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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lo me back here is next one hop u ll lik n don't throw juttas n chapples on me 😆

Part 16


Every thing had been done…what they hav planned …only both Meera n Maan knew….

Maan went in Geet's room..she was sleeping n Inder was sitting next to her..reading news paper

Inder: Maan I was waiting for u ( he said in low tone ..)

Maan: Come outside( he put his finger on lips n also in very low tone )

They were outside Geet's room..Ram had told him about what was planned.But plan for family was different n for two was different

Inder: Maan Geet is sleeping..so I can't disturb her...ll b upset..when She ll not find me (he was upset)

Maan: Don't worry..I m here..plz trust me..jab tak Tina ji nahi aa jatti I m here.

Inder: I can trust u..itna to jaan he gaya hu ( he smiled n put arm around Maan's shoulder)

Inder left after some time..his family had started to trust Maan lik a family member.

''Dr Meera'' a female voice called name.Meera looked back.She found her old friend…Dr Devika was there

Meera was too happy to find her there.She said nothing about Geet

Devika: u here.

Meera: Ya ..actually my frined is admitted here..so I jst gonna visit her.n he is Maan my friend n what bout u ?

Devika: Me…I work here..if u r free..lets go to my cabin.

Maan: Meera u go ..I m here.I wait for u ..do friends main mera kya kaam..( he gav a big smile)

Meera: But Maan..Geet

Maan: Meera she is sleeping..u can meet after that.

Meera OK

Meera left.Maan slowly opened door.Geet was in sound sleep.Maan set next to her..lookin at face without blink a sudden smile came on his face..n her put his hand on Geet's forehead .Even lik Geet...she didn't understand what she was upto ...what he was doing even he didn't understand.

Geet : Maan( she felt Maan's touch.)

Maan: Geet u wake up…( he smiled)

Geet: where is Pa ..where is my Pa….why r u here..go away ? ( she became restless..was about to get up )

Maan holded her by both her both shoulders.

Maan: Geet relax….utho mat…u need rest ( he again put her on bed )

Geet: no go away ….I need pa..where is he ( jst as a small kid... she was repeating )

Maan: Geet ur pa is back home...he need rest too..( in very polite n lovin way he said )

Geet: Pa left me alone…..( she start to sob )

Maan: U r not alone …I m here…

Geet: no I don't want u leave me..go away ( she threw his hand away from her arm )

Maan : Geet look at me…look at me Geet ( he turned her face toward him)

Geet looked in Maan's eyes..n with in moments hugged him tightly.

Maan: Geet once listen to me calm down ( Maan patted Geet's head)

N it worked Geet unhugged Maan ..but gazed him without blink

Geet: kyo aaye hai aap yahan ? ( she controlled herself and questioned Maa)

Maan: For u ..?...

Geet: no not for me…for ur questions to b answered…?( she shouted)

Maan: No Geet…even before I asked u I don't want answers…..I don't want to question u..But I hav rite to ask why u put urself in trouble for a person lik me ..hum to ek dusre ko theek se jaan b nahi paye

Geet : I know u (straight forward answer ..with out any hesitation )

Maan : ok u know me ..per ha maine us jaasoos ka chehra theek se nahi dekha tha ...who always chase me ( he taunted)

Geet: kya main kab picha karti hu apka ?

Maan gav a pleasant smile …but even he had no answers for her She put whole blame on him

Maan:Maine tumhara Naam liya kya…to fir …? ( he sat on her bed )

Geet: don't make fool out of me….

Maan: okey let it go..Geet atleast u hav started to listen …me ( he has mischief in eyes )

Geet: Mr Khuraana … U want answer…I hav jst one…It was coincidence..U was there..n me also..how can u say I saved u ? (rubbing her nose with finger Geet said)

Maan: okey that might b coincidence.let other incidents apart…What about previous visit to dargah ..when I got ur Kadda there u left …that was urs…

Geet: Ya that was mine….and plz don't ask me other things..I don't hav answers..plz

Maan:okey I ll never ask u any thing..per hum dost to ban he sakte hai…what u say ? ( he had bog broad smile reaching on his cheeks )

Geet: friends.

Maan: Ya but now don't ask me …why….coz even I hav no answer.Friends..( he put his hand in front of her )



scroll down plzzz...

