Maaneet FF : My BrotherKeeDulhan precap 127

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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Considering Dark Fantasy... matlab... does it means the same what i am getting it...?????
if yes then ...buaaah...lolz... ROFL

a standing ovation for you too... you are speecless... but when you speek...quotable quotations...ROFL... Dark Fantasy...OMG... i cant stop laughing...

and what is this yellow color big-eyed would be husband... Dont tell me magicia predicted one for you...

U r getting it right😉 😉magicia said my hubby will be like this yellow in color and big round round eyes😆

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Magicia

@magicia

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: softly_spoken
😉

Magicia please accept a standing ovation from me for your Drama Queen Avtar... Seher gave you an apt name...you can make any softly_spoken person----> a speechless😉

sach mey yaar ..meim apney ddor door thak ka rishthadarom se defenitely kahoonga kisee bee halath pe sehar ko bahu na banaye😉 .sab kee bolthe baandh karloongee ...

and mimbling gali's at loud speaker ..lol ..i again fall in lub u for that ... yar thum tho super dangerous ho ..Ha Ha ..

. meim drame baaz ... 😭

nahee nahee nahee

if me dramebaaz ..then speechless ..will be utterdramebaaz ..ha ha

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

array wha my shernio saher is gonna continue it .its brilliant darling ...accha tha ,..and

the the dev char to u lol...

shy ,quite aur thum...a big lolzzz.

oki just me and ma frends know ki ...my sherni is devil😈!!!

and softly spoken is also here ...

rock on gurlz

any ways i wud be so rocking to see my sherni saher ..writtings..

loved it dear ..

do conti and pm me

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Aaksha

@princess.rocks

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

waiting for the update ...

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Magicia

@magicia

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: princess.rocks
waiting for the update ...

next sunday ... darling .if u have nt started that game ...on sunday this idea never will come in my mind ..LOL

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

how are u all doing?? and what is going on here??

magicia

nice to see you again here...

Brilliant idea I must say…

for bringing the talent out of them…

Wow girls u r doing fabulous job. Its very difficult to write like that.. i mean, mixing 3 people thoughts putting them in the form of story… connecting with each other story line and thoughts to form a complete story… very difficult to manage… u guys really deserve big claps for that…

u guys are really doing

(my detailed comments on the parts follow in my next post...)

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Magicia

@magicia

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: harshdb
for bringing the talent out of them'

Wow girls u r doing fabulous job. Its very difficult to write like that.. i mean, mixing 3 people thoughts putting them in the form of story' connecting with each other story line and thoughts to form a complete story' very difficult to manage' u guys really deserve big claps for that'

(my detailed comments on the parts follow in my next post...)

thank you deepa still from office .lol

will be waiting for that

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

for late commenting...

Wah seher what a game (concept) I love the idea…. My princess writing?

Part: 2

he gulped .. Dev was so scared to have a look at the bride ,

dev scared to look at geet??? What have u done to dev's character?? Poor guy…

he just wanted to kiss her on her cute chubby cheeks

only on cheeks???😉😉

Dadi touched Maan with her elbow and gestured him to shut his Mouth ...

Part: 3

very good start... couldn't you write lil. more😡?

Part 4

Part 5:

as they all was thinking that Maan is the Boy came to see their Geet then why the hell his Younger brother is trying to be Smart Brij Shot a glare and Poor dev just arranged a Question for her about her interests and Education Forgot every thing he turned to his Family for some encouragement and Saw his Dadi and Bro is also Looking him

poor boy what an insult???

I m so

for him...😆

" Gai Bhens Pani Mein"

him if he want to ask anything from Geet . Dev's Head shot up he was like

hey princess u have done excellent job dear… U do write comedy scene really well.. u should continue writing

Part 6

and lil. long one too😉

PART 7;

So softly_spoken,u too started writing...

Nice start haa…

came in the mid of the road and stood like a catwalk model…

how did u get the idea😉. very interesting..😉

Part 8:

The font and the colors u used for the font is really good… eye catching.. interesting to read..do continue in the same way...

DEV: oh dadi don't worry dadi we will find the best girl for bro.

Dev is not giving up or very dumb to understand dadi's intentions? I think the second one is correct…

Part 9:

hey girl... dont u ever write long parts😕??😉

its ok i enjoyed reading the part though short one... loved it..

Dev: bro She is not a random girl

Yaar dev got terrible brain… I cant believe he gave that idea of engagement he doesn't know about maneet, he is going to regret his decision.

Part 10

of Maan Singh Khurana ..his ego hurt badly

yes of course he is the great MSK after all…😉😉

nicely written about maan thoughts…

Part 11

Maan in trance… lol… kahi accident thon a karhe….

overall the ff was

do continue soon... waiting😃😃😃...

for the pm

&...

for you princess...

for 2 of you...

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: magicia

yup😉 still from office😆.. i posted my comments...😃

thank you deepa still from office .lol
will be waiting for that