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Maan hugged her tightly and placed her in his chest and said love u jaan.

Geet hold him from his waist and said love u maan.

Maan pulled her gently after their passionate love making when she is little tired but geet's face showing how much contended she is feeling also.

She hugged his bare back and dipped her head in his neck and filling herself with his manly scent and sweats.

Geet kissed his neck and then looked at him once and again dipped her face in his neck to inhale his scent.

Where maan's hot palm rubbed her bare back and then come forward to hold her curve and rubbing them softly he hold her hard buds and rubbed them gently then pinch them and make geet moaned and glared at him but maan in his teasing mood again pinch there but this time more hard and geet almost screamed in pleasure and bite his shoulder when maan took her under him and looked at her with full of desire and again devour her but this time gently & maan just give her full his love more gently and as if like worshiping her more &Marked her with his love again but geet also equally participated and mark him with her love & passion.

Later Geet wake up and turned her head to see her hand some husband but the side is empty, she get up with a jerk when maan shouts jaan, what r u doing ?

Geet turned at the source and found that her maan is making anjali drink milk , and buiscuits . she noticed anjali's tear strain face and sad look.

She looked at maan when maan take anjali in his arms and went to washroom and said jaan, wait we r coming.

Geet cover herself by maan's shirt and waiting for her two precious procession , she try to get up when noticed maan is coming out with anjali and said jaan what happen ?

Geet nodded no then raised her hand and indicate anjali to come near to her and anjali almost jump from maan's eyes and run towards geet and hugged her tightly .

Geet rubbed her back and said awww mere baccha, r u scared still, y , did u see some dream, bad dream.

Anjali who hide her face in the crook of her neck and said no, I was scared, there …..there is big thunder strom. And I hugged geet tightly more.

Geet rubbed her back, pushed her hair behind her ear and kissed her face and said mama,papa r here na, u will stay with us.

Maan come and take both geetanjali in his arms and said and papa will make her both angel strong,

Anjali looking at maan with her hazel eyes and said hmmm.

Maan:- u know anjali, u r becoming elder sister .

Anjali keep looking at maan then geet and said how?

Maan kissed her cheek then take her little tiny arm and make her touch geet's little cute bump and said there is ur little sister , sleeping ur mother's tummy and waiting for the right moment to come out from the tummy .

Anjali is looking but her face is cutely confuse when geet giggled and kissed her cute nose & said ole mere baby,u know a chota sa , nanha sa ek cute si little prince aaraha hain jo aapke papa ke tarah hain bilkul but maan looked at geet annoyingly .

Anjali clapped her hands then said innocently aur aapki tarah , when maan giggled and kissed her cheek then said ha aapki mama ki tarah.

When geet said no anjali bilkul carbon copy of ur papa.

Maan protested and said nope carbon copy of ur mama.

And the fight is going on when anjali looked at her kid parents and hugged both and dose off to sleep peacefully under the protection of their parents.

After some time ,maan noticed anjali is snuggling close to them & sleeping peacefully

Maan whisper jaan when geet pouted and said don't call me jaan when Maan said shhh geet, we will discuss about out babies later and make geet make a perfect "O" shape and said hawww babies, baba jee dekhiye and looking at the roof .

But maan pulled her and make her see their daughter anjali r sleeping and hugging them.

A happy tear drop from geet's eyes & kissed anjali's eyes and forehead when maan lovingly admire his family .

Later,maan make geet and anjali sleep properly and tucked them in soft duvet and sleep besides them .

Next morning geet wake up as she heard some sounds and then got it, it's from her beloved husband and daughter both r doing something in the room , oh not something maan is helping anjali to do something in paper.

She is looking at them couriously and tiptoed there siletnly but anjali shouts NOOO,MAMA,go,

Geet try to say something but anjali said mama , no, u r spoiling my surprise party .

Geet pouted & looking at maan expectedly but he said geet, jaan go and fresh up, till we will make ur fav brakfast.

Geet twist her lips and murmur baap beti kya khichri paka rehe hain kaun jane kya kar rehe hain huh.

Geet try to peep from the washroom but maan took anjali in his arm and said geet no cheating and go inside and fresh up first darling.

Geet again pouted cutely and enter the washroom and slammed the door forecefully when maan shouts geet, jaan, ufff.

Maan :-anjali stay here and let me see u mama and don't go any where,ha and mrs berry is there out side if u want then go there and play with her. Ok beta.

