IPKKND SS: Curse of Ugliness(Last part Pg 47)

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Great SS and want arnav and kushi together. 😊

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sRistee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

i have been a silent readEr till now buT after i read this i couldnt help myself! you are an amazing writer!
i want arhI endin buT typicAl ekta kapoOr serial ending!
thank you so much, and do keEp writing! i love to read your work ! :-D

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@great_love

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

plzz end like khushi and arnav cleartheir problems and fab jon\b!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Saniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

I read this part yesterday but couldn't comment, eid. 😳

anyways, I'm loving how things are shaping up & omfgg Arnav married Khushi? WOW & I hope everyone finds out about Shyam soon.

about the ending, as much as I want to see Arnav suffer without Khushi I still can't see them apart but I wouldn't really mind what ending you'd like to give, I'll leave it up to you just update this SOON! :)

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Fatuma

@Missbantu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Thanks for the update, however you end it will be briliant but i would really love to see Arnav realizing his mistake and not believing Khushi and then Arhi together FOREVER...yup that is in my wish list

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lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

In two chapters, you covered so much. Wow! what an SS. 👏

Regarding the ending, taking the title into consideration, I would like both these men who played with her life and emotions, to suffer. Shyam, the pervert who I am very sure is involved in many affairs, his whole truth should come out. Arnav must must complete his investigation thoroughly of this man and he should be put behind bars.

As for Anjali, from what I have seen, she is a strong woman and I am confident that after she becomes aware of her husband's deceit, she will be the first one to throw him in the dungeon.,

Now coming to Khushi, she has had enough of hatred shown to her by Arnav, Shyam-the lecher, her family, especially Buaji, etc. and looking at the precap, I feel that Khushi should go into coma.

This will be right punishment for Arnav and her family, who took advantage of her and also Arnav for distrusting her and making his own judgement. He should know the whole truth from Khushi's family and also from the reports finalised by the investigators. He should live a dying death, for the rest of his life for playing God.

Would love a happy ending also, but after all this. I want everyone involved in hurting Khushi, to repent first.

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Reserved or my comment :)

PS - Sorry I'm getting late for uni but shall comment as soon as I get back home :)

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Hanieya Rehman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

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First of all Eid Mubarak to you!

Secondly! I raced to get here as fast as I could to reserve a space for myself so you can read it all!

I LOVE YOUR FF!

It is as simple as that...it is like a live show happening right in front of my eyes!

The detail you use and the way you describe the situations is just AMAZING!

You are such a versatile writer...you can change from romance, to humour, to drama, to action...your a NATURAL!

Everything flows so smoothly it is like one event into the next...you could give the CV's some tips with this! The way they broke the kiss bit in two seperate episodes ruined the flow!

Okay...I should stop my bak bak now or I'll just go on and on!

So as a parting word I will say that...

The precap looks very promising!!
I am not going to say update soon...I am going to say that you should update but take your slow sweet time to write more because I feel like reading it all in one go!

Lotsa Love,

xoxoxoxooxxoxoo

Edited by Haniibee - 13 years ago