A Thin Line Between Love and Hate: ArHi FF

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#571

it was damn hot , haha, i was eating my nails al whIle reading thIs
! ;)
do update soon
xo

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babli0204

@babli0204

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#572

Real hot suff!! loved it. Hope they get into the real 'thing' soon.Thanks for the PM.

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kkg-asr

@kkg-asr

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#573

It was superb... thanks u cleared my doubt in the end.
i was upset that both were dreaming..😊
theirs no scene that u can't write..
so don't think its not ur type U can write anything😉

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#574

loved the update... it was hot...

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@A...

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#575

It was sensual and beautiful😳...very very well written Shreya..yu've done a fab job👏👏...Keep writing dear..

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#576

It was so so so hot. Update soon.

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#577

Wow! Arnav sure does have some hot dreams doesn't he?☺️

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#578

I got your PM, and i don't think I had read your story before, or if I had, I could not remember. So I read it all over again. And I finished it in one go. I just couldn't stop reading. Loved every bit of it. I love how you have kept the spirited Khushi alive!

And while reading this part, I was really surprised to see Khushi behaving this way since in the last few episodes you were still working on building the chemistry and sexual tension. Which is why when it was a dream, and it was Arnav's dream, that I laughed out loud.

Hopefully when it really happens, it's going to be even more explosive than what it was in this part. You did a wonderful job!

Loving this fanfic!

~Sweety

Edited by sweetdamage - 13 years ago