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Posted: 13 years ago
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intersting!
plz pm me if possible
contd soon (:
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its n amazing concept!
luking 4ward 2 da story...
plz add me 2 ur pm list nd do cont asap
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very interesting and captivating start!!!!
please continue soon and add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya46

oh man what the hell I don't understand please explain the plot to me



aww.. that's bad on my part. is the first chapter confusing??
anyways the plot is about a girl who is kidnapped and sold to this new guy. Her father isn't her real father and never loved her. He was like a caretaker following the orders of the kidnappers.
I hope it helped now.
or feel free to contact me. You can PM me if there is still confusion.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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IMPORTANT NOTE


Thanks for the overwhelming response you guys gave for the First Chapter.
Chapter 2 is posted below.

Also can you guys send me buddy request in case you wish to receive the PM.
Individual Pm's takes too much time...

Thanks...

Edited by gypsy - 13 years ago
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the first part was really interesting...poor riddhima,, y is she being treated like that..i hope the one she has to go with is armaan..and i hope he that he's nice to her...continue super soon...😊
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Hey dear!
Welcome to IF and congo on ur ff
the story is amazing
cont pls and pm me too
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Wow. Just one word. Awesome. And what was that Should I continue? thing. Of course U should man. The story's got me gripped. Plz continue super soon and plz do PM me when u update. Oh how badly i hate ridz's father. and its very thrilling
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Originally posted by: gypsy

Thanks for the overwhelming response you guys gave for the First Chapter.
Chapter 2 is almost ready. I'll post in few hours.



So ur gonna post the next chapter now. geez waiting for it
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Thank you note + important note is posted above. Please do read it. Thanks😃

Chapter 2

~And Blue it is~


"And you are going with him. He is your buyer." For the first time since I entered the room I looked up and saw a pair of blue eyes looking at me.

Look down..Look down. Or you'll get into trouble. My mind was screaming as my eyes were fixed on those blue eyes. I wanted to look down but his eyes weren't allowing me to look anywhere but him. Those blue hypnotic eyes that held me captive. Those blue eyes that could either break me or make me. I don't know.

"So?" Him asked looking at the owner of those blue eyes. He nodded his eyes fixed on me and boring into my soul. Like he knew what was going on in my mind. What I was thinking looking at him.

"Is she a virgin?" Blue eyes asked. If I am not wrong I saw a small smirk at the corner of his lips as he asked Him. And this was enough to make me break the connection I felt a second back as the reality hit me hard. They were treating me like a commodity. The same way I was treated all these years. I had no control over my own life. I was...When I was brought to this place I had no idea why in the first place I was kidnapped. I wasn't rich. My supposedly father wasn't rich. In fact there was nothing for me to give to them...except for my body. But if they wanted they could have taken it away the first day itself. It's not like I was a danger to them or I could have fight them. Physically I am not that strong. When nothing like that happened I thought maybe they have changed their mind because I made... my heart believed it. And it's all that mattered.

How wrong was I? I should have known that there is always a motive behind everything. My supposedly father took care of me because he was forced to. Him kept me captive so he can make money. And now blue eyes will take me with him because of a motive. Is this how my life was destined to be?

"You bet she is? His father made sure of it. He wasn't paid to do nothing" I heard HIM telling to blue eyes. I cringed and felt wetness in my eyes at his words. All those years when I was growing, I wasn't allowed to make friends or play with other children of my age. I never attended any school functions because he didn't like it. I used to feel jealous watching everyone in my class having friends except me. Everyone having someone to talk to, share lunches and play games with except me. I remember the time, the only time when I asked my father why I am not allowed to make friends and he said "Because you are a good girl and good girls don't make friends." . I was too young to understand anything. He was my father and he could never be wrong... my heart believed it. And it's all that mattered.

I wanted to be the good girl, good girl he wanted me to be so I did what he told me too. I accepted it and after that conversation not for a single time I felt I needed friends or anyone but him. I was happy in my small little world. But how wrong was I?

"I'll take her" with these words my fate was sealed. I was sold to blue eyes. From father to Him and now to blue eyes.

Don't cry...Don't cry...I can't cry in front of them. I don't want to. But I can't control myself as a single tear made its way down the cheeks. I wiped it away before they noticed it. I don't want them to know how weak I felt at the moment. I can't. I won't give them the pleasure to know how badly they have broken me. ...broken beyond repair...

I stood still waiting for their next orders. That's what I am forced to do. Follow their orders or get ready to get the beatings. Something I don't wish for anyone.

