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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-14....K felt that she'll faint.B:I'll get kumud back.
Bajaj goes.K gets depressed.K thinks:the truth I tried 2 4get is haunting me.oh god!

Bajaj goes home.Apo*na stands there with burning eyes:Mr.bajaj,what r u upto?I'm talking about ur relation with kumud.how cud u trap a girl who must b seen as ur daughter?that girl is not bad.she is after u 4 money.
B gets angry & slaps her:stop talking nonsense again.
A:u beat me
B:I'll again slap u if u talk bad about my daughter.
A:ur daughter?
B:yes,u r doing a sin by gossiping about me & kumud .bcoz she's my daughter,my own blood.
A was shocked:kumud is the daughter of the famous business man Abhay Kapoor.
B:no,b4 the public abhay is her father.but the truth is that I'm her father.
B goes. A cries:kusum..so my real enemy is u?

Apo*na meets kusum at a place. A:Mr.Bajaj told that he's kumud's real dad.i want 2 no whether he's lying 2 escpe from the rumour of having affair with kumud.tell me kusum,was he telling the truth that he is kumud's real dad?
Kusum weeps:yes,
A was shocked:enuff.so u both were lovers?then why did'nt u both get married?u married abhay with Mr.Bajaj's baby?
K:u r misunderstanding us.
A:what misunderstanding?
K:plz listen 2 me.
A goes.K cries:whats happening 2 us?

Apo*na arranged sum ppl 2 2 kill kumud:I don't want kumud 2 b an obstacle 2 our family.so kill her.
Those guys go.Rishi hears it. R:mama,why did u tell them 2 kill kumud?was the rumours correct about kumud & papa that they r in luv?
A:no,the truth is that kumud is Mr.Bajaj's & kusum DEshmukh's daughter.
R:what?then Mr.Abhay Kapoor?
A cries.R becomes angry with bajaj ,kumud & kusum.

Rishi goes 2 Abhay's office room. A:I did'nt understand u.
R:I'm Rishi.Rishab Bajaj's son.
Abhay was shocked.He thinks:oh god!bajaj's son..the terrible thing I did'nt want 2 happen is going 2 take place?
R:do u no my dad?
A was speechless. R:I'll tell u if u don't know.bcoz I think u r innocent & os getting cheated by ur wife.my dad is ur wife's ex-bf.
A is shocked. R:I hope u'll digest another horrible truth that kumud is not ur daughter,but my dad's daughter.that's why my dad appointed kumud in his office.
A is shocked.he thinks:kumud is working in bajaj's office?oh!I did'nt no.if kusum nos that …how can she tolerate it?
R:1 thing u make sure.kumud will b sent 2 another world soon.
A was stunned.R goes.
Kumud's cell phone rings.K sees kshitij's no & she switched off the ph.Ks who was standing on the opposite direction becomes sad.The ppl sent by Apo*na cums near kumud & grabs her hand.K screams.Ks gets shocked.


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Posted: 19 years ago
#42

arre post next part so I'll read....I'm waiting...

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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
PART-15....Kshitij beats them & they run away.Kumud's eyes r full of tears.
Kshtij:get inside my car.its not safe 2 b here.
K:why do u care 4 me?leave me alone.
Ks:kumud plz..
Ks forcefully pushes into is car & drives 2 another place. K:what r u doing?where r u going ?
They reach another place where no 1 is there.K:I want 2 go home.how can I sit with u alone in this evening?its already dark.
Ks:I can understand ur feelings.everygirl gets scared in this situation.but bwlieve me kumud.i've no bad intention.i want 2 marry with our parents' permission.b4 that I won't behave badly with u.bcoz I luv u that much.
K was surprised.Ks:I no that u believe what u saw in the disco club.kali is crazy about me.i tried 2 make her understand that I don'y luv her.but still she is after me.nothing else kumud.i luv u.
K:I'm sorry kshitij.
K looks at ks' eyes. Ks' fingers go thru her face. Song:kuch to {kal ho na ho}

Kusum is tensed:its so late.kumud has'nt cum yet.
Abhay:don't worry kusum.kumud wil cum soon.she's smart.
K:however smart she is,certain circumstances can do anything 2 her.
A:what r u tensed about?
K:I hid a secret from u 4 not making u upset.kumud is working in Mr.Bajaj's office.
A was shocked:so u new it.
K:u new it?
A:2day I realised that truth.
K:I'm scared whether he'll snatch her away.
A thinks about rishi telling that he'll send kumud 2 aother world.A becomes upset.
Ks drops K 2 her house. Kusum goes near her:kumud,r u ok?
K:ya mama,I'm alright.why r u this much tensed?I'd lot of work 2day.that's why I became late.
K thinks:no need of telling mama the truth.she'l b upset.
A becomes happy 2 see K.A:how did u cum?by taxi?
K was speechless. Kusum:Mr.Bajaj dropped u?
A was shocked. Kus:how many times did I tell u not 2 b close 2 him?
K:I came by taxi.
A-K r relived.
K thinks:how can I tell that kshitij dropped me.
K goes. Kusum:abhay..that bajaj is so cruel..
A:we can't blame him,bcoz he's trying 2 get his daughter no?
K is stunned;no,kumud's dad is u abhay.only u..

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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
fabulous
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keep it up
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
hey Jasmine!!!

Good start with the fan fiction ... its really fabulous 😆

I just came back from watching kkusum .. they finally aired here in canada.. but i missed the first and second episode 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Fantastic..... 👏
plzzz cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
PART-16..Abhay's eyes r full of tears:kusum,why did kumud take b'th as my daughter?
Kusum:but kumud is ur daughter abhay.
K hugs A & comforts.

