MayurSS: ISHQ (updated part 5 on pg No 24) - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
plz no nups-adhi shadi. plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
resss!!!!!!!!!!
finally m back...
will unress soon...
love u sis...🤗

awesome SIS...
i loved it...

i loved d concept d character intro...
awesome starting...
sorry for being late...
bt i loved it sis...
i hope Shadi jaldhi toot jaye...hehe😆😆😆
i mean Nupur ki for sure...😉😆😆
awww...
so dey both dont like each other...
bt hoping for d "ISHQ" to happen soon...
loved it lodsss...
love u sis...🤗

ps: sis ek baat puchu??? in ur sare stories hamesha Nupur Mayank se pyar kyun nhi karti hain???😆😆😆
i know its silly bt thought to ask u abt dis...😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

ahhh...

so much bold nupur...i like it...adi ki mom se bolo rishta jaldi khatam keray taky mayank is ko thi keray...
lovly update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
juz read ur ff
lovly partz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
nice chapter...but another haddi inbetween mayur in this ff which has to get out asap remember :) continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
very nice upate Gul

nupur was too desparate ...

adhi k parents k samne aise hi chali gyii

ab kya hoga???

continue soon

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: 18anila1

resss!!!!!!!!!!
finally m back...
will unress soon...
love u sis...🤗

awesome SIS...
i loved it...

i loved d concept d character intro...
awesome starting...
sorry for being late...
bt i loved it sis...
i hope Shadi jaldhi toot jaye...hehe😆😆😆
i mean Nupur ki for sure...😉😆😆
awww...
so dey both dont like each other...
bt hoping for d "ISHQ" to happen soon...
loved it lodsss...
love u sis...🤗

ps: sis ek baat puchu??? in ur sare stories hamesha Nupur Mayank se pyar kyun nhi karti hain???😆😆😆
i know its silly bt thought to ask u abt dis...😳

me too agree with this point..
ya but change is there in this ff and is that..
this mayank also.. don't love her..
as per the first update..
let's see.. what will going to happen next
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: shafyyy

me too agree with this point..

ya but change is there in this ff and is that..
this mayank also.. don't love her..
as per the first update..
let's see.. what will going to happen next



i agree asa hi hota ha per ku ye mujha nahi pata 😉But is ma aga fo change ay ga wo sab kuch badal ka rakh da ga so just wait and watch
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Asalam alikum Guys Hope u all are Dine

I know I Know I ma late again But Dear I cant help it

My schedule is become hectic and I didn't got much time I hope u understand

Thanks a tone For your great response on last part

Here is the Next part

Enjoy reading

Sorry For all mistakes

😉

PART 2

Nupur was leading the stage.

Suddenly her leg misbalanced and she about to fall from stage but caught by two strong arms. She opened her eyes and start steering pair of brown eyes.

Suddenly she realized her condition and came out of His grip.

Nupur (for hiding her embarrassment): Tum na mujha pakra ku Mayank.

Mayank (sarcastically): Madam ap jis tarha hawao ma ur rahi thin a agar ma ap ko pakarta nahi na to ap zameen bose ho chuki hoti.

Nupur: acha acha thek ha help kar kar koi ehsan nahi kia koi bhi hota yehi karta zayada akarna ki zarorat nahi ha.

Mayank shocked his head in disbelief and goes from there.

Adhiraj: O My god Doll tum thek to ha na ma to dar hi gaya tha.

Nupur: Its Ok darling I am perfectly Fine don't take tension Lets Go and enjoy the evening.

Finally the whole ceremony were ended with lots of fun

Next day Nupur was chatting with Gunjan about her weeding dress.

Nupur: Gunjan yar tum bhi kitni old fashion ho tumha samrat sa kehna chaye tha ka wo ye typical color ka lal jora whatever U said to shadi ka lia na bheja aj aj kal to so many new colors are in But your typical mother in law what I will say about her arghh.

Gunjan: Plz Nupur don't say her like that .She is so lovely in nature she cares me so much and about dress its beautiful Nupur and one more thing every girl always dream her weeding in this color but of coarse U are an exceptional case.

Nupur: tell me one thing Gunjan are U seriously Ok with this marriage .I still cant believe it u just saw samrat first time on your engagement day are U really from this World gunjan.