Anjali nodded and said ok ,papa and runs from there .

Maan knocked the washroom but geet said leave me alone.

Maan shook his head and said mood swing this woman and said jaan, open the door na. Geet nodded no cutely as if maan seeing her from out side of the door.

Maan :- jaan,pls open the door.

After some more time, she opened the door but as maan gussed her full face is tear striken and she is looking so pale .

Maan just engulfed her in tight hug and said jaan,

Suddenly anjali come and shouts papa ,berry aunty is not there. But Robbin uncle said , she went some where as I was but stopped as noticed her mama is crying.

She also start crying when maan looks at her then sighed and think two kids r here to handle and heard geet sniffing more when he called anjali and take her in his arms and said kya hua mere baby ko, see I thought my anjali is big now, she will handled and take care of her mama ,who is now cry baby and see now anjali is also crying with her mama,both became cry baby now.

Then maan heard a sharp loud noise of cry and maan make her head rest in washroom door and looking at above & murmur geet ka baba jee when he fetl his shirt r getting wet due to tears from his life and soul.

He take them both out side and make them sit when both hugged him and said papa,maan,

Maan sighed and sit besides them then said geet, anjali ,look at me pls, see if u both crying like this then how I will understand anything, it's pricking my heart more. Jaan, honey, if u both , , he just hugged them when anjali said y,mama is crying?

Maan looked at geet who almost hide herself on his neck when murmur something inaudible there.

But maan got it and said beta, ur mama is crying as she can't participate and help u in ur surprise na, she always helped u and today.

When maan gently wipes anjalis tears then kissed geet's head but anjali come and wipes geet's tear and said sorry mama.but it's really surprise and I…I… I want to give u surprise mama.

When geet said in stunnd voice ,surprise then looked at maan when anjali said ha and that's for my brother and sister and u. but u r crying . I don't like it.

Geet quickly take her in her arms and said no no shona, mama loves ur surprise and sply when ur making it for u brother but maan murmur sister.

When geet ignored it and said to anjali , no beta, mama was sad cause she is so busy and feeling some time week and can't help u in ur work na, mama always loves ur surprise and sply when it for ur mama from u shona. Mama some times feels like this and crying like this and pouted then murmur ur papa also didn't give me time.

Anjali give glare to maan who makes puppy face when geet giggled , anjali kissed geet's cheeks and said mama, I'm with u na, will scold papa, don't cry ha, then looked at her papa angrily and said PAPA,

Maan with baby face said yes honey, anjali came to his lap and said if mama cry again then , then .

Both looked anjali couriously when anjali said yes will not talk to u at all.

Maan hold his ears and said sorry honey, papa will not make ur mama cry again when geet hugged maan then anjali and said shona, ur papa never make me cry , oh na.

Anjali twist her cute nose & said aap dono na mujhe confuse kar rehi ho puri tarah.aap dono decide karo ,mujhe tab tak kuch aur surprise plan karna hain and runs from there.

Maaneet laughed but then geet again make saddy face when maan said aab kya hua?

Geet nodded no & whisper nothing .

Maan:-Hmmm but geet start loudly crying & said u don't love me , see u don't care for me, see u r just saying hmmm ,u never asked me about my appetite .I'm craving for which food?

Maan again shook his head and said this woman and her crazy mood swing & asked jaan, I was going to make food , spl break fast for u which u will love it.

Geet smiles and hugged him, kissed his full face then said y u didn't say it before huh ok, when u r going then go and make some yummmyyy delicious food, like Rice with lots of chocolate cream and tomato sauce.

Maan looked at her like as if she is got two horns in her head and said r u serious her , when geet said yea with enthu maan just think about her crazy food craving and making face but soon got alert as geet is looking at him .

Maan:- well jaan, will make for u for it, just wait and take shower quickly.

But geet hold his neck & said I want to take shower from u.

Maan gulped his saliva then said jaan, I so much want to help u but u need rest, u know what I want to mean.

Geet looked at him & said ok , u don't have to help me , I'll carry on.

Maan hold her from behind as he know his wifey's crazy hormonal changes which is irked her and she want more of maan's sath.

Maan nuzzled her neck with his nose & said jaan, u know u have go and get ready fast as ur daughter is waiting out side and how much impatient she is, and u know if we together went to shower then what it'll lead when geet slapped his hand and said we r together not going for shower , I just told u to help me but it's ok pervert mind huh and went from there.

