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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update

so Armaan found riddhina

very well written

described the feelings well

loved it

continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum update
feel so sowii 4 ridz plzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
i don't know when i will get back to my life where i only read hehe..
i miss this thread so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Comment for Chapter 12:
And Game it is...The title reflects a great deal of authority...a lot of power...it somewhat excited me...the game A's father is planning playing with A reflects that of a chase...chase as in, Armaan trying to free himself from his father's clutches as well as from himself...he is trying to fight his inner demons...the father knows he has the balls in his court, hence he is in empowerment. The little game that the father has in plan gives him pure enjoyment, he is teasing A. The act is playful from the father's perspectives. He is taking pleasure in knowing the fact that his son cannot do anything, his got him trapped? Or is he wrong to assume this? You never know what can happen. He wants him dancing around to his tunes again by tormenting/prolonging him pain. Seriously the father needs to get shot. He lives in a world of sadism. His personality reminds me of a character from a fiction book I read the other day...The book was called 'Adored' one of the main protagonist's character was very similar to that of A's father.

'He was waiting for the arrival of his grandson and on 23th January 1987, his wish got fulfilled.'

The proudest moment for any parent is definitely when they see their child for the very first time and when they hold their little fragile newborn in their arms...in the Armaan's father case, all he can do is feel proud nothing else...he didn't give him the love he was entitled to when he was a child...all he could give him were a list rules which he had to follow without a second option...he was kept hostage...his...life...emotions...perspectives...they never meant anything...because whatever the father wants he gets...even if it's by inflicting pain to his most proudest possession.

'Maria and me weren't that close. Was I connected with her emotionally? I won't say NO but the attachment wasn't that strong' Why am I not surprised. They say love can change a sadist into a saint...but this term seems to amuse me when it comes to the Father...he is a man who cannot divulge in any relationships..he has no emotions'except for the few which keeps him running...ignorance...his hatred for lose...he is a very sour looser...In armaan's case...being in love allowed him to see the world better...the love he craved from his dad...from life...he got that love from tanya...although his emotions drove him to the extent of committing a murder...it brought in changes to him...he felt a lot happier...

'And I wasn't strong like my Son' this quote is very powerful and has a lot of depth to it. It shows that Mr. Malik is somewhat scared of his son...scared of what he was capable of...It might also show a glint of jealousy? He knows he doesn't have the will to leg of everything he has...the monster in him doesn't allow him to...it keeps his emotions intact, whereas armaan, he can...he can leave his father's empire without a blink and may not even regret...is Mr. Malik scared of being alone? Living alone for the rest of his life? Every person needs someone in their life...it's a simple law of life...is Malik scared of acknowledging this ugly truth?

As a parent I did everything in my power to not let son feel the absence of his mother. I won't say I tried playing the role of his mother. But I didn't let him think about her...MUCH' - By divulging him into the dark?

I taught him the true meaning of power, the meaning of authority and the meaning of what the surname "Malik" stands for. The same things father taught me when I was growing. The same things father told me when I was growing' - and hence the result of going to the extent of killing someone to achieve what he truly believes is his (Tanya) Armaan and his father share a lot of similarities to the level that they both were thought same values, beliefs and were brought up with venom within their blood. Only difference was that A's principles were given to him by his father and Mr. Maliks principles were given by his father. But in Armaan's case, he was not a given a chance to explore the world around him, until he left home...and when he did leave, we experienced something he would have never experienced at home...Joy...he experienced joy...his whole life he was surrounded by darkness that...when the little rays of brightness echoed into his life...it arose new emotions inside of him...the essence of light took over the dark shades of life...and this was possible through one medium...Tanya...

I would love to know more about the grandfather...seems like an interesting character to read about...and also an integral part of the existence of the Malik Empire... You have mentioned his name is several parts of the story...Interesting...