Gunjan: Nupur I believed on my mom and Bro blindly I am 100 % sure that they never break my trust .and u can see result by your own eyes that Samrat is really a boy about whom every girl can dream. He is perfect.

Nupur: But phir bhi yar .U know nothing about his nature his life style.

Gunjan: No one knows about this before spending there life g with each other. do U know adhiraj nature No nupur U cant exactly predict about it .Because the real face of person were seen when u start living with him.

Nupur: Ok meri Ma bus karo ma samajh gai that U are completely right and your decision is perfect ab khush.

Gunjan(smiled): Khush to ma jab hogi jab tumha akal ay gi .ma humesha dua karti ho Nupur that god always protect u from all evil eyes I am really scared for u yar.

Nupur: My dear friend now plz stop this mallow drama and smile.

Gunjan(smile): Nupur tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta.

Nupur :Per tumhari to ha na.

Gunjan: Kya.

Nupur: shadi wo bhi kal jaldi utho parlor bhi to jana ha na ma to bato ma bhol hi gai.

She dragged Gunjan with her.

Weeding preparations were full on every one was busy even Mayank was also taking Full part.

Nupur was wearing Green top and blue jeans came down stares.

NM: Nupur ye tum itna tayar ho kar kaha ja rahi ho.

Nupur: wo actually Mom mujha apni ek friend ka ghar sa notes lena ha wahi ja rahi ho.

NM: per tum na to Gunjan ko mehndi lagwana la kar jana tha na.

Nupur: Wo m abad ma la jao gin a abhi imp jana ha.

NM: per Nupur.

Gunjan: its Ok aunty ma thori dar ma hali jao gi ap fikar na kara.

Nupur hugged gunjan immediately.

Nupur: Ye hoi na sachi dost wali bat acha Mom ma chali.

She goes from there.

NM: mujha to samajh nahi ata is larki ka kya hao ga.

Gunjan: Aunty ap fikar na kara sab kuch acha hi hoga.

NM: per beta ab tum mehndi lagwana kesa jao gi.

Mayank(just enter in the room): Kya hoa Kon kaha ja raha ha.

Gunjan: Kuch nahi bhai wo mehndi lagwana jana tha.

Mayank: To jao na kis na roka ha.

NM: per bachi jay kis ka sath.

Mayank: Ku kya hao tum to Nupur ka sath jana wali thi na.

Gunjan: wo bhai usa apni friend sa kuch imp kam tha is lia wo chali gai.

Mayank: acha chalo ma tumha drop kar deta ho .

Gunjan: thank U so much bhai.

Mayank droped Gunjan at parlour.

He reversed his car to go back home but stoped by seeing the scene front of his eyes.

Mayank : O God ye Nupur ha or adhiraj bhi ha is ka sath .Per is na to ghar ma kuch or kaha tha.

Nupur was come with adhjiraj for enjoyment .Nupur was laughing full which was stop by voice.

Mayank(angrily): Nupur tum yaha kya kar rahi ho.

Nupur: wo ma kuch nahi apna kam sa ai thi.

Mayank: Nupur tumha sharam nahi ati ghar pa jhot bolta hoa.

Nupur: Ma na koi jhot nahi bola.

Mayank: acha to tum ye apni dost ka sath ho.Wo to ma yaha gunjan ko chorna aya tha to tumha dekh lia warna huma to kuch pata hi nahi lagta

Nupur (angrily): To kya hogaya agar ma ghar ma jhot bol ka ai ho apna fiance ka sath ho kisi or ka sath to dating karti nahi ghom rahi na.

Mayank: To tumha jhot bolna ki zarorat kyat hi ghar ma.

Nupur: mr mayank ap ye bat achi tarha janta ha ak mmeri mom ko is tarha sa chomna phirna pasand nahi ha is lia mujha jhot bolna para or us ka ilawa ye meri life ha to meri marzi ma kuch bhi karo.

Mayank: Per Nupur ye sab sahi nahi ha.

