FF-Mahsoos. Maan & GEET.- THREAD 3- (note pg 142)

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KTPROCKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Thanks for the update
it was awesome...

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

getting really intresting...

now maan knows she is jealous of pari

and they are comfortable around each other

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Swaatii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Love this Geet . . . Waiting for. . . . ahem ahem . . . . You know *wink*

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Samina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

awesome part

geets jealousy was amazingly described i really liked how maan and geet were getting closer and how they were both physicaly atrracted to each other.

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Madhuri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

wow they shared a little physical contact...very well written...maan knows geets is jealous of pari...and he is taking advantage of that...and enjoying it

pl cont soon

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Priya Doss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

nice update,...

loved geet's possessiveness...

hope to see her love too...😳

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

great udpate dear
loved it
cont soon

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storytellerm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

loved it a lot
pari to villan ban gayi geet ki nazaron me poor pari jabki she is not at fault
maan teasing geet
lage raho
geet getting naughty thoughts
and maan letting loose himself
tarakki par ho bhaya

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Saj110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Amazing parts.. I like the developing chemistry between them., Maan understanding the relationship between husband and wife,, the way you portray it is absolutely breathtaking.. Good job x