first of all hun ... so so sorry for nt commenting earlier .. or rather being this late to comment ... hope i am forgiven ... see i am having a doggy face here with the ears down😉 ... i'll make tht i am forgiven ...
and another thing i couldnt just comment could i😉 ... i dont think tht would do justice for such a wonderful update😉 .. and as u are more than a simple writer for me 😳 😉.. wht were u thinking😆 .. i mean u are such a wonderful friend ... i have to put in the extra effort ...i think i owe u atleast tht much ... so it does take a bit more time ...
so here goes the comment for chapter 3 ... hope u like it .. do let me know how it sounds ..
wow u gave a whole new meaning to wht memories can be .. never imagined memories with all the words mentioned ... sounds as if Arnav had gone through hell .. unknown to anyone but himself .. so he had being living in hell ... burning from it every single sec ...😉 ... feel sorry for him .. though he might mt be deserving it .. but cannt help myself ...
Hating her, because he had missed her. Missed those eyes, missed that smile, missed the childish pranks. Missed her so much that he wanted to cry out the void to the skies
wow ... tht was magnificent ... arnav sounds so heart broken .. so he is been so hard on her because he is head over heals in love for her ... the pain tht he has gone through seems to be enormous ..and as usual Arnav's only emotion is anger .. so wht ever he feel he will release it in the form of anger ... god loved the above quote .. so he admits tht he misses her .. but he doesnt admit tht he loves her .. though he does and he has no idea tht he does or he is being his typical self and sticking to ignore his feeling ...
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thus para makes me wonder how far would have she being hurt to try to commit suicide and then to live a second life and to go through the same feeling tht once lead her to take tht step ... she must be going through hell ... she must be more broken than anyone ... she have the ans but .. according to u it would break all the other people who care .. so she thinks tht it is easier to die thousand and one times every single sec than seeing the ones' she care in pain .. so typical kushi .. dr u have every well used the words ... and u have revealed tht kushi had this close to death and does it means tht kushi had been .. how do i put it .. unconscious or unable to remender for about 6 months .. or rather had it taken her around 6months to break up the shattered pieces and then call her sis .. if so tht suggests the gap in time .. and also the fact tht she have talked to kushi only .. was it because she was too broken to talk to anyone else or is there a different reason .. anyways will see ... wht u have in store regarding this part in ur next updates ..
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love anjali for making them atleast be alone for a moment 😉...
"Meet me outside in five minutes. I don't have all day" Arnav said to khushi and walked off.- - typical Arnav .. god he has nothing good to say .. why do he bother to open his big mouth .. he tries to hurt her by his words but he never realizes tht he is receiving it back with interest .. as every single word the hurts kushi hurts him more .. he is such an idiot .. but a sexy one 😉...
"My dupatta is stuck"- - love the dupatta ... even Arnav's vehicle has missed her 😉
He leaned towards her, so close that she could feel his breath on her cheek. Nervously she closed her eyes and tried to steady her beating heart. His head was bent and she could feel the tickle of his hair on her cheek. He gently put his arm across her and khushi sat back tensed. He opened the door and released the dupatta and shut it back, checking the lock and pulled himself back and despite of herself khushi felt a tingle of disappointment. - - wow alone in the vehicle and tht close how could they control each other .. while reading this specific part i wishes them to kiss .. will see whether my wish come true .. anyways cannt help myself from imagining stuff.. i have no control over my mind 😉.. they say tht empty mind is devil's work shop .. so at least my mind isnt empty 😉...
As if sensing it, he bent close again. This time she looked at him only to find his eyes on her. He grabbed the seat belt and fastened it around her. He then watched her face, brushed a strand of hair from her cheek with his fingers and tucked it behind her ear. Khushi felt her breath quicken.
"What are you doing?" She whispered her eyes wide and questioning.
" Ssshhh" he said quietly
And then he kissed her.
omg .. the most awaiting moment .. i loved this .. so sweet .. it sounds so innocent and pure and u were telling tht u arent good at writing romance😉 .. tht was so sweet and loved it .. wht could i expect from a M&B fan 😉.right .. nothing less than this for sure .. .. pls add more and more stuff like this .. even if it is a dream it doesn't matter .. anyways tht wish might be fulfilled in ur OS .. i have to read them next ... back to this story .. he kissed her ... i am delighted is an understatement ... sad it wasnt near the pool😭 ... but gald it happened 😉...
"It doesn't mean anything to me. It's just my way of telling you that if you have any illusions that I might fall for your fake innocence, then you are mistaken. You don't affect me one bit." Arnav said ignoring the flicker of hurt that passed in her eyes. -- man he is unbelievable ... this much ego .. he is so full of himself .. i felt like punching him .. to knock some sense into tht thick skull of his .. this act of his is going to ruin him one day .. he is digging his own grave ... wht is he is trying to prove .. tht he doest love kushi or isnt affected by her.. idiot😆 .. will see .. how long can he hide his emotions .. and he will lose her if he continues this .. and guess tht it is a part of ur plan😉 .. i guess he has already lost her ... maybe temporarily 😉 ...
Letting the sadness reside far deep inside her to reach, to touch or to be seen. Wrapped in the memories of the moments that were beautiful. Almost too beautiful to be real. But those moments were not whole.., never whole. Perhaps they were never meant to be. They would just linger in her eyes.. sometimes as a wish, sometimes as a tear. Moments that were meant to be always incomplete. Always unfinished. - - god as usual nicely done .. fab ending .. how do words make this much of sense when u write .. i dont think anyone else could have said it any better than this
so overall comment - - tht was a magnificent update .. so fulfilling ... unique piece of work ... so wht do u say .. like my comment .. hope u do ... and pls keep up the good work .. will be waiting for ur next update ...
so will see wht u have in store for us .. waiting for a breath taking update .. any again sorry for the late comment .. hope this comment make up for the time taken
so see u around
tc
xoxo
- - badra
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
