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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the short updaate.its takin a long time in mobile. Will try to solve it soon.
PART 15

Maan came to college earlier that day. He wanted to see her asap! But even he could luk for her Pinky literally dragged him to the terrace.There he found her all fumed up ready to pounce on him.

Geet : Maan, ap itne irresponsible kaise ho sakte he? Do u even know the meaning of the word time?

Wait he was early. Then why is she accusing him?
As if she heard him,
Geet : its election today and you r comin now. There is nothing wrong in being punctual once a while

She just hit his ego. Maan Singh Khurana is known for his punctuality and here she is accusing him for being late.

Maan(shouted): damn ur election..
Before he could complete she ran to him and closed his mouth.

Maaahiii... mahiii ...

The feel of her slender fingers on his lips caused a lightning on his spine. For a moment they forgot the world around them. They were lost in each others eyes. His dark brown eyes urging to confide his feelings and her deep eyes trying to comprehend those unsaid emotions.

Mira cleared her throat with a grin. Maaneet broke their eye-lock and lukd away.

Geet : shub shub bolo Maan. I am already so tensed.

Maan (retorted) : that doesn't mean u can accuse me u lazy bum!

Geet stared at him her jaw dropped.
Geet : lazy bum? aur me? aj to apki kher nhe

Maan & Geet were just a step short of war when Pinky intervened.

Pinky : chal na Geet ,voting abhi shuru hogi

They left for the polling booth.

Geet : Maan smile at those girls. Wave your hand.
Maan : Geet do i look like a clown?
Geet : Ap aisey mu phulake betenge to wo NT jeet jayegi and then i will be a clown!
Maan :fine then

He waved his hands and gave a cheeky smile to the girls passing through the booth. Geet excused herself to attend a call.When she returned she found him talking and shaking hands with a gang of girls who were drooling at him.

After the girls left, Geet went near him and poked him.
Geet: Ye kya ho rha tha?
Maan(smirking): kyu? tumhe bura laga?
Geet: wat the... me kyu bura maanu?
Maan smiled and lukd away.
It was a long-long day for Geet for she was the only person who seemed to be anxiously waiting for the results.Others were kind of sure about the result.In the evening,it was officially declared that Maan Singh Khurana is the student-chairman of MIT! The moment she heard that, Geet hugged him excitedly. She took him all around the college in a procession. Maan watched her lovingly as she danced and rejoiced with her friends.For a moment their eyes met, and she blushed profusely. She quickly stopped dancing and walked next to him.
NT left the college disappointed.

Dadima noticed that Maan was happier than usual that particular day.He made an xcuse of being selected as the chairman. But Maan knew that it wasn't a big deal for him. All the while,he couldn't even voice his feelings to her. Yet,something was there that made him believe..she too had the same feelings for him. He felt that today. Once again he resolved to confess his feelings the very next morning.

Next morning he searched for her walking through the corridor.Just then he heard someone calling out her name.He lukd at that direction and stood there frozen at the sight of the angelic beauty in front of him. Time stood still as his eyes devoured the beauty walking towards him draped in an off-white shiffon sari. Everything was so perfect about her.He couldn't take his eyes from her.Her eyes..her neck,her curves,her hip...her legs..she was simply the personification of beauty. Geet was well aware of the intense gaze that were piercing through her soul. She had been standing in front of him for quite a few seconds while he kept on scanning her from top to bottom

