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soniyasharma90

@soniyasharma90

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

@reni

best of luck yr...

@annie di

update soon...

i m feeling sleepy..just waiting fr ur update..

EDITED:

ohhh...i m 2nd 2 cmnt...yippeee...🥳

phew. wht an update di... so finally our angel confessed her feeling to herself... ooopppsss!!! doc called her mrs. khurana n she dint even bothered about it...😲 no wonder love can do miracles...

thank god our devil is fine...oohhh...kissy wissy..😳 wht will she explain to him...about the kissy wissy..😉 so maan is gonna make her confess her feelings...seems like our angel will have a tough time coz of our devil...loved the way u expressed her emotions

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

@sneha di

dont have words 2 express yr...i mean..amazing poetry...

loved it 2 d core...👏👏

chuparustam

Edited by soniyasharma90 - 13 years ago

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Aniee... this part was just brilliant...

Loved the update...

Geet's inner turmoil... fighting with self about her own emotions... just amazing...

Finally Geet accepting her love... the way she remembered the times he was there for her... were awesome...

The best part was her reaction on seeing maan with bandage... and their convo was just superb yaar... actually i liked the part when he says why she ends up kissing him when he is asleep... 😉

Now the plot is getting thicker... devil doubting her intentions due to her past behavior... well... i cant wait for next update...

Sneha - muah... loved ur poem... it was brilliant...

Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago

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poongs123

@poongs123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Part 33

wow didi another update ... Disney Graphics

OMG maan is drenched in blood and unconsious...

OMG geet is crying for the devil mee to cryin here ...

happa atlast abulance came

she was unable to detach herself from him.. she was still holding his hand.. some thing unusual yaar i cant belive my eyes

atlast she foud her feelings for him ...i m soo happy for u geet

BUT..! BUT..! I LOVE YOU.. OMG she uttered those words..me jummping here

Yes I love you..
Not matter how much I try to hide it
No matter how much I want to deny it.
No matter how bitter it may seem
No matter how unwanted all this is..
But its true ..
I love you.. I love you Maan.. OMG OMG i really shocked to hear this so soon she understood the feelin and utter those words me in lalaland now

Oh God...! My only love sprung from my only hate..

And.. I can't see anything happening to you.. I would be happy to die in your place.. but this love of mine.. Oh this undesired love my mine..! this selfish love of mine..! it is pricking my soul.. I hate you for that.. so pure and divine love frm my angel

to the devil ...

I hate you!!
Why you make me feel this way..??
I feel helpless of my own feelings.
I hate that you were always there for me,
That you always cared for me..
I hate that I never noticed your hurt,
That I never trusted your love..
& now when your hand is slipping away, I want to hold you close to me.
I hate my heart for being so selfish..
I need you and I miss you
I hate you for making me feel that everything's gonna be okay,
I hate crying because once I start its difficult to stop,
And what I hate the most is saying that I hate you
Because deep down in my heart,
I know it's pure a lie..
(snehaj)

wow sneha dear awesome poem u r just rocking dear keep writen u got talents dear i m proud of u Disney Codes

so now geet can't live with out her devil

interesting yaar ...

Relax..! your husband is fine.. Mrs Khurana.. doctor informed her.. OMG doc addressed her as his wife

He was lying there on bed.. his eyes were closed and there was bandage on his head.. poor maan i feel so sad for his condi

she couldn't control herself and ran towards him and hugged him.. hoo she hugged him gud start my dear geet...

his eyes snapped open at her reaction.. and without thinking she was kissing him madly all over his face.. Disney ecards

OMg she kissed him also

Did you hit your head badly when you fell from the car..? he teased her.. while he was amused at her unexpected reaction.. OMG naughty maan u r teasing her now

what happen to this man want leave hospi now very bad ...

yaar

OMG geet is orderin MSK

I remember that but the difference is that now I Know to whom I am exactly talking to.. My Devil.. only Mine..! wow my sherni is back hehehe maan ur got tough fight heheh

first time devil is so confused to understan thing hmmm interesting ...

he want clear explanation frm geet... hehehe poor geet how u r gonna explain

wowo didi awsoem update ... u r really Disney Codes

an angel didi but u lefts u sin the middlle me eagerly waitin for the next update ...

luv u didi...

Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Congratz 4 new thread di..
Nw waitnggg 4 update

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

me first 2 hit d like button...

ooopppsss... at last geet fallen love wid ' HER DEVIL'...

Really nice update...

loved it

cant comment long...gt 2 go...

chao

lv u

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: lively-piia
me first 2 hit d like button...
ooopppsss... at last geet fallen love wid ' HER DEVIL'...
Really nice update...
loved it
cant comment long...gt 2 go...
chao
lv u

hiii

oops log shikva kar rahe hain

but yaar u didnt commented..

n i ws replying to comments😭

luv ya n miss u