Later geet came out and see a beautiful red saree with sleveeless red blouse and skirt & matching acessaroies.

And note

Dear Mama ,

U r best mama in this whollleee world.I loveee uuu Lotsss. Uff papa will get sad,ok I loveee Papaaa also lots,I love mama,papa both of u and papa told me ,soon I will be big sister and u know mama, I have lots of …..uff forget it, papa told me but I forget it ha ha duty , as I'm elder sis na, and I will take care of u, papa give me this ,and papa said don't tease u mama, cause I want a sister for me but u want a brother for me so it'll be brother but as papa said u love me lots so u will give me a sister also, hain na mama, accha chalo cut the cake for my coming sis opps brother.

Ur anjali

Geet smiles and kissed the note numour time and said mere baccha

She smiles and wear them slowly then come out from the room and enter the hall .

Geet have tears in her eyes and looking at anjali who is cutely counting something near the table when maan slide his hand on her waist and kissed her ear and said how is it?

Geet kissed his heart & said thanks jaan.

Maan smiles when anjali shouts papa, how much candel we should put on the cake.

Maaneet chuckled when anjali cutely tucked a curly hair behind her ear and said boliye na,then shouts mamaaa, and jump from the chair which make geet shudder and shouts anjali shant

But anjali runs and hug her & mama, when geet said beta y u jumped liked that, u should step down calmly, no hurry, ok.

Anjali nodded then said how is my letter?

Geet hugged him and kissed her face and said it's beautiful then said but say me who helped u.

Anjali kissed geet's cheek and said papa, I wrote first three lines then said papa then both sat and papa wrote it.

Geet smiles through tear and kissed anjali's face again.

Maan smiles to see their love then when anjali again asked how much candel both maaneet laughed and maan said hmmm nothing for now as she , I mean he will come out na then we will put a candle for his brithday.

Anjali nodded and left when geet hugged him tightly with big smiles then kissed his face and lips and said I love u, thanks for everything , u r world best husband and father.

Maan kissed her back & whisper u r best wife and mother jaan and I really lucky to have u in my life and kissed her eyes when suddenly robbin and another guard enter and push maaneet and cover them and all heard a sound of bullet.

Maaneet turned and full shocked when geet screamed for anjali and maan try to looked at anjali who fall from the chair and crying there and addition of the sound of bullet.

Geet runs and hugged her tight as if hiding her from everything when maan turned and found injured robbin but an another gurads r there and holding woman when maan said who r u?

Geet then looked at the other side still holding anjali tightly and Geet shocked to say anything any more, just said it's u , y u want to spoil my life,family, y cause of u we suffered ,

When that person said some times love became selfish , geet, and turned and said Inspector, I don't waste my time here , I fall on trap of grt msk's and his super intelligent brain but will be back.

Geet literally shivering when maan hold him and anjali and said Nakul called driver and take robbin there and bring another car , we will go to hospital.

Precap:-

Love is self-fish or Love is unconditional

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love

rakhi

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi all
How r u all

updated my ff
"Angel and Her Savior"

Part33:-Page133

Pls read and do comments

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love

rakhi

P.S.:- this FF is left one part or maximum two parts then an epilogue

then this FF will complete

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was so stalking the thread loved the update so sweet and sexy and family bonding loving there trust and their faith in each other and geet weird cravings and mood swings love anjali and her love for her parents awesome update beautifully done and then this person attacks them loved the update

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update geet anjali cry babies anjali surprise maneet romance geet craving and moodswing them and attack oops



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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing dear ...
maaneet romance and cute anjali's surprise for her mumma and their family bonding was really cute and aweee...
waiting for nxt one
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Posted: 12 years ago
according to me...love is both selfish n unconditional...but who is dis...hope everything will b fine...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE.
LOVED MAANEET MOMENT.
AWWW GEET'S MOOD SWINGS R SO WIRED.
THE FAMILY WAS SO LOVELY.
ANJALI'S LETTER WAS AMAZING.
OMG THE ATTACK.
BUT WHO IS THE PERSON ?
AND OF COURSE LOVE IS UNCONDITIONAL.
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet n her mood swings..
loved anjalis letter
it was so lovely n atlast u 😲
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very beautiful n scary update.. maaneet life always in danger..uff...

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very interesting update...

loved their family moments...loved how Anjali feel protected with her parents...

who is the person attacked them...how he came inside...

thanx for pm...

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