NewFF Maaneet Tujhko jo Paaya Thrd1 Upd pt8 pg 133 - Page 51

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support. I have replied to your comments. If any one of u wants me to include anything in this ff then kindly let me know.
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PART 6
Geet: Toh chalo bike racing karte hai
Vicky: Main jaanta hoon tu hi jeetegi toh khamakha racing kyun karna hai main apni haar abhi hi maan letha hoon
Geet: Main jo bhi cheez haasil karti hoon woh khudke balbuthe par karti hoon kisi ki meherbaani ya ehsaan lena mujhe katai manzoor nahi samjhe
Vicky: Okay Geet gussa kyun hothi ho tumhe mujhe harakar hi jeet haasil karni hai toh yahi sahi mujhe kya hai mujhe bus apne question papers se matlab hai
Geet: Thik hai magar dubara mere saamne aisi baate nahi karna
Vicky: Ok
Geet: Toh chalo highway par chalthe hai
Vicky: Highway?
Geet: Haan...daro mat abhi itne raat gaye waha koi nahi hoga tujh jaise darbok k saath race kar rahi hoon issliye highway kaha warna mere paas jagah ki koi kami nahi hai
Vicky: (a bit scared) nahi highway hi thik hai
Geet: Rukh pehle apne bike ka number plate remove karde
Vicky: Kyun waha koi khatra hai?
Geet: Khatre invitation card dekar toh nahi aate na...khair teri marzi tujhe nikalna hai toh nikal de warna rehne de
Vicky: nahi nahi tu keh rahi hai toh thik hi hoga
Both of them remove their number plates
Geet: Let's go
After some time they reach the highway
Vicky: Geet tune toh kaha tha k yaha zyada traffic nahi hoga magar yaha abhi bhi kafi logh hai
Geet: toh tu kya expect kar raha tha k main tujhe koi sunsaan area mein le jaaungi
Vicky: nahi magar...
Geet: O common Vicky khatro se ladna Geet ka shaukh hai aur agar papers chahiye toh tujhe bhi yahi karna hoga
Vicky: Fine main taiyaar hoon
Geet: Okay so let's start the race
Geet: 3..2..1...go
They start their racing
Vicky was really scared. It was late night yet today there was a good traffic on the highway during this time as well
Geet was least bothered about her life and hence was enjoying the race
As usual Geet was way ahead of Vicky.
As they were continuing their race they came across a police jeep
The police officials immediately started following them as racing at this particular time and that too on the highway is considered illegal
Vicky: Geet Police humara peecha kar rahi hai chalo racing chodkar ghar lauthe hai
Geet: Darpok tu hai main nahi...ab police ko bhi peecha kar lene de unhe bhi toh pata chale k Geet ki raftaar kya hai
Vicky: Jaise teri marzi main jaa raha hoon mujhe police k jhanjhat mein nahi phasna
Geet: Darpok kahika
Vicky took a shortcut route and somehow managed to escape
But Geet continued moving ahead...she was enjoying the fact that the police officials were chasing her
This was another adventure for her...
Police: Ek toh bahg gaya par ye dusara najane apne aapko samajhtha kya hai isse koi farak hi nahi pad raha k hum usse follow kar rahe hai...are speed badhau hume isse kisi bhi haal mein pakadna hai kahi haath se na nikal jaaye
The chasing continued
Geet: Iske aage toh koi rasta hi nahi hai ab kya karu waise woh police officers kafi peeche chut gaye hai par main koi risk le nahi sakthi...kuch na kuch to karna hi hoga
Geet: Geet kabhi haar nahi sakthi
She then notices a person who was trying to repair his car.
She took advantage of the situation and parked her bike in a way that no one could notice it she threw her helmet in one corner and removed her jacket and quietly opened the door of the car went inside
By that time the police jeep arrived in that area
They stopped there
Police: Aap itne raat ko aise sunsaan ilake mein kya kar rahe hai?
The man turned around to face them. It was none other than Maan
Maan: Hello officers wo actually meri car achanak se bannd pad gayi hai toh wahi thik kar raha tha
Police: achha ye bataiye kya aapne kisiko high speed mein bike par jaate hue dekha?
Maan: No Sir yaha se toh koi nahi gaya kya hua koi problem toh nahi hai?
Police: nahi khus problem nahi hai actually ek sarphira bike racing kar raha tha hum ussi ka peecha karte karte yaha tak pauche hai...aap bura na maane toh kya hum aapki gaadi ki talashi le sakthe hai?
Maan: Off course Sir
They start checking his car
Hawaldaar: Sir yaha pe koi hai
Maan was shocked he went ahead to see who was the unknown person who was sitting in his car
Maan: Geet...
Police: Aap inhe jaante hai?
Geet looked at him as if expecting him to say no
Maan: Haan ye Geet hai
Police: Itne raat ko ek ladki k saath iss sunsaan raaste mein kya chal raha hai?
Maan: Sir aap galat samaj rahe hai Geet meri mangetar hai hum bus ek function se laut rahe the k humari car yaha pe bannd pad gayi