Geet stood there feeling pretty much conscious under his gaze. Hisluks were making her blush. She lukd down as she couldn't meet his
eyes. Maan was oblivous to her
reactions but the pink hue on her
cheeks didn't escape his eagle eyes.
Finding him lost, Geet tried to gain
his attention,
Geet: Maan..
Maan: hmm?
Geet : ap aisey kya dekh rhe ho?
Maan: if i had ever doubted that
you are feminine at all,then i get
my answer today! Waise tumhari
harkat to ladkiyo wali nhe
hoti..good. Kabhi to log yaad
karenge that you are a lady!
At any other time she would have
been enraged or retorted back. But
today she felt like melting in front
of him. Unable to cope up with her
own emotions Geet tried to move but
he stopped her by his arm. She tried
the same on the right side but he
blocked her again. Now she was
entrapped against a pillar between
his arms.
Her breathing increased erotically
at his proximity. This was the first
time they felt the heat eminating
from their bodies burning in each
others need.
Maan: kuch kehna chahti ho?
Geet: ha..wo me...
She stopped as she felt his breath
filling her nostrils. She gasped
engulfing the feel. Their lips were
mere inches apart. One move and
they were about to kiss.Her hand
involuntarily went to his shoulder.
Maan was waiting for her answer.His
hands were now rested on her bare
waist.
She let out a deep breath.
Geet: Maan...me kaise lag rhe hu?
Luk at me through the eyes of my
husband and then tell me.
He lukd at her lovingly and
sensually moved a strand of hair
falling on her cheek.
Maan: tum to bilkul 'Maan ki Geet'
lag rhe ho!
Meanwhile Mira and Pinky who were
watching all these from a distance
came near them.
Mira: ummhmm..this is not done.
Maaneet came out of their
dreamworld and quickly
straightened themselves.
Pinky: ha Geet.humse chupa rhe he?
Mira:Maan,both of you are our
friends! So if u want to go ahead
you should admit it to us!
Pink: no secret business!
Geet: tum dono bhi na! Baat ko
kaha se kaha le jati ho? Aur waise bhi mera pati thodi aisey khadus
hoga
Maan: Geeett..
Geet: dekho..kaise lete he mera
naam.
Mira: acha baba theek he! Phir kaise
hoga tumhare wo?
Geet: yehi to aj shaam ko dekhna
he!
Maan(shocked): wat?
Geet: oh yes! Sid had arranged a
match for me. The guy is Aman. I
have to meet him today evening at
CCD.And u all have to be there with
me.
Maan was the most shocked person
of the three. Mira and Pinky kept
listening to her while Maan couldn't
hear anything else.He was
completely broken. Does that mean
he mistook her friendship? She felt
nothing for him and he was day-
dreaming like a fool. He felt
rejected and Maan Singh Khurana
would never be rejected! Who had
the gut to do so? But here he
was,standing like a loser when she
was all xcited about her to-be
groom! Aman or Chaman. He heard
her say something. That was his
name! Maan was backing out from
that meaningless conversation when
she noticed him.
Geet: Maan! U will be there na?
Maan(gritting his teeth): NO! I have
an important meeting.
Geet: o hello,wats more important
than me? U will be there,thats it!
The question hit him like a nail.
Yeah rite,wats important than her?
He knew he couldn't protest. Such
was her effect that he knew he will
be there for her even against his
own will.
Geet left for the class with her
friends.
Geet : cmon gals,i need to script the
whole episode
------------------------------------
PRECAP: Geet- Aman date in front
of Maan!

Hope u like this. I am so sorry for
the broken parts. Will compile it
later. And i have found out a way.So
hopefully from now on i can give
long updates!


Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wondaful update luvd it x
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry frnz, i woke up till 1:30 typed the whole part but due to some stupid network prblm it is not postd.
will type it again 2mrw :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
its k love we can understand ur problem dear

continue soon tom
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 15A

After the girls left, Geet went near him and poked him.
Geet: Ye kya ho rha tha?
Maan(smirking): kyu? tumhe bura laga?
Geet: wat the... me kyu bura maanu?
Maan smiled and lukd away.
It was a long-long day for Geet for she was the only person who seemed to be anxiously waiting for the results.Others were kind of sure about the result.In the evening,it was officially declared that Maan Singh Khurana is the student-chairman of MIT! The moment she heard that, Geet hugged him excitedly. She took him all around the college in a procession. Maan watched her lovingly as she danced and rejoiced with her friends.For a moment their eyes met, and she blushed profusely. She quickly stopped dancing and walked next to him.
NT left the college disappointed.

Dadima noticed that Maan was happier than usual that particular day.He made an xcuse of being selected as the chairman. But Maan knew that it wasn't a big deal for him. All the while,he couldn't even voice his feelings to her. Yet,something was there that made him believe..she too had the same feelings for him. He felt that today. Once again he resolved to confess his feelings the very next morning.

