-Dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF PT40/41 PG133/138 NOV11 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Congrats on new thread

nice update...waiting for another one...

by the way have you found Milind for Prachi or not? I do not like her any where near Maan. and Also make Maan understand that he is only made for Geet so no Prachi Sachi...otherwise...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
entraping... just waiting for more eagerly... Loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Congratulations on the new thread.
Nice part.
Thank God Armaan got in contact with Geet.
Poor fellow was stuck between two semi conscious girls.
But he surely knocked some sense into Geet.
Maan found his wifey and got lost in her too.
Sparks were surely flying between the two.
Geet got conscious first before she was completely lost
Wonder whats going to happen next
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
awesome updt
omg just luvd it
awww luvd how maan claimed her as his wife
awww they hugged
& suddenly geet realized???*m confused*
armaan is also very caring
luvd raj d cupid
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
awesome update
congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Wow wow wow, u again updating 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Dhundlae aks

part 30

She ran out on the road... how could she ??
wat was she doing with a stranger at the first place.
Where is she..
her head was spinning ..she tried to shake her head to concentrate on the road.

Maan pushed his hair backward feeling the sudden blow of coldness. Her moist eyes.. her running away.. wat did they do.. wat happened? Where the hell is he.. ?
How did he come here.. why did he get her here?
He caressed his temple...
the event played back in odd sequence..
her asking for drink.. their fight.. he followed her.. pushed her in the car..
but why... dam why did i have to do that he cursed himself..
their fight over veer..
losing her
his heart sunk again
..finding her..
he felt so elated..
hugging her passionately.. the thought itself made his skin burn. His whole body yearn to have her again in his arms. He closed his eyes.. & opened the car door.. he serached for the water bottle & splashed on his face.. it was freaking cold.. over his burning skin.

Wat took over him to have cross his limits. He hugged her .. but wat was he thinking in his mind.. like he was possessed. He couldn't believe he was actually wanting her. He walked around for pushing his hair behind.. dam he punched the tree..

raj knew it would be really embracing if Maan realized he heard their passionate moment. He muted himself giving him space.
Geet ran crazily in the road wiping her tears.. before she realized she felt a sudden hit on her legs followed by a creaking sound of the tires.. she was thrown away by the impact. ..& crashed down on the side of the road. Armaan rushed out scared & horrified only to see her soaked in blood. He lifted her & rushed her to the hospital.
Raj was petrified hearing the tire screeching sound...maan Maan
Maan felt like shaken out of no where.. he touched the ear plugs in his ears realizing how he was hearing rajs voice..he was so blank ...since she left.. he became oblivious to every thing.
Rajs sudden voice just shook him..
yaar veer I lost control he said in a terrible tone
I didn't mean to yaar.. it all happened all of a sudden .. I .. I..he sighed
raj closed his eyes feeling his plight
he took a deep breath.. Maan wo tyre kya sound tha
kya sound Maan looked here & there
raj wasn't sure whether it would be right to ask him abt her.. but he had.. he put his wit together
is she alright?
Maan hit the tree.. I don't know..
I don't want to know..
actually .. I can't face her after all this.

Raj tried to calm him.. he was talking all in one breath not thinking.. he was too embarrassed & taken a back with the turn of events.
Raj asked again wat was that tire screeching sound, just look around..
Maan was still blank not able to register
raj shouted... wat the hell Maan.. u get drunk..get her to this place... & now u don't want to take responsibility of that
Maan instantly rushed to the road hearing his words... he felt a jitter pass through him. He didn't know wat to think. Kaisa sound tha veer
u should know it better u r there he snapped
yaar veer plz... ur not helping
by the time Maan reached on the spot no one was there.. he puffed.. yanha koi nahi hain.. wanha bhi nahi hain..
he went the other side.. is taraf bhi koi nahi hain
raj ' any sigh of accident
accident!!!??

HOSPITAL
dr checked her & told armaan she had her leg fractured & a slight cuts on her forehead. Nothing really to worry. They took scan to make sure she had no head injury. It took couple of hours before she could be send home. Geet was stupefied with her own behavior. She couldn't believe she actually lost herself control.
Armaan gave the phone to her ' mama ka call hain baad karlo
mama.. Geet looked numb at armaan.
She didn't answer the call.. she just limped out from the hospital & sat in the car.. she didn't speak a word to any one. Armaan was taken a back. He didn't know wat exactly happened. He was not sure.. now..especially seeing her so with drawn. he tried to talk but she was quiet all the while.
They reached her flat.. around 5am
the watchman helped armaan with the other girl who was still unconscious in his cars back seat. He managed to settle her in the guest room. Before he could speak to Geet. She locked herself in the room.. she sat cuddled up in the middle of her bed. Her phone kept ringing.
Seeing mama's face in the caller id.. she turned the phone upside down
mama.. mama.. she cried.. holding herself..
I am sorry mama.. I am really sorry mujhe aisen nahi karna tha
I let u down.. I am sorry.. I don;t know wat I was doing..
I am so sorry..
oh god I crossed my limits
I did something I am not supposed to
mama ko pata chalega tho she will feel so let down

she hit her head with her hand.. she slapped herself.. punishing herself.. crying mama I am sorry with every slap.. mama I am really really sorry.
Dam wat was I doing there at the first place.

I GUESS IT IS CLEAR THAT .. THEY DID NOTHING JUST A PASSIONATE HUG
precap
Maan plight after the incident
-PREV PART 29 NEXT PART 31-
plz check for the updates on the Maaneet FF thread
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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For New thread ----edit------
yayy quite accidentally but i am first to comment...
😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
WAITING

edited *
its updated 😳
god feeling bad for both maan n geet
both are in guilt trip
but geets guilt is much more

waiting for precap to happen soon 😍

P.S.- in hospital part you wrote raj insted of armaan in first line...correct that 😃
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
part 29
i like Raj's character look like he will play cupid

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