ArHi FF: Highway to Hell, note pg 147

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

The poem was cute! Really, no jokes :D

I loved the update! And oh my, she refused him 😆

Can't wait to see what happens next, update soon! <3

xoxo

Aanya

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Tia

@tes_v1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Ah! That was once again, fabulous! And was this your first attempt at poetry? Yes or no, whatever, I truly loved it and enjoyed reading it. And Khushi's reply was so funnily cute! Do continue soon.

P.S: Why have you not edited the topic with the chapter number and date? I guess, you forgot. :)

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mirnalini

@mirnalini

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

It was a very sweet poem!

Keep up the good work!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

loved this part. different but really good.i'm glad khushi didnt go, but sent a note instead.

xxx

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#275

OMG!!! Vidhya...I Just Loved it...Loved it to the tip of my toes.🤗🤗🤗🤗 U r soo Huggable. I am having the silliest smile on me...AWW!! Khushi u have to budge a bit...he is chooo chweet..Arnav u have to hugg Vidhya, for this.

Vidhya...I don't have words to praise you...Khushi has read it thrice.I will be reading the whole night.You are just Brilliant.

I Bow down...Girl , I Bow down!!!

Muuuwwwaaannnh!!!!! Impressive!!!Totally floored!!!

And Yes!!...whenever he is going to bring the 'Actions' in place...it would mindboggling & smoking!!Haiii!!!😳

Ash.

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#276

Fabulous!👏The poem was cute and romantic,Thanks👍🏼

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Hey!!! so nice to see you Writing for ArHi

I Read a couple of stories on The PKYEK Forum

It's a really lovely Story You Got there Dear

Pls PM Me the nxt time u update

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: Smileyface
reserved...will edit after reading =)

edited**

hey great ff! it is absolutely amazing! i love ur writing! and omggg i absolutely love this new KKG! THe way she gave back to everyone was great! And aww her story was a bit sad but soulful! Can't wait for her kids to enter the story and for them to meet ASR!

THe only thing i don't see happening...is her behavior with payal (don't get me wrong...i think u portrayed her so well) but i just don't see her being that rude to her lol...however i love it =D

Love the friendship she has with Aadit and Freddy haha! its adorable!!!

LOVE IT!

continue soon and plz pm me when u update =)

thanks!

hershi

Many thanks! I Glad you liked it. Sry you don't like her being rude to Payal. Maybe she will change a little in the future..one can always hope😃! Thanks for reading and commenting Harshi!

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

wowww.just loved it..its v good..truely so lovely i read it again and again.th epoem..im short of word to describe how it is..sooo good.try harder asr

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#280

I want to thank everyone who commented on the last chapter and made it a point to say they liked the new and improved strong Khushi. I'm sorry, I am unable to reply to all you individually. Unfortunately, work does get in the way of life😊! But I read them and enjoy them, and cherish them all. 😃