"And you" I know those words were directed to me. "Be a good girl. And don't try to put him on the wrong side. Otherwise.." I loathe this word. It's because of this word I was where I was at the moment. I wanted to tell him that I won't follow his orders but do my opinion mattered to anyone. I can bet it never did. So why now? Weakly nodding, I stayed at the spot.

They talked about something that I couldn't hear, not because I wasn't allowed or they were whispering but because what next was expected from me was going through my mind. I was sold to this guy and I didn't know what next was going to happen with my life.

But I knew one thing- my destiny was sealed and I had no control over it.

I was sitting in the car that was supposed to take me to my new home. That's what I was told. My owner, blue eyes was sitting beside me at the other end of the car.

Before leaving the place I was taken to the room where I was held captive. Him entered the room followed by the guy who gave me the food. I was given clear instructions about the Do's and Don'ts I have to follow. I have no say in anything. I can't say no to my owner Blue eyes. I have to do everything he tells me to. I can't leave my new house without his permission. Like I will. There was nothing new in the list. I was doing the same thing from the last 18 years when I was staying with father. ..following his orders. In all, I had to act like a puppet whose strings were now pulled by blue eyes.

I was still in my thought that I didn't realized when the distance from the place I was held captive to my new home got over. He got down from the car and started moving towards the home. It wasn't looking like a home from any angle. It was huge. HUGE like a mansion that I had only seen and read in books. I was supposed to follow his orders so I quickly got down from the car from the other side and moved behind him, making sure that there was gap between us. In between these movements I never got the chance to look around. It was only when I was walking behind I looked at the surroundings. The mansion was totally cut-off from the city. There was no way anyone could have thought about such a huge mansion in between the forest. There was nothing except what we normally call "huge trees" surrounding the mansion. As far as my eyes went it was only trees.

I was so busy looking around that I didn't saw him stopping at the front. THUD. When I opened my eyes I was on my ass. I didn't dare to look up. My head was bowed but enough for me to make sure that his legs were visible. He was standing at the same spot and I was waiting for him to get up and punish me. Guess old habits die hard. I saw his leg moving and making its way towards me. This is it..This is it. I had angered him and it meant only one thing punishment. My breathing constricted and I closed my eyes to get this over.

"Get up" I heard the command in his tone and the next moment I felt his hands on my arms. He pulled me up. He was so close, so close to me I knew it but he was angry and in no way I was going to look at him.

"Watch before you walk..Are we clear?" He whispered and pushed me a bit roughly. I stumbled back because of the sudden push. Balancing myself I nodded weakly, my eyes on the ground. He turned and entered the house. I didn't know what to do. Should I go or wait for his orders. Him had told me clearly "Don't do anything without taking his permission". And I just did that by following him from the car without taking his permission and then I hit him. He was bound to get angry. Two mistakes in a row. It was more than enough for the day so this time I waited, waited for his next orders.

I didn't have had to wait for a long time because in less than 5 minutes I heard his voice. He was standing at the door.

"Are you waiting for the invitation? GET INSIDE" I gulped cringing at the last two words, I quickly nodded and started making my way towards the entrance. With each step I took towards him my breathing started getting shallow. My palms were sweating and the shaking started. I joined my hands to stop the shaking but nothing helped. He won't leave me this time. I knew it. We didn't have had much interaction but the tone with which he ordered me. I was dead this time.

I don't know how I reached the door. But the moment I was at an arm distance from him he pulled me inside and pushed me towards the wall beside the door locking it. My eyes were tightly shut and the tears that I had so hard tried not to shed came out. He is going to kill me now. I waited for his next move. I don't know for how long I held my breath but then I felt him. His fingers touched my cheeks that were wet with tears. He was wiping it away with the light touches of his fingers.

"Breathe" He whispered. The warm breath touched my face and I sighed, my eyes still tightly shut. I had no idea what was going through his mind. This was a new territory for me and just the thought of what was in store for me was enough to scare the shit out of me. "Relax. I won't bite you... definitely not today" I heard him. My hands were at the side in a tighten fist, nails digging my skin just so I won't pass out in front of him. He was so close...so close and if it wasn't him supporting my weight I am sure I must have been on the ground by this time. For the next couple of moments nothing happened. He removed his hands from my face. But he was still there. I felt him.

"Look at me" He commanded. I didn't want to but I had to. I slowly opened my eyes and for the first time I saw blue eyes this close. His gaze was fixed on me like mine on his eyes.

~and blue it is~

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Edited by gypsy - 13 years ago

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