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superbbb dearr..😳
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Nice part
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This FF which is based on Chocolate is so interesting.The romantic changes u made in ur ff r awesome
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Thank you for all the comments and LIKEs...

Sorry for the delay...

PART 13

MIT:

7pm:
Pinky: Geet,sab kuch to ho gaya. Ab chale?
Geet: nhe Pinky tum log nikal jao bas me ye kuch posters aur laga du phir chalti hu
Mira: Geet,why r u takin so much effort? Anyways Maan is gonna win.
Geet: acha? Kapur uncle ko phone karu?

Mira stared at her and they laughed together.
Around 10pm,

Geet was about to return to hostel.There was no one in the campus. Suddenly some goons jumped in surrounding her. Geet stood there numb. Who are these people? What r they upto?
Guy1:Oye yaar ye to kamaal ki maal he.
Guy2(in an evil tone): iska kya kiya jaaye?
Guy3: oye client ne sirf darane ko bola he.
Guy2: to kya hua? Hum kaunsa iska rape karnewale he? Par ek kiss to banti he!

With that he started to move forward. As he was about to touch her, Geet hit him by her knee and managed to escape. But the goons were after her.

Khurana mansion:
Maan couldn't concentrate on anything.He decided to go for a drive. May be that will divert his attention.He set on his jeep with a beer bottle.


Geet ran for her life.Though a brave girl otherwise,she panicked.Anyone would be,if some random guys ran after you at night. Her brain had stopped working long before.She ran faster and faster and lost her way. The campus was surrounded by acres of forestland. Geet somehow reached the forest. She didnt know where she was goin... It was all dark everywhere. All she could hear was the footsteps of those men. Her legs were giving up but she was determined.Finally she could see the main road at a distance.Just a few feet away from the road,the goons got her.
The guy whom she hit came forward,'mujhe marti he saali'
With that he slapped Geet and snatched her dupatta.Geet fell down due to the sudden attack.She closed her eyes partly in pain due to her bleeding lips and partly coz of humiliation. The guys were laughing as he wrapped her dupatta around his neck.
Guy2: now just make some noise u b****. I want to hear ur screams.
Geet shot an angry glare at him.
Guy3: see how she is staring at us!

The guys laughed again mocking her.
Guy2: now its time for the kiss baby...

Maan was driving fast heading to the forest.On the way,his eyes fell on some guys surrounding a girl. Something was wrong for sure. He stopped the jeep and walked towards them.He couldnt see the girl but the way those guys were behaving didnt seem right.When he reached near he couldn't believe wat he was seeing. Two guys were holding a girl and a guy was goin to kiss her forcefully.Maan clenched his fist in anger. He hit the guy who was goin to kiss the girl. When the guy fell down, Maan saw the girl. Its her! He saw her lips bleeding. These b**** were tryin to harm her, Geet! His nerves stiffened due to the adrenalin rush. He hit the three guys violently.He had no control over himself.How dare they!
Geet lukd at him in awe.She had no clue how he reached there,but yes he came there for her! Thats wat she felt. She neve knew this side of him ever existed .He used to be a gentleman in the college.
Maan had beaten them all badly. The two guys already ran for their life but he caught hold of the third one who had her dupatta.
Guy3: Sir,plz bhagwan ke liye mujhe maaf kar do!

Maan still held him roughly.The anger in his looks was enough to let the man know wat he wanted.He quickly took the dupatta and gave it to Geet.
Guy3: sorry bhabhiji..galti ho gayi.aj ke baad apke samne tak nhe aunga.

With that he ran away. Geet stared at him for sometime.
Maan took off his shirt and came near her in his black vest and blue jeans.

Maan:wat?
Geet: wo to acha khaasa 'item' bula rha tha mujhe. U made him call me 'bhabhi'

She complained frowning cutely. Maan gave her a look that was enough to kill her.
Geet(murmured): dusht..danav
Maan:kya?
Geet(shoutd): dusht..danav!