Next morning he searched for her walking through the corridor.Just then he heard someone calling out her name.He lukd at that direction and stood there frozen at the sight of the angelic beauty in front of him. Time stood still as his eyes devoured the beauty walking towards him draped in an off-white shiffon sari. Everything was so perfect about her.He couldn't take his eyes from her.Her eyes..her neck,her curves,her hip...her legs..she was simply the personification of beauty. Geet was well aware of the intense gaze that were piercing through her soul. She had been standing in front of him for quite a few seconds while he kept on scanning her from top to bottom

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to be contd...
madhubala123 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet stood there feeling pretty
much conscious under his gaze. His
luks were making her blush. She
lukd down as she couldn't meet his
eyes. Maan was oblivous to her
reactions but the pink hue on her
cheeks didn't escape his eagle eyes.
Finding him lost, Geet tried to gain
his attention,
Geet: Maan..
Maan: hmm?
Geet : ap aisey kya dekh rhe ho?
Maan: if i had ever doubted that
you are feminine at all,then i get
my answer today! Waise tumhari
harkat to ladkiyo wali nhe
hoti..good. Kabhi to log yaad
karenge that you are a lady!
At any other time she would have
been enraged or retorted back. But
today she felt like melting in front
of him. Unable to cope up with her
own emotions Geet tried to move but
he stopped her by his arm. She tried
the same on the right side but he
blocked her again. Now she was
entrapped against a pillar between
his arms.
Her breathing increased erotically
at his proximity. This was the first
time they felt the heat eminating
from their bodies burning in each
others need.
Maan: kuch kehna chahti ho?
Geet: ha..wo me...
She stopped as she felt his breath
filling her nostrils. She gasped
engulfing the feel. Their lips were
mere inches apart. One move and
they were about to kiss.Her hand
involuntarily went to his shoulder.
Maan was waiting for her answer.His
hands were now rested on her bare
waist.
She let out a deep breath.
Geet: Maan...me kaise lag rhe hu?
Luk at me through the eyes of my
husband and then tell me.
He lukd at her lovingly and
sensually moved a strand of hair
falling on her cheek.
Maan: tum to bilkul 'Maan ki Geet'
lag rhe ho!
Meanwhile Mira and Pinky who were
watching all these from a distance
came near them.
Mira: ummhmm..this is not done.
Maaneet came out of their
dreamworld and quickly
straightened themselves.
Pinky: ha Geet.humse chupa rhe he?
Mira:Maan,both of you are our
friends! So if u want to go ahead
you should admit it to us!
Pink: no secret business!
Geet: tum dono bhi na! Baat ko
kaha se kaha le jati ho? Aur waise bhi mera pati thodi aisey khadus
hoga
Maan: Geeett..
Geet: dekho..kaise lete he mera
naam.
Mira: acha baba theek he! Phir kaise
hoga tumhare wo?
Geet: yehi to aj shaam ko dekhna
he!
Maan(shocked): wat?
Geet: oh yes! Sid had arranged a
match for me. The guy is Aman. I
have to meet him today evening at
CCD.And u all have to be there with
me.
Maan was the most shocked person
of the three. Mira and Pinky kept
listening to her while Maan couldn't
hear anything else.He was
completely broken. Does that mean
he mistook her friendship? She felt
nothing for him and he was day-
dreaming like a fool. He felt
rejected and Maan Singh Khurana
would never be rejected! Who had
the gut to do so? But here he
was,standing like a loser when she
was all xcited about her to-be
groom! Aman or Chaman. He heard
her say something. That was his
name! Maan was backing out from
that meaningless conversation when
she noticed him.
Geet: Maan! U will be there na?
Maan(gritting his teeth): NO! I have
an important meeting.
Geet: o hello,wats more important
than me? U will be there,thats it!
The question hit him like a nail.
Yeah rite,wats important than her?
He knew he couldn't protest. Such
was her effect that he knew he will
be there for her even against his
own will.
Geet left for the class with her
friends.
Geet : cmon gals,i need to script the
whole episode
------------------------------------
PRECAP: Geet- Aman date in front
of Maan!
Hope u like this. I am so sorry for
the broken parts. Will compile it
later. And i have found out a way.So
hopefully from now on i can give
long updates!
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear
but feeling sad for maan yaar i cant see geet with someone else yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
feeling bad for maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey fabolous parts ..loved the tiny miny romance...and math for geet aman...twist was nice...eagerly waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

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