Maaneet... Just Like Heaven # 2 UPDATING - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chalobhago

Hey Samra... forgot to comment when I read chapter 15 coz I was so sleepy 🥱 when I read it I had just come back from an unexpected vacation and one of the first thing I did was to read ur FF
First u make me laugh when I read about ur new thread, so much can happen on a few days 😊
And then this HILARIOUS update 😆
First Geet hanged Dev upside down on the fan and then dono milkay - Dev probably saw it as a way of getting Geet of his back 🤣
And maan checking himself out in the mirror, someone is feeling insecure 😆
looking forward to ur next update and to see what Geet does to Sameera that makes Maan burst out in laughing in front of his client


so sweet thankyou so much
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow when did i put on the updating status
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ssch

wow when did i put on the updating status

😲only allah knows😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
samra...agar update nahi kar rahi ho...then at least remove the status...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏waiting...ab tum bhi bhoot ho gayi kya...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
those who want pm plz add sschPm to your buddy list
Part 16:
maan was sitting across them. eying dev who was lurking behind the guests so unusual of him and what was geet upto and then she came holding an ironing rod in her hand.
ye kaha se liya
wo sath wale hai na unki baiti k kmre se lai ho
maan gupled geet was stealing from the neighnours
kia kaha se liya dev daadi ma asked.
phone pe bol ra ho me daadi. sorry u guuys continue me jata ho dev covered up nicely.
geet smirked as she came forward.maan was eying her with great suspicion.when dev on her command ran toward kitchen.
mr chpra had to call him twice to gain his attention
he reluctantly gazed toward them replyong to theire question still looking at geet from cornor of his eyes and as geet was rtight behind sameera sammera thought he was looking at her.
geet carefully stated to pick up her beautiful hairs and started ironing them or in more accurate terms burning them fixing them in different andgles
no maan shreiked
what all 3 said in unison.
maan closed his eyes in frustation and nodded in negative.
i was just thinking about the project an idea seemed extremely wrong thast why. he tried to smile and avoided looking in geets direction.but just then dev came with a bowl
ab is me kia hahi maan thought desparately. as he came and placed it on the rank right next to sammera.while trying to look at the bowl his eyes fell on sammera and that did it
maan aap ka dhayan kaha hai.?
Maan just cdnt control anymore and burst out laughing.The rest started laughing seeing him while he was swearing geet dev you are dead today
geet had burned her hairs and they were satnding on her head like spikes now.maan nodded toward sammera and tried to sober but just then daadi ma looked at her and she lost it too.
aap k baalo ko kia hua sammera. she said btween laughs.
sammera suddenly self concious suddenly sttod up and started toard the mirror when geet tripped her and she fell and the bowl that dev had brought fell right on her.
it was chocolate batter.
mr chpra took off with his daughter as daadima were going way overboard wioth making fun of her. maan had controlled himself and was now in extreme anger. he went straight to dev s room as he knew thats where he wd find them.
he entered the room making plans of their murder when he heared her soft peels of laughter. dev instantly freezed as he saw the murderous look on his bro 's face but maan stood there frozen how could he ruin this moment of happiness for her. she was happy. she was laughing and enjoying with heart for the first time. he stood there looking at her and a small smile formed on his lips too.
dev lokked from maan to geet and geet who ws still oblivious of him laughing in her own world to maan who was still gazing at her like a love sick puppy.
and then maan's eyes registered dev too and immediately straightened and nodded a no towards him and left
dev understood without doubt what maan meant he did not want to push him not so soon but he started formulating his own plans.

PRECAP:

tere to..

Geet stop it maan was holding her from back it was getting hard for him to control.

Maan is takle to to maza chaka k rakho gi

Mr khurrana ye kia ker re hai aap.

Maan looked at him helplessly

Ye nai yoga exercise hai aap bhi kijye sehat k liye bohat achi hoti hai


NOTE:
from now on updates will onllly be on wkends.
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comment or will not update
Edited by ssch - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!
i cant laugh anymore..
geet s a litl devil..
i luv her..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great to see your update!!! bechari Sameera ki kya haalat kardi hai Geet aur Dev ne😆😆 precap says he fun continues...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Super Funny part 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
Poor Sameera buhahahaha 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Finally my wait for my laughter dose is over

Are you trying to tell us you'll be giving an update of this ff on every weekend yippee thats good
thanks in advance


Edited by krndr - 13 years ago

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