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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Go ahead dr. .update soon n pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
pls cntinue soon!!!!
n thnx fr the pm!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Hi sweety! thanks for mentioning me but as Badra said the pleasure was indeed mine🤗

so u started at a point where the story could go anywhere in any direction..so many possibilities..so many expectations..so many fears..it is a point where all of us ArHi fans love and hate with equal strengths..the moment where Arnav took Khushi to heaven n hell in a matter of minutes...

so here u have explored the aspect of Arnav finding out about Shyaam and lashing out at Khushi and taking revenge from her by staining her name..destroying her life..taking further steps down the same road where Shyam initiated..but due to completely different reasons..may be out of love..or out of pain..towards his sister or towards Khushi herself..

of the entire chapter the few lines that made me cringe were "
But it hadn't been only arnav's mistrust that had brought her here, it was that night when Shyam had destroyed her... it was the night she didn't remember."i dread even the meaning of it n hope against hope that it is not what it apparently seems to be..

"It had almost been fifteen days since that night when Arnav had almost kissed her at the pool side." and reading this line and then coming back to the prologue..seems during these 15 days everyone got to know about shyam and blamed Khushi including Arnav...but the prologue says "To meet that one person she had loved and lost, only to realize that her love was returned." that he soon figures out or finds out that she had no hand in all that happened other than as just another victim in the path of destruction Shyam wove..

what i'm curious to know is "
But it was a lifetime too late. Her life was no longer her own. " what this specific line means...has someone else entered in her life...or has someone entered his...or is it the fateful night of destruction she talks about, the night about which she is as much as in the dark as everyone else is..

so u have definitely managed to intrigue me with the prologue and the rolling out of the story...Do continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Please continue...story sounds very interesting
Many thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Fab Start.. Loved it very much.. Please continue soon.. I am waiting for update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
hi Please add me to your pm list great writing please carry on

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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
i loved it...please continue :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
emotins were written out beautifully. interesting. really want to know what happens next
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is so beautiful! Love your writing and the way you portray one's emotions. YOu have your way around with words and I applaud you for that. It's really intensifying! Continue SUPER SOON! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
oh my god. did she suicide??? that's very unlike KKG! okay, now i'm eager to know what happens...

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