Geet was shocked by Maan's answer
Police: Achha koi baat nahi hai agar aap chaho toh hum aap dono ko chod dehte hai aapke ghar
Maan: No Sir iski koi zarurat nahi hai car bus thik ho hi chuki hai aap jaakar uss bikewale ko dhundiye
Police: I guess u r right thik hai hum chalthe hai
Saying so the police officials leave
Geet comes out of the car. She was very angry
Geet: Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe apni mangetar kehne ki?
Maan: Toh aur kya kehta k aap jise dhund rahe ho wo ek ladka nahi balki ek ladki hai jo k iss waqt mere car mein baithi hui hai
Geet: Dekho Maan...
Maan: Tumhe mera naam yaad hai
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Maahi...Maahi...
Geet: Mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai samjhe tum aur naa hi tum mujhe kuch yaad ki koshish karna
Geet goes ahead and removes her bike
Maan continues his reparing work
Geet: Waise agar chaho toh main tumhe ghar tak lift de sakthi hoon
Maan looked at her lovingly
Geet: Aur isse pehle k tum mujhe kuch galat samjo main ek baat clear karna chahthi hoon mujhe kisisi ka ehsaan lena bilkul nahi pasand aur police k saamne tumne jo kuch bhi kaha wo ek tareka ka ehsaan hi hua
Geet: Isliye main tumhe ghar tak drop kar dethi hoon waise bhi tumhe iss waqt koi mechanic nahi milega iss tarah se tumhara ehsaan mere sar se utar jaayega
Maan: (thinking) Ehsaan k chakar mein hi sahi kamse kum kuch pal tumhare saath bita toh paaunga...
Geet: Kya soch rahe ho?
Maan: Mujhe manzoor hai
He sits on the bike and Geet starts riding
Maan: Geet ye tum kis raste se jaa rahi ho?
Geet: Main yaha rehthi hoon mujhe yaha k saare raste pata hai samjhe tum...aur waise bhi tum aise keh rahe ho jaise k tumhe sab kuch yaad hai
Maan :Sab kuch toh nahi haan magar ek maasum sa chehra yaad hai apni shehzadi ka jiska kabhi main rajkumar hua karta tha
Geet: Shehzadi?
Maan: Haan meri shehzadi jo k kabhi bhina baat k khilkilakar hasti thi aur kabhi yuhi ghanto gumsum baithi rehthi thi
Maan: Usse lal gulab bahut pasand the...baarish ki aawaz usse sangeet ki gunj lathi thi
Maan: Chatpate cheezo ka toh usse bada hi shaukh tha...golgappe toh uski kamzori hua karti thi
Maan: Baate akrna toh uski fav hobby thi...agar kisine galthi se bhi motha keh diya toh naak mein baitha hua gussa garazne ko taiyaar ho jaata tha
Geet smiled slightly on hearing this
Maan: Kayi saal guzar gayi kayi yaadein dhundali pad gayi par uska chehra main kabhi bhi bhula nahi paaya
Maan :Aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jab maine usse yaad na kiya ho...main shayad khud ko bhool saktha hoon par usse kabhi nahi...
Geet was listening very patiently there was a smile on her face
Maan: Kya hua Geet tumhe bhi kuch yaad aaya?
Geet: Nahi mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi aaya aur naahi mujhe kuch yaad karne ki zarurat hai
She stops the bike
Geet: Ghar aa gaya utro neche
Maan gets down
Geet parks her bike and without looking at Maan she starts walking
Maan: Geet ek minute
Geet: Kya hai?
Maan: Main tumse maafi maangna chahtha tha
Geet: Kis baat k liye?
Maan :Wo subah Dadima ki wajah se tumhara mood kharab ho gaya na issliye...I m sorry Geet... Good night
Saying so he goes to his house
Geet turns around but did not find him
She was going experiencing a different emotion at that time
She enters her house
Geet's room
Geet :Ye mujhe kya ho raha hai...ek din nahi hua usse aaye hue aur achanak se itni betaabi...
Her eyes automatically shift to the bag that she had throwed in the morning.
She takes the bag and locks it in the cupboard
She takes her mobile and dials a number
Hotel,
A man was busy making love with a girl
He was disturbed due to the constant ringing of his phone
He finally decides to recieve the call
Geet: Dev kaha ho tum?
Dev: Geet main kisi kaam se bahar hoon aur abhi bhi ussi kaam mein busy hoon
Saying so he bites the shoulder of that girl
Geet: Kaam aisa kaunsa zaruri kaam tha jo tum aaj mujhse mile bhi nahi aaye
Dev: Kyun mujhe miss kar rahi thi kya?
He was shamelessly moving his fingers around the girls br****s
Geet: Miss viss kuch nahi kiya bus kal mujhse milne aa jaana bye.
She cuts the call
Dev: Kal ki baat kal dekhenge filhaal aaj ki raat toh enjoy kar lu...
PRECAP: Adi: "Par Bro main college kyun join karu jabke meri studies complete ho chuki hai"
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IT REALLY MOTIVATES ME TO GIVE THE NEXT UPDATE QUICKLY
Love-Piya
PART 7: PAGE 117
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey am here to read it...actually there was a power cut for about 3 hours yesterday...thatsy...