Kumud gets x'mas uncle's message:Kumud,b careful while u fall in luv.its dangerous.
K mails back:don't worry uncle.i was misunderstading my luver.he's very nice.

Apo*na talks on oh:what?u did'nt kill kumud?dammed!
She turns back & is shocked 2 see Bajaj there.B slaps her:how dare u try 2 harm my daughter?u can't do anything 2 her while I'm alive.
A:ya,I did so,otherwise I'll lose u.
B:u'll lose me only if u harm kumud.why don't u understand my feelings?
A:ok,I understand ur sentiments 2wards kumud.but why did'nt u marry kusum & had kumud with u?why did u marry me?do u hav any affair with kusum now?
B:I've no connection with kusum.
B goes.

Kusum:Abhay,we shud'nt allow Mr.Bajaj 2 hav kumud.so we shud get her married soon.
A:yes.

Kusum & abhay show kumud sum guys' photos. K:whom do u like more?
K becomes upset.A notices it:what happened kumud?u did'nt like any1?
K:no papa.i don't want 2 marry
Kusum:it's the correct time 2 marry.u finished ur studies & got job also.
A:do u luv any1?
K & kusum r shocked. A:I'm like ur friend no.tell me.
K:yes.
They r shocked. Kusum:who is he?
K:Dr.Kshitij.
A:r u gous serious about it?
K:yes papa.

Kshitij cums there.kumud is shocked. K introdces him 2 her parents:this is kshitij.
A:nice 2 meet u.
A:kumud told me everything.
Ks:that's true.i luv her very much.i want 2 marry her.i'll bring my parents soon.i'll tell them 2day.
A-K –kumud smile.

Kshitij tells his parents Aryaman-Saakshi:I luv a girl.
Aryaman:kali?she's mad about u.
Ks:not kali.kumud.plz papa..i luv her.
They smile. A:We won't stand against ur wish.
Ks becomes happy. S:we want 2 see kumud.
Ks:I'll bring her soon.

Kumud gets up from the bed.Abhay-kusum with a smiling face:Happy b'day kumud.
K smiles:thanku papa…mama…
Abhay gives a family packet of chocolate:ur fav 4 u
K:thanku papa.u r the most wonderful father in this world.
Kusum:my present 4 u is in the evening.i've prepared a sweet cake 4 the bday party.K:I'm waiting 4 it.

Ks phones:happy b'day kumud.
K:thanku..in the evening there is a party.i hope u'll cum.
Ks:sure.

Kumud gets ready 2 go 2 the office.Kusum:2day u don't go 2 the office.
Kusum thinks:Mr.Bajaj on kumud's b'day…Oh!he'll do sumthing.he can't 4get this day.
K:mama,I'll go & cum now.i've 2 invite Bajaj sir.
Kus:what?why ?no need.he is an outsider.
K:he's not an outsider 4 me.
Abhay-kus r stunned. K:he's my boss & I respect him.so…bye..
K goes.Kus & A r mood-out. Ku:Abhay,whats happening?
A:cool down kusum.
K:how can I?sum1 is trying 2 snatch our daughter.
A:believe me,we won't lose kumud.
It was a sharp voice.

Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Part-17:Kumud goes 2 the office. K tells bajaj:sir,plz I want leave.
B:ya.happy b'day kumud.
K was surprised:how did u no that 2day is my b'day?
B thinks:how can I 4get my daughter's b'day?
B:it was written in the record.
K:sir,plz cum 4 2day's b'day party.
B:sure,I wud've cum even If I was not invited.
K smiles.

Party.Kumud is in a grand choli.Kshitij cums with a ring:this is my present 4 u.
K smiles. Then cums Bajaj.Abhay-kusum r shocked. B smiles at them.He notices kshitij there & becomes dull:who is that kumud?
K:he's ….
K becomes shy.B doubts & leaves the topic:ok.
He gives a earring set 4 k:this is my gift.
K was surprised:u r giving valuable gifts 4 an ordinary worker of ur office?
B:u r nort ordinary,u r very special.
K smiles.Kusum gets irritated.K cuts cake.
Abhay goes out.Bajaj goes near him:u were shocked 2 see me after a long while?
A:plz bajaj,plz leave us.
B:ok,but I need kumud;my daughter.
A was shocked. B:u've 2 tell her that I'm her real dad.otherwise I've 2 tell her the truth.
A was shocked.B goes inside. Bajaj cums near K:Kumud,I've 2 go now.so bye..
K:thanks 4 cuming.
B goes staring at Abhay-kusum. Kumud's friend Simran tells:kshitij,what song wud u sing 4 ur beloved kumud?
Ks sings:pretty woman…
Every1 smiles.all dance with their gfs.Ks dances with K. Finally A goes near kusum:hey pretty woman,will u dance with me?
Ku:4 the song pretty woman?this is 4 youngsters.
A:ya,we r also young.
Ku laughs & dances with A. A's cell rings:I'm Rishab Bajaj.i called u 2 remind u 2 tell kumud the truth.
A sweats. B:who is that guy standing with kumud?I've seen him with kumud many times.
A:Dr.Kshitij Oberoi.
B:he was taking so much of freedom 2 kumud.
A:we r fixing their marriage.
B was shocked:what?without her father's knowledge u r fixing her wedding?how dare u?
A becomes upset.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome dat was fabulous! get dem married fast! plz show sum romantice scences b/w dem plz! awesome ur gabulous writer

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