MANNEET MOHABETEIN(T_4) NOTE PG 37 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok so Maan is trying to convince Nikhil i really wonder what would b maan's reply
sorry for the late comment dear
love u -Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I LOVED IT!
way to go Nikhil!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya-

Ok so Maan is trying to convince Nikhil i really wonder what would b maan's reply

sorry for the late comment dear
love u -Piya



me thinking
what answer can i give dear...
i want this to be perfect
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsem update...do continuee the next part soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
loved it
cont soon
thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART:68
say maan how can i trust u ?
what makes me to trust u ?
why i cant say that u ll leave her again
say maan
do u make me to trust u?
that day only i lost trust on u maan
now leave from here!!!!!!!!

yes what u said is true!
u cant trust me
the way i behaved with u all mostly with geet
after that not even i trust on me
but i love her truly that i can say


u said before also maan
but what u did?
nothing u broke her trust
u broke our relation
to say u broke her heart in to pieces which cant get into one
now say ?

i can only say onething ...

use dekhna meri kamzori hai

use Baat karna meri kamzori hai

use choona meri kamzori hai

use moti jaise aansoon meri kamzori hai


Kaash use pyaar bhari nazar se dekh sakta

Kaash use pyaar bahari Baatein kar sakta

Kaash use ek baar pyaar se choo sakta

Kaash use aansoon ko apne pyaar se ponch sakta

Kaash yeh haq se keh sakta...

Na ja mujhe chodke...

Mera dil yun todke


Har Waqt Har lamha...ek bechaaini aur hulchul si chaa jaati hai

uski baatien...rulaa deti hai mujhe

Na Chahte huye bhi

Rulaa detaa hoon tumhe

Dard deta hoon tumhe

Aur Bina kuch kahe seh lehti ho tum, Kyon?


Iss dil ko pataa chalaa ki

Yeh aankhen tumse aakhri baar mil rahi hain

Meri dil ki dhadkan jaise ruk gayi

Mere Saasien jaisi ruk gayi

Yeh waqt aur lamha jaise tham gaya


Tum mere liye aisi roshni ho GEET

Jo mere andhere dil ko bhi ujaal kar de...

Kaash mein use keh paata...ki

Mein use kitna mohabbat karta hoon...

Aur hameshaa karta rahoonga..

Kaash mein use keh paata...Kaash!


kash kash...

i said this all to her

but i never get to say this nikhil...


he kept his head on the wall and tears in his eyes and said those words kash...



now u say me nikhil still u think i wont love her

i dont no how can i prove to u

but i can say today i am alive becoz of her

today i smile becoz of her

today i feel i m human being becoz of her

today i feel like i have a heart becoz of her

her smile make me smile,

her tears make me to die,

her one glimpse is enough for me to live with all the happiness...


i knew did wrong not only a big mistake

i thought many times that if time rotates 5 years back

i wont do that mistake again

but i cant help it

but i want her to be part of my life

i want to be part of her future...

i knew u cant trust me easily

but one thing i can say


GEET is the only queen of my heart

her smile can give success to me

her tears can broke my success

till today i m only MAAN SINGH KHURANA

but i want her name to be join before my name and say

GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA

i feel proud myself

today i m alive becoz of her

pls give one chance ...

pls nikhil


he kneels down and join his hands before him...


stop it!!!!!!!!

just stop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


PRECAP:I cant take this more...


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sorry frds,

i knew i dissappinted all of u

but my collge and my dadu is not well

to say he is only person for me

so i have to take care of him

but promise i ll give next update soon

i knew it is short dear

but pls excuse me

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plsss dear

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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 13 years ago
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Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love it
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