'The true identity of known as the 'Malik', the name only the lucky ones got. One of them being ..ME' - Oh Please don't pride yourself in anything 🤔

'I was impressed with him because I was seeing Me in Him. He was turning out to be like me and how I wanted him to be. He reminded me of Me when I was of his age. And I was the proud father. Some may not agree with this statement. A father making his only son like him'

Who doesn't love freedom after being caged up...escaping a place where you had no authority is not the best of places to live in...hence the enjoyment/advantage Armaan and his father took from escaping that environment is very much understandable! I'm starting think that Mr. Malik was also a prey who was under the clutches of his father ...if It wasn't for the grandfather...maybe things would have been different? In real essence it's the grandfather who nurtured Mr.Malik into the demon that he is and now going by tradition...Mr Malik wants to do the same...he wants his son to be like him...

Seeing a glimpse of Armaan's personality when he killed ryan, made Mr. Malik think that he had made a mistake? But how is that possible? Isn't this exactly what he wanted? Is this what he wanted his son to become...? Then why the hypocrisy? Mr. Malik thinks he should have confronted Armaan, and what exactly would he say to his son...that he shouldn't have taken that initiative and kill Ryan? If that was the case then armaan could have turned around and said 'but father, is this what you have taught me to do'?

'By the time I realized my mistake it was too late. He was turning out to be the man I didn't wished for. He was turning out to be the man I wanted to keep him away from...at least for the time being. His prioritise were changing and as a father I should have stopped him but I was LATE'

As a father, he should have stopped OTHER things as well...as a father...he was responsible in assuring his son lived a good life...and was HAPPY...but he failed in that category...so why the sudden concern?... because he's going against his father and doing what makes HIM happy?

Tanya is a very strong woman, being in the position she was, she fought very bravely and her sacrifice didn't go in vain. Her love for her sister was something which cannot be described in words. Her sacrifice...showed as to how much she loved riddhima...her little sister...she was an independent women...although she was aware of Mr. Malik's power she didn't flinch...she wasn't scared...and that makes me look up to her and smile...because that's a very hard thing to do...when a person knows death is near, there is fear present all over their body...but Tanya...she stood up against him...looked at him straight in the eye showing no fear or whatsoever...

'How wrong was I? Killing her made him move further away from me. Why?' One can only get one thing...although the devil played a very cunning game, he couldn't achieve what he wanted...his aim in killing Tanya was to get his son back...but he failed in doing that...it just shows that no matter how powerful an individual is, they cannot always achieve what they want...with playing games...comes consequences...

I'm curious as to where riddhima is...Will Armaan be successful in trying to find her? Or will his actions result in her death? Who will triumph victorious in this game of cat and mouse...

Okay now that is my comment for chapter 12! LOL I think i have rambled enough! Dont you think? LOL. I did say i would come back and comment on all the chapters once i'm free didnt i...welll here i am... ;P

Comment for chapter 13 might be posted 2mrw.

Adious for now! x.!

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Edited by ParaDiseMb - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part. Waiting to read more and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES! every intersting and sad story! will be reading the whole thing once i get the time... whatever is happening with ridhima is SO NOT COOL! BTW i am just on chapter 3 .. so if something good is happening to ridhima i havent gotten to that part yet 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice part!! i feel horrible for ridz.. please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow & there goes another awsome part!!! Loved it!!! Cant wait!!! Here comes the recue mission!!! Whoop go armaan!!! ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey! awesome part!
Ridz's POV was very nice! gr8 description!
Armaan's father is so cruel! i wish 2 kill him!
glad dat Armaan found Ridz! hope he'll b successful in saving her!
cont soon
thnx 4 pm
Sunita:)
Edited by hotKaJen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...i want to say something but i don't think i got the right word to describe how i felt after reading the part...its a masterpiece that u wrote..its so diffrent is concept and feeling that sometime i felt its kind or weird(not in a bad way)..this ff is addicting and mind boggling...

hope to read more...

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