! Anjali is a bitter woman...she's been through too much. She needs to change...and start living a little. And I think she will..very soon.

And as you said...this had to happen...the course of true love never did run smooth and all that😊
And ASR and KKG will manipulate the heck out of each other..but they'll end up together...never fear.

I haven't caught up with your latest chapter..will do so today.

Originally posted by: alice54

Great update...but heart wrenching towards the end🥺...i want Kushi to see buaji atleast once...continue soon...

Thanks! And she will...never fear.

Originally posted by: lexaxel

U write really well Vidya...its very easy to get carried away & go overboard with the melodrama but u got it just right...kudos👍🏼.

As for the story...well for all the sophistication Khushi exhibited outwardly she has never gotten over the hurt & humiliation her family & people she called her own threw at her. And her relationship with Arnav was not platonic so I dont blame her 1 bit for tearing into him. I hope this outburst of hers cleansed up some of her bitterness atleast.

I'm curious...I'm always curious😆...did u plan the story out this way or did the story take its own turn. I ask because bcoz it happens to me...I plan to write in a particular way but my fingers will have a mind of their own & they just take my story away from me.

Hi Nancy! Thanks! You nailed it with Khushi's emotions. She's not over it yet. I think she'll get t out of her system eventually.

Naaahh..I didn't plan the story. I just write whatever occurs to me on that particular day. I do try to read my earlier chapters so I don't goof up😆! My approach to writing is like my approach to life...each day as it comes.

Originally posted by: afia1987

Can i just say i just read Chapter 9 - the poem you wrote is superb..

Can believe you are mashAllah so talented superb writting .. i'm impressed

keep it up and never give up writting you have the talent :)

Thanks! You're sweet to say such things. 😊

Great Vidhya!

Even if there were a DISlike button, I wouldn't hit it. Simply bcoz your story portrays a realistic view of relationships and life is not always a bed of roses. It doesn't always move ahead the way we like. It was sad, yes. But it wsa the truth. And if Khushi did go to see buaji ever, I wouldn't want to see a 'my last wish thing' bcoz that would completely break Khushi. I'd like it if she battled it out on her own and also if ASR understood her and gave her some time and space.

Loved it!

Ooh! Chp. 14 is up as well! Me off to read it! :)

Originally posted by: madmaxine

Thanks Badra! Call me Vidhya. Glad you are enjoying it. Keep reading.😊 I think I did PM you the latest offering. Let me know if I didn't.

hi vidhya ...

thanx for the pm yaar ... was waiting for it desperately😉 ..

god tht was so good ... perfect ..

- - badra

Voila!

The update was fab! The past is now clear, or maybe, somewhat of it. And Khushi is so lucky to have 4 guys who're so damn possessive about her and caring towards her. The resolutions of the threesome were hilarious! And now that decisions are made and all 4 are headed to RM, it tells me the nest update is gonna be titled Mahabharat at RM! 🤣 🤣 🤣
And yes, your knowledge of fashion always leaves me impressed. Oh well, everything about your updates does. You've made me a permanent fan of your, Vidhya! :)

Cheers,
Tia

amazin chapter...eagerly waitin for d next one..brind it on babe