MANNEET MOHABETEIN(T_4) NOTE PG 37 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear frds,
before i start this update once i wann to say that
i wann to end this soon i just got 97 likes
if u dont like then pls say me...that may reduce my burden in updating dear
i cant see decrease of the likes and comments likes this dear
may be u are there for new ff
but for ongoing ff u are not there
i desire that u ll be this time dear
or else i want to close this ff soon dear...

PART:69
When mann said those words only the person is there before him was nikhi
but other person who is his back is his geet who listened everthing

FLASHBACK:
when maan came to office and took permission to meet nikhil
geet was there
and she knew that he came for forgiveness
from her brother
she dont wann to be barrier in there frdship so she also wann to make nikhil back with maan
but when she wann to enter the cabin
what words she heard from maan make her to be more pain than him
she just ran away from there
where her eyes only with tears and heart is in unbearable pain dear

PRESENT
stop it maan
enough i cant take it anymore ...i knew u that u loved my sister more than ur life
but i was angry with u when u said those words to her
he came near and make him to stand
MAAN may be i hate u as a brother but not as a frd...never that cant be
i thought MSK should beg forgiveness for what he did for my sister ...but i never thought to do as my frd
our frdship is same like those days but maan i cant see pain in geet eyes that u knew
today also as a frd i m there with u
but as brother of geet i ll only say that talk to her
may be she may listen to u ...

she never does nikhil
i also spoke to her but she not even to wann speak to me
but u know i have seen the pendant in her neck what i gave is still with her
that made me to think that she loves me nikhil somewhere in her heart
she just closed the door of our love
but i knew how to open that
i gave her so much pain that no one dare to give for her love

but i gave her
i just wann ur permission to get her back my frd
before i love geet i said u the first
now also asking u nikhil
ll u give me a chance prove myself

no need to ask maan
i gave ur chance but remember onething that if this time she cries u have to pay more maan
till now i did not do anything becoz geet stopped me but after this if i see tears in her eyes
then u would be the first person whom i ll kill with my bare hands

u are threating MAAN SINGH KHURANA
dont dare that nikhil...

really then let me say u MSK
u are only maan for me and i have all the rights on my maan
dont do u say yes?

yes u have all rights!
can i have hug from u my frd?

from when MSK asking permissin strange ha?
u are my frd
they both hug eachother...

here heavy rain is there geet is just driving car as fast as she can
tears are welling in her eyes
she dont no what to do
give him a chance or not to give him
she came here to give pain in his life
but when she saw what she want then why she is not happy...

why? i m crying for him ? i wann to see him in pain but when he is why i cant bear
yes what maan said is it true
is he feels for me the same as before
then why he did not trust her on that day? i begged him to give me one chance to prove myself but he damn care for me
but today when he is asking why i should give?
but why my heart says to give?
why i cant listen to my mind as others why i only listen to my heart
why i do this?
why i cant see him like that?

she stops the car near the SM and sat in the lawn where the she is shivering
she did not notice that her words are heard by KARAN
there is so much in her heart
as a father he can see that


geet!!!
papa...
today i dont no what i m doing papa woh
woh...
she break down completely and hug him...
he just kepy quite and make her to cry from maan accused her she only cried in that room not before anyone but today she is crying like a small kid who hug there father with fear
yes today my little angel is in fear of accepting her love again
yes today she wann open up herself after 5 years so only she is fear
yes she is fear of again loosing maan
yes she is fear of getting hurt but the loved person...

GEET!
he just cups her face and kiss her forehead and says...
i knew what u are thinking ...but let me say onething to u ..before u take the decision
whatever may be the decision urs me and nikhil are with u
but u said that
in ur past u asked me for one chance to prove urself where ur mistake is not there?
and he did not give?

but today he did a mistake dear and he is remorsing to
and he is asking u one chance...
cant u give him

while he is saying these words geet can keenly observe that her father is breaking down from inside seeing her state
tears are there in his eyes
and he also drowned in rain with her...





geet u asked the chance prove urself the mistake u never did!
but when he did mistake and asking why u cant give?
today he is feeling bad that he did not give u a chance
may be tommrow u may also feel the same that why u cant give him a chance ...

but papa to give him chance means to trust him papa that my heart is not doing...
when i can trust how can i give chance

geet i m not saying to trust him i m saying him to give chance to him for gain ur trust ...
i m not asking u to love him
i m just saying give him chance to gain ur love back
u know geet we people are with jealous,hatred and many things
but u are angel and pure girl who wont think bad about anyone in there dreams
so i hope u take a decision to give him chance
and u know onething for sure that
maan wont act my dear...
he dont no to act...

papa u said u wont take a decision of mine
but i feel u are papa
but i feel today happy that atleast i opened up to u
and pls papa give me sometime and let me think about it

while going back karan turns and see her and say



my daughter never take a step which she repents in her life again
and i m with her what is her decision may be?

she takes the pendent from her neck and watches it clearly
do i still love him?

why i cant see in his pain is i m love with him
but what if i give him one chance
yes papa is right!
i asked him chance to prove myself which mistake i never did
he never gave me chance and for that
we both are suffering...
what i should do now?

PRECAP: ll she able to give chance
geet meets meera


frds as i said this update ll say me
whethere i can continue or not!
pls do commets and press like button
Edited by abisamratgunjan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wowo wow
it was fab
maaan nikhil scene was nice
ohh karan n geet made me senti yaar
continue soon
Edited by tinu.jindal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update dear
we love ur ff please continue...
thank u for the update

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update emotional but lovely
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd nikhil-maan convo..
geet atleast opened up her emotions to her dad..
i hope geet vl give him a chance..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal

wow wowo wow
it was fab
maaan nikhil scene was nice
ohh karan n geet made me senti yaar
continue soon



THANX DEAR
ofcourse they are father and daughter dear

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

brilliant update dear
we love ur ff please continue...
thank u for the update



hope i get many comments
and like as u said dear
then i ll
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

luvd nikhil-maan convo..

geet atleast opened up her emotions to her dad..
i hope geet vl give him a chance..



yes dear
that is father and daughter realtion
which i lost my frd
when i was 7
ok leave it
i m glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago

scenty-scenty update

but i loved it

waiting for geet-meera face off

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