'I see right through you' NOTE PG:152 Jan 18 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
He wasn't letting go! He was pushing the pieces of glass further into his skin, the anger still pulsating and his blood boiling.
maan ka apne aapko dard pahuchana dek nahi payee ZEE
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Posted: 13 years ago
absolutely loved it ... but am confused...her friends feel that she will not sleep with anyone, but looks like she has...am very confused about that...does she really sleep with all men...i sincerely hopenot...please...that would so not be her...will this be clarified in the next updates?????????
waiting eagerly for the return of MSK and his dealing with ms.handa
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update ..
Maan's pain was written brilliantly ... and the lines u used were bang on ...
so far from the story wat I've understood Geet ... obviously she has a past which makes her the way she is ...
the way her character is portrayed .. flirting around with guys ... making out with them .. breaking their hearts ... goes with her character ... but going to extent of sleeping around with random guys I felt was a bit too much for her character ...
sowwie if my comments upset u ...
continue soon
love
Sana
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update Zee..

Keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
beware geet you messed with MSK beware for the consequences
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was just awesome...i loved how maan aid that how can they be her c lose friends when they dont even know her well...i ownder what is he upto now...

continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

me first wow 🥳
awesome upadte it really was👏
the pain maan was going through was immense i was somewhere feeling his pain and it really ached to see a personality like MSK in such condition the way he behaved was normal for anyone he has the right to be mad at hs brothers and he also asked right quest that being her best friend they didnt know anything about her
maan coming to know that geet was angry and hurt so he decided that it was time for miss handa to meet MSK not maan who is calm and friendly with geet but MSK who is tough frm outside with very high attitude and nobody try to mess with him

geet breaking the heart of sameer very casually nt going in details of that but what sammeer told that did she fell for him that struck her she indeed has fallen for him but still not aware of it let's see who saves her from MSK now

precap is awesome geet marching angrily to maan's room i m sure maan would have agreed to the proposal and that would have infuriated geet and at the same time maan coming from shower

it's indeed a dark story and believe me u r doing great continue ur awesome work

Hi abi nice to see u jaan waise zee ka ff ka firse 1st place leli u crazy k fine i love the part and also ur expalnaton whoever not studied FF they can understand this part by ur words
come here we will talk
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear
loved it totally
waiting 4 Maan's move
wonder wat he does
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am impressed with the way man questioned his stupid brothers who supported to go throgh him in love
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

Hi abi nice to see u jaan waise zee ka ff ka firse 1st place leli u crazy k fine i love the part and also ur expalnaton whoever not studied FF they can understand this part by ur words
come here we will talk

hi dear good to see u around
yes i really liked the flow and also the story of this FF actually i m mad of Zee's writing so i lover her each and every work

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