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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#691

awsome part specially when maan told her to close her eyes that was mind blowing part eagerly waiting for next part

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#692

absolutely brilliant...slowly Geet is getting to nderstand his lifestyle...i know baby steps

one thing i really liked is that Maan is not touchy abt being blind. he is confident of himse;lf. That is why he takes her questions in the right vein...understanding how new this is for her

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

last line was breath takin.geet is with maan in his sleeping bag.yipee..anyways loving this cuty geet.awww she is such a sweety.& maan he is just uncompareable.i am loving this blind maan more than anything else.

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

what an update keya...truly rejoiced reading each line yaar...
geet n maan r slowly n steadily opening up to each other...m sooo happy bout it :D
d part where maan asked her to close her eyes n dezcribed how he can MAHSOOS d scenic beauty was truly beautiful...n I just luved it wen geet opened her eyes n realised d way he pefectly described d mountains...brilliant job there yaar...
wow cool dey r camping...oh I just luv wen geet acts all childishly n maan handles her n teases her...:-)
so heavy rain n geet warm????? kya hoga keya????
u know me so greedy for ur updates...

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#695

awesome updt just luvd it muaahhh

aww maan drove her to a "date" if we can say dat

luvd how maan teased geet

& geet in order to understand maan started to learn his language

so geet all j hmmm with pari lolzzz

geet checking out her husband a lot

cont soon

thnx 4 d pm

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

Hey dear,tht was a gr8 update...
Maan made her feel how he looks being blind...
Description of the scenery while eyes closed was just awesome...
Continue soon dear...wud be waiting... TJ...!!!

PS-dear plzzz update ur blog as well...
I stick to the blog for updates...
It's easier for me to check it on my iPod...
Thnkx a lot n keep writing... :) :D

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393794

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#697

Part 23

U know u r making everyone addicted to this FF

By ur rapid updates

Now it has become a habbit to check if u have updated or not

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#698

Part 24

Love the camping idea

And how maan hears the wind..

It was written in a very good way

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#699

loved da update

especially maan laughing andd da way he tease geet

i wish geet understand even thou he blnd he still normal

do continue soon

wanna see some hot love soon

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Sumaiyah

@summikhan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

you didn't upset me... :( sorry if that comment showed that...
it suppose to show me scared lol... is it that slow.. but i had reason beind it thout you all understood..
but me probably will add little more.. to say its little slow :)

i understand.. I'll bare with it.. since I know u'll give a dhamakedaar union!

and don't be scared!! this really is an amazing and original FF! i couldn't even write a chapter