He lukd away but couldn't stop the light smile that touched his lips.He saw her struggling with the dupatta.
Maan:why r u wearing this thing?
She lukd at him in a questioning manner.
Maan:umm mera matlab..jeans ke sath?
Geet gave him a victorious grin.
Geet: thats style! And it was gettin cold. So i took this from Mira.
Maan: ye log kaun the?
Geet: dont know. May be dad's rivals.
Maan(in a serious tone): business rivals?
Geet:hmm.. I guess so. Sid luks worried these days.We have some land in HP and some KC is after it. I bet these are those KC people.

Maan(self-thot): aye lo..here i saved her and she is blaming me as culprit. Gr8. Ye ladki sach me mujhe paagal kar degi.

Geet: kya soch rhe ho ap?
Maan: wo..i'll drop u.
Geet: cool. Seems like i am too good at running.
Maan:thats bcoz i didnt compete with U..
Geet:o hello bas huh!
Maan:chale..chutki?

Geet really got irritated now. She made a grumpy face and sat on the jeep.
The drive was silent,though Maan was really curious to know about the tiff between Sid and KC. But her highness is really in a bad mood.
Finally with all his courage,
Maan: HP ki land me kya problem he?
Geet(snapped at him): apse matlab?
He kept quiet.
Geet(self-thot): oye Geet,ek to he is helping you aur upar se tu he ki unpe hi shout kar rhe he.

Finding him quiet, Geet felt guilty.May be he felt offended. She wanted to ease the situation.
Geet: wo..HP me..we have a land.
Maan:umm..
Geet: my dad left HP after the death of my mom.But Sid had made a promise to my mom.
Maan: oh
Geet: mom used to work for some NGO whose activities were centered at HP. She had built a kind of rescue-home for girls. Women who are cheated in the name of marriage,suffer torture in the name of family pride,orphans...
Maan:sounds great
Geet: he na? My mom wanted girls to be bold and independant. Thats why Sid brought me up like this.
Maan: and the world is suffering
Geet: xcuse me..
Maan: acha,so..wat was that promise?
Geet:arey ha. My mom wanted Sid to continue the work even if she... But now, this KC ka koi ghatiya MD wants that land and shutdown the rescue-home! Idiot!

Maan was shocked. Was he that cruel? But when it comes about business,he is ruthless. There are no rights and wrongs.Its all about wat Maan Singh Khurana wants.Its the first time that he is thinking about someone else perception.
He snapped out of his thots when he heard her voice.
Geet: aisa koi karta he kya?
Maan: but Geet why cant they shift that rescue-home?
Geet:thats the safest place they have.They stay there,work there..

By then they reached her hostel,
Geet got out of the car.
Geet: Maan, thanks

He smiled and left.

She turned back once to get a last glimpse before he left.

Maan drove back to home.He knew it he cant run away from this.However he tried to escape,he would bounce back to her.Its like all roads lead to Geet.
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KHURANA MANSION:

Chitra : noways Maan. How is it possible?
Maan: but mom,how can we do that to those girls?
Chitra: but Maan,it was all ur design,ur plan. U were adamant to evacuate those people. And now,when the client has approved the project u wanna change? Thats jst not done. We are Khuranas! Its a matter of our reputation!
Maan(raising his voice): Enough mom! I have already made the changes and the clients hav approved it.
Chitra: u have talked to the clients? Then why did u even bother telling now?

An offended Chitra left to her room.

Maan couldn't understand wat was happening. His mom was right. They, the Khuranas,never change their words.And moreover,he never spoke to his mom like that.In fact,he didn't even argue for himself just bcoz he didn't want to hurt his mom. Even if that meant he is studying in a women's college now! Then why? Why am i losing myself? Kyu kar rha hu me aise? Akhir kyu??... GEET! Coz i want her to be happy. Lekin kya is hadd tak ki me mom ke khilaf jau? Maan...this is crazy! No no even more..admit it..u are in love! Yes,i am in love! Maan Singh Khurana is in love! Geet, me aa rha hu and i will sweep U off ur feet!
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PRECAP: Maan decides to propose...but...Geet 😲


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Posted: 13 years ago
hi, nice update n u even changed the track of the real story which was in the movie and u have molded it 2 ur's.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wah! i am the first one 2 reply,4 the 1st time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovey update and for precape i m sure geet kuch ulta seedha karege
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Posted: 13 years ago
simply brilliant ...
loved the update

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