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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Well well... he didnt keep in touch over a decade and now he's in a hurry - he cant wait to spend some time with her!!

You have portrayed Maan so well - his restlessness, smoking in hiding, his making noise with the bike, his avoidance of emotional situations - its the novel approach of boys in their late teens - who typically have grown up in a community, have friends in the gali and often go and spend time with them - maybe chatting or just playing football/cricket. I can imagine any of my cousins here😆

Loved the sensitivity of Geet and her recollections - girls are like this - always attached to people and places they love - specially with the homely feeling..

I liked the concept of silence between the two now - friends who maybe couldnt stop talking to each other nonstop when kids dont know how to interact now - exactly what to say. It has happened to me with my guy-friends whom I've met after a long tine. There's always this kind of consciousness which hinders opening up completely.

And Mom's are exactly like Maan's mom. Your portrayal of the whole thing is so real , loving it

Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
Well well... he didnt keep in touch over a decade and now he's in a hurry - he cant wait to spend some time with her!!

You have portrayed Maan so well - his restlessness, smoking in hiding, his making noise with the bike, his avoidance of emotional situations - its the novel approach of boys in their late teens - who typically have grown up in a community, have friends in the gali and often go and spend time with them - maybe chatting or just playing football/cricket. I can imagine any of my cousins here😆

Loved the sensitivity of Geet and her recollections - girls are like this - always attached to people and places they love - specially with the homely feeling..

I liked the concept of silence between the two now - friends who maybe couldnt stop talking to each other nonstop when kids dont know how to interact now - exactly what to say. It has happened to me with my guy-friends whom I've met after a long tine. There's always this kind of consciousness which hinders opening up completely.

And Mom's are exactly like Maan's mom. Your portrayal of the whole thing is so real , loving it

This story setup is very real, anyone can relate to...evereyone has a dear childhood friend girl or boy with whom you hang out a lot, suddenly u separate...when u meet that person after many years, then there is so much awkwardness...

Maan...awara...aimless...roaming in bike...and Geet sensitive...so they bonding again will be great to see...that's why I loved this concept...the day I thot of it, I started putting updates...Normally I work out a story outline before putting on IF...but this one I haven't done any storyline...i am just waiting it to develop on its own...

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

@chapter 3

hard to know about her mother

nice update as always

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Awesome

you come with a different concept everytime

i just love this one too...

i liked this mature Geet... and Maan... awaara...!!! lolz

and as far as pmz are concerned... it makes no difference for me whether you pm me or not... coz you are always in my last 10 topics...😊 but do pm whenever thread change ok...

Continue soon...

I just want to explore human emotions in different situations..so I try to come out with different concepts...Like you all, I also very eagerly wait how the story will develop...so it keeps me hooked to writting,

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

welcome back. lovely ff. beautiful tittle.

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

congrats on new ff...

loved the update...

well interesting...

seeing a friend and that too best friend after yrs of no contact...

waiting to explore more abt their journey...

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

awesome updates yaar
concept is cool
thanx for pm

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

loving it already...

cant wait for more

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: goldenball

This story setup is very real, anyone can relate to...evereyone has a dear childhood friend girl or boy with whom you hang out a lot, suddenly u separate...when u meet that person after many years, then there is so much awkwardness...

Maan...awara...aimless...roaming in bike...and Geet sensitive...so they bonding again will be great to see...that's why I loved this concept...the day I thot of it, I started putting updates...Normally I work out a story outline before putting on IF...but this one I haven't done any storyline...i am just waiting it to develop on its own...

Many times extempore-s are better than formatted speeches... i believe your story would follow the same path... i am sure your brain will enlighten you with a brilliant storyline 😊