bike racing...this sounds great...especially after what you had told me...vicky knows beforehand that he gonna lose...so whats use of racing...lol...but geet to geet hain...typical maan...ek baar jo decision ki to woh apne aap ki bhi nahi sunti...right...lol...


vicky...boy hokar darta hain...u fool...geet se kuch seekh...see how fearless he is...tumhe zaraa bhi sharam nahi hain...lol...oh no...police is already here...maan where r u...i wonder what will happen...but then geet is not even scared of police...so no tension as of now...hihi...


oye mr police...dont u know...this is geet handa...so why the hell will she stop on ur orders...geet hiding in a car...n definitely the car must ne that of mr MAAN...


maan...u already made geet ur mangetar...now only rab rakhaa...i wonder what will get tell u now...see...i told u that she gonna be super angry...but on the bright side...she called u by ur name...abhi k liye be happy with this only...coz she doenst want to remember anything further...


thnk god geet ke u dont want to keep any favour from him...at least u will give him a lift...this kinda reminded me of the cycle ride in DMG...though yahan o to complete opposite hain n different situation...


hey...dont tell me maan used to call her shehzaadi...am feeling so proud of myself n of course of u today...n i think u know why...haha..


i loved how maan was telling about their childhood...n that he still remebers that face...didnt i tell u that he is the sweetest ever...see...he managed to make THE geet smile with his sweet talks...


i knew it...tum humein bag k baare mein abhi k liye kuch nahi bataaogi...am so eager to know more about it...i mean what it contains exactly...


oh no...devil KI ENTRY...stupid donkey monkey...gadha...idiot...he is so cheating on geet...i wonder what did the stupid girl see in him...is she this blind...the hero is in front of her...n she is after the vilain...even she is a gadhi...


nice precap...adi i guess maan is saying so so that u can keep an eye on what geet does...right pihu?????...well am not sure though...


continue soon n thnxxx...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

we r too waiting for update dear... and happy to be second one at the post

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
i dont understand one thing if geet hates the word love then how comw she is girlfriend of dev plz piya clear it for me
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one
do continue
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update asusual.
Omg dev kitna bada idiot hai:-(
i just lovd maan's convo with geet.waitng eagerly 4 next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing n lovely part...

maaneets bike ride was cute..(even the other way)

geet already feeling diff in one day 4 maan was wow


cont soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
res ------------edited------------
finally me not late...aj hi apki update and aj hi mera comment😆...
update starts with geet another advanture ...of ye ladki itni crazy kyu hai...but i love her...and her advantures...kafi intersting hote hai...vicky ne socha ke shodo yaar race ko me apne pav pa kud kuhada nahi maroga...but geet ki ek baat to same hai jo thaan liya vo karke hi chodti hai...
muje bilkul bi nahi laga ke vo man maan hoga kyuke ajj me story without brain read kar rahi thi😆...islie but tab bahot acha laga jab maan ne kaha ke geet uski mangetar hai aur vo dono funtion attend karne ja rahe hai😳..very lovely...is story ka maan kitna lovely hai...ladkio toda bach ke rehna aur bach ke story read karna..warna real maan ki jagah sab is maan ke chakar me pad jayegi😆...i just kidding..
and u know me pehle ke part ke comment me likna bhool hi gai...us room ki key ke bare me...ap soch rahi hogi ke mane abi tak uske bare me na pucha aur na kuch bataya...ke muje kya laga...haina ap ye soch to jaroor rahi hogi...me batogi but yaha nahi...
precap...hm uske upar mera to tuka hai...ke maan ne adi ko janbooj kar join karne ko kaha kyuki adi geet ke saath rahe...and etc etc😆
missing u alot...now me sobbing😭
cont soon...
waiting eagerly
love u my shona
ur's khushi
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey piya hun 🤗

Awesome part n hope geet and maan unite soon 😳

Dev is disgusting n hope he is not geet lover or boy friend 🤢

love ya

priya


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