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Same part


Geet thought for some time n put her hand in his.But she had no expression on her face.Till than a nurse came in .She was gonna giv injection to Geet.She became nervous.n closed her eyes.

Maan: this brave girl is scared of lil needle. so sad (he made fun)

Geet: no I m not scared of injection …jst its look scared me….(she opened one eye to gave answer..n closed again)

Both Maan n nurse laughed.

Geet: why r u laughing nurse ( she opened her eyes n start to shout )

Nurse : who Sir ko hassi aa gayi to mujhe bhi...( unfinished sentence )

Geet: jst do ur work..what he said..that is non of ur business …only me can react not u..jst get lost…..(she not let nurse to finish )

Nurse: But madam I hav to giv injection.

Maan: Geet let her do her work ( he second nurse )

Geet looked at him..n asked her for injection…

Nurse left.

Geet: why u asked me such…this is hospital n I don't wanna create scene here..other wise..( she said nothin after this )

Maan: Geet other wise..( repeated Maan)

Geet: yeh mera jutta hai na..usse itna pit.ti..ganji ho jatti

Maan: maine socha shayed…

Geet: shayad kya..k main jaan le leti..nahi …itni himmat nahi hai…jaan de sakti hu le nahi sakti..per jo samye mera hai …mere apno k sath hai koi thisa uske beech aaye yeh kabhi nahi bardasht kar sakti (Geet said with determination)

Maan: u take me ur close one.( he looked in her eyes)

Geet: I don't know.

In between this Maan got a call

Maan: Geet excuse me …I hav a call… ( n he moved out )

Outside Meera was waitin..

Maan: Meera ….u called me…..

Meera: I hav observed Geet from outside…main wahan se jaldi aa gayi thi asked my friend to meet later…

Maan: u wanna meet her...come ( he put hand behind her back)

Meera: not now Maan..but there r things on which we ll talk later..now go otherwise Geet ll target u once more.

Maan: ok Meera..but where u go now..coz u hav workshop ..( he taunted)

Meera:its up to u..where u gonna arrange…I m jokin…Devika is free …so m gonna with her…n I ll drop me also

Maan: sure ?

Meera: ya..we ll talk later

Maan: ok fine..If u ll need car ask me ..I ll come or ask Addi hav a nice day.

Meera: But make Tina ji clear.not discuss me in front of Geet….coz main to usko milli nahi…ask Tina ji... k Meera ko jaldi aane k liye phone aa gaya tha..n she left by taxi.

Maan : okey..u r too sharp….

Maan phoned Tina even before she came coz…she could ask Geet about meeting wth Meera…which could increase more difficulty

Meera left n Maan came inside Geet's room..where she was dozing…might b due to injection.But not in sleep

She found him back

Geet: Maan...

Maan: ya ..u need some thing ( he come near to her )

Geet: I m feelin sleepy ( she was dozing )

Maan: okey try to sleep…I m here ( he sat next to Geet's bed on stool)

Geet: that nurse did intentionally

Maan: no Geet…that is in ur course..after such accidents…normally docs give pain killers .few years back I had one….doc gav me such injections ..under that ..I always remained in sleep…so don't worry ..this is for ur recovery u need rest..( he put hand on Geet's forehead n pampered )

Geet : Huh ..don't let me alone.( she slowly held his hand )

Maan: no ..I ll b here…agar Tina ji k aane se pehle tum jag gayi u ll find me…n woh to aa he jayegi ( he said in lovin manner )

Geet: But don't dare to let me alone….mujhe batta kar jayea jab ghar gaye…even if main neend main bhi hui ( she said in sleep)

Maan: okey dear..now …so jayo….u need rest…I m here.( Maan held her other hand also)


Geet was in deep sleep...She had Maan


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Jass

So hows this hop u l lik plz...comment n hit lik ...


Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
osum part . .
I hope mira wil help
lamazing update

waiting 4 next
maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
thnx 4 d pm ...

awesome ... superb ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Congo 4 new thread


do continue
seemamary thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Amazing but I can't understand this geet and maan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update the best part maaneeet conversation n that nurse part is soo awsome eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update dear...
loved it

cont sooonnn...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
wowww loved it
so finallythey are friends
waiting to see whether she will meet meera soon or not?

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