Part 31 pg 103 Y is life so UNFAIR??!! # 3 28/04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Amazing update
I think her fear shld b ended
Lmao maan has a twisted mind..feedin her (well trying to) before he wants to rxpe her! :|
Continue soon
Xx

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

this was awesome...geet all the while is thinking only about what maan is about to do with her...well she hsould have thought abt it before messing with him...am loving it...continue soon...n thnxxx for the pm...

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chubzy

@chubzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Congrates 4 ur wedding...
Awsome part!!!
Plzzz i dont want any good maan just now...
I want his anger to subside n his misunderstanding tat geet tried to kill him back in India to clear out as it was in self defence n he could have died if it was not for geet who sent him to hospital on time even though she could have jst left him dieing
As for geet its better to face ur fears but she shld not loose control( i knw its next to impossible) but i want maan to feel d difference in her submission, bcoz d 1st time it was submission of her heart n body but this time it would b jst her body under d fear of hurting her parents...Rest is upto u
My comment is not to oppose anyones pov its jst wat i feel, plzzz dnt mind...

Edited by chubzy - 13 years ago

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

jazzu jaan, i can't have enough of them

as i told earlier, you have my full support ... you are free to express yourself here & only romance doesn't mean love ... well, first of all about the note -- ya, we all are fed up of her same question, her being trapped & than finally getting free, their cat-mouse play, his "payback" mode ... i mean it's time for some real action baby ... i have no objection in the phase of story, in him for getting this evil or in her for being so scared ... i mean, this is what call fiction na ... i am happy with all the content of the FFs i am reading presently (no objection at all) ... and i am always there to support you all & give my views

coming to the part -- he is real danger, a bad combination of power-revenge-cruelty-possessiveness ... a real bad combo ... and she only encourages his bad side (willingly or unwillingly) ... i know being a girl, it's hard to see her fighting but as the story says, he is trying to win a lost war ... her suspicion & subconscious mind always pour fuel to his fire ... god, he was being nice but his previous deed is not letting her believe ... and now is in real mad mood ... his "payback" mode is larger than anyone can imagine & his each dagger word is telling this, no yelling this

do cont soon & do PM me
advice - listen to every comment & suggestion but make sure that you put YOUR effort in it as at the end of the day, it's jazzu's work

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zunaiba5

@zunaiba5

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

thnx 4 pm

the part was gr8

i am too excited 2 know wat happens next

pls do continue

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Sameejjaa

@maan_geet1

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Yaar saving no more saving dear kya twist lasakte ho by writing maan proposing geet in exatra way.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#407

if u r planning to make Maan good after in future then he should not do anything against her will...what they have done in jungle in Mumbai it was both's consent but if he will rape her
against her wish then the hope for Maan's change and their love to start is finished...

but if u are not planning to change him in future then go ahead with R thing...

actually it depends on how u r planning to take ur story...go ahead with ur story...u have already make it clear that u don't want any interference in ur story...that is why u gave that false update and shock...

coming to this update...it was giving goosebumps to me when I was reading...Geet is so strong girl...she is judging his actions before hand...thanx for pm

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#408

awesome update kenu

i think now it is enough

now story must be move

geet,s fear also ended

and we want some change in maan also

so final decision is ypurs

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#409

Loved the part and I think that geet 's fear should end or you can show that before he does something to her she faints and maan comes to know that she is pregnant with his baby as they had sexual relationship earlier.For the baby maan tries to change himself. so the story also moves ahead and also geet gets saved.