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shaam91

@shaam91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

oh..she is with someone else now..:(

well ill trust you on this lyraa..:P

and as always fab writing man!!

love..mwah!

Edited by shaam91 - 13 years ago

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Really good. Please continue and PM me when you do

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

hi dear

lovely start, beautiful description👏

cant wait for khushi to enter raizada mansion...

its gona be really interesting, looking forward to it

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

hope this is a Arhi love story...and perhaps a Aryan-Anjali love story

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

nice one

do pm me next time u update

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

i'm happy that khushi is being treated proper. arnav better win her back somehow, lol

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

she's with... ARYAN? i feel like getting him married off to buaji or something! leave KKG alone! :'(

not fair..

but you do have a very poetic way with words! i like it! 😳

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Badra

@SublimeSanaya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

as always yaar fab update ... chapter one itself is mind-blowing .. wonder how the rest will be 😉 .. no doubt magnificent ...

the begin is fab .. i felt as if i was truely walking in a beach ... it is a wonderful feeling.. thanx for making me feel .. havet been to a beach since atleast 6months .. anyways back to ur update

Aryan .. nice name .. nice guy .. seems to be a sweetheart .. he seems like a guy tht i will have a hard time hating😉 .. i know he is perfect and loves kushi a lot .. but hun he isnt ASR ... so i am still a bit biased to ASR ... anyways loved this specific sentence

He was the reason she breathed and little did she know that he prayed every day hoping he would one day become the reason for her to breathe.

wow tht is so meaningful ... but wht to do tht right is already given to ASR ..😉 .. she might be the reason she breathed .. but Arnav will be the reason for her to breath ,,, it is simply amazing yaar ...

btw loved the cosy communication btwn Aryan and Kushi .. the hug was sweet .. and the fact tht kushi didnt say i love u back .. is also nice😉 ... but she reminds tht he is supposed to come and ask her hand in marriage ... 😉

The way Aranam=v is behaving is also wonderful .. he is restless .. poor soul has suffered a lot .. seems to have lived in her thoughts ... feels a bit bad as Arnav had to suffer but i know it is imp tht he too suffers ...

will see .. love will finds its way ...

and as Aryan isnt coming with kushi ,, will ASR think tht kushi is still available and build sand castles .. anyways will see wht u are upto .. dont keep us waiting too long ...

so much things are still going in my mind ,,, but as it is the st chapter ... i will cut u slack 😉 ...

so see u around .. sugar

- - badra

Edited by 143badra - 13 years ago