Nupur: Bus mayank bohat ho gaya tumha kya ma job hi karo meri marzi tum hota kon ho bolna wala Khud to life ko kabhi enjoy kia nahi dosro ko bhi nahi karna deta her wakt tumha mujh sa problem rehti ha wasa bhi tum jasa boring insane sa bat karna hi bekar ha .Tum itna sadu ho na Mayank is hi lia aj atk tumha koi larki nahi mili or na hi kabhi mila gi .Suna tum na.

She grabbed adhiraj hand and goes from there

At AHMAD"S house:

Nupur entered in room with full anger.

Gunjan: kya hoa nupur itni agg ku nikal rahi ha tumhara chera sa.

Nupur: Gunjan is wakt ek lafz bhi nahi bolna abhi mera demagh kharab ho raha ha .

Gunjan: Ku kya ho gaya bhai.

Nupur: Bhai ye bhai hi to ha na tumhara jis na meri life ka faloda ban dia ha.

Gunjan: Ab kya hogaya

Nupur: Kya nahi hogaya lo suno and she narrate her whole story.

Gunjan: wasa Nupur bora nahi manna bhai na tum sa sahi hi to kaha ha.

Nupur : Kya sahi kaha ha ek bat batao apna fianc ka sath ghomna ko jurm ha kya,

Gunjan: Nahi ha magar ghar walo sa jhot bol kar jana sahi nahi ha na .

Nupur: plz yar ab tum bhi apnay bhai ki tarha sa mujha lecture mat do or wasa bhi tumha pata ah na ka Mom mujha us ka sath asa ghomnay nahi da gi is lia mujha jhot bolna para.

Gunjan: Tumhari marzi ha Nupur mera kam tha tumha samjhana magar jo bhi karna soch samajh ka karna or ye jot um her wakt bhai sa ulajhti rehti ho na mujha bohat dar lagta ha ku ka bhai beshak kuch bolta nhai ha magar yad rakhna wo bhi ek mard ha or mard ka ego agar ek dafa hurt ho jay to phir us ka natija bheanak bura hota ha.

Nupur : acha meri ma chalo larna or darna band karo tumhari sahdi ki kitni sari tayaria reh gai ha.

GUNJAN'S WEEDING:

Nikkah ceremony was done perfectly and sajan announced as Couple.

Every one was so happy.

Nupur was enjoying the weeding fully with her friends' .Suddenly She saw mayank was look after the arrangements. Suddenly an idea cliked in Nupur mind.

Nupur say something to her friend Naina and she goes towards Mayank.

Naina( to mayank): Hi handsome what's your name?

Mayank: excuse me.

Naina: dekho na dear in First I liked U will u some with me on date.

Mayank: Listen mam be in your limits Ok I am not of that type.

Nupur: Or kkya shai to keh rha ha ye miss He is not of that type. Means not of Boy type.so Mr maaynak tumhari type kya ha?

She laughed loudly.

Mayank: Listen Nupur be in your limits.

Nupur: Ku dar gaya kya Mr sadu ka tumhara sach sab ka samna ajay ga ka tum kya chez ho dosro ko to samjhata ghomta ho kabhi apna ap ko dekha ha tum na dunia ka sab sa bor insane ho tum .Na to kuch karna ki himmat ha na hi kuch kahna ki.

Mayank: Nupur its enough now.

Nupur : Ku sach samna agaya to dar gaya dunia ka sab sa darpok insane .Tum to larkio sa bhi zada sharmila or kam himmat ho .balka kabhi kabhi to mujha shak hota ha ka tum larka ho bhi ya nahi.

Maynk(shouted in Anger): Shut up Nupur Shut up now. U crossed every Limit .Now U will see what Iam just wait and watch and he goes from there.

Naina: Nupur Mujha lag rha ha ka kuch zada ho gaya.

Nupur: ab hogaya to hogaya Fikar na karo wo kuch nhai karsakta .chalo Rukhsati ka hona wali ha.

She goes from there unaware of her faith decision.

Phew ! Finally I updated.

Guys Next Update will also be late as there will be my engagement in next week so I will be dam busy.

So plz Forgive me

Waiting For Your response

WITH LOVE
GUL😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
OMG... nupur...itni blunt 😡
bechaaara mayank... feeling bad for him 😒
very nice update...
cont soon...
thnx for pm

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