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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting...
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Hi Keyama...hws da studies? Hope all is well! Saw u updated n read part 20. Wil wait 4 pm bt read already. Wonderful n fab update! Geet cooking 4 Maan! Geet sacred to ask Maan something. Well written! Update soon n pm wen u do!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ part 20
different flavours of Pasta, but now she knows what pasta he likes
and maan felt she was feeling low, i just loved the way he always understands her feelings
and now what? will he teach her to read braile
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mahsoos...Part 21



Geet widens her eyes, thinking... oops he knew again she was here all along.
"do you need anything?" geet nodes a no with confusion, she wanted to ask something but she also equally scared. "I..."
"yes?"
Her mind went completely blank like the random dots on the page arranged in a rather weird way. Her eyes looked here and there in worry, gazing upon the floor then his flexible toned muscle, bicep... Then back to the book...
"nothing!" she annoyingly stands up. And walks out, like she can't even sit down quietly in front of him!... "pari se to koi problem nahi hota, seref hamse her waqt asking karte hi, ... Do you need anything? ... What is it?.." she made few faces, annoyingly twisting her duppata... And walked out of the room.

Maam hard the loud bang of the door. Guessing she is annoyed again... He sat with the silent for a while then opens a envelope that was send from geets collage about a trip in Brail language. he somewhere felt that's what she exactly wanted to ask... and maybe that's why there was bit of hesitation within her. he looked at the amount... he really now have t think about to get joint account for them self.

Geet wondered around the corridors for a bit wondering who to talk, who to ignore! Or not ignore anyone at all... Luckily vicky came along and bumped in to Geet...
"bhabi!" he gave her a surprising glare, nearly questioning "are you feeling well?"
"hi..." geets face lit up. Her room was so boring, specially with maan, god knows how she have managed to survive this two weeks!
"you - are - outside!!!!"
"ha... Au..." she looked around for something to say, then the blunt truth comes out of her mouth... "au maan bohot boring hi... Every time I sit in front of him he always ask do I need anything? Like nothing goes beyond those words!" she angrily looks at the floor... "so I walked out!" she made a baby face.
Vicky starred at geet for a moment then burst out in laugh... Geet gave him a annoying glare and was about to walk off! Vicky quickly stops her...
"Comen bhabi, everyone is upstairs playing antakshari... Let bhi work while we enjoy..."

As geet walked in flowed by vicky everyone stared with astonishing look, yet so happy..
"bhavi?" few of her brother in law called at the same time while geet sighly looked down.

Maan was rather irritated by the silent, since geet have walked in to his life it never have a silent, let that start from her wimping to winging... Her mahsoos was always there and that satisfied him... It's been an hour, maybe over the odd silent killed him within. He liked how she always complained about small thing, how she always over emphasized her words to nonsense and he like a idiot played along! Even though it did not happen so often one or two memory was enough to miss her...

Geet eventually walks in, singing. She can proudly claim she have won that round. Guessing more then 10 song, and winning... Maan came out And stood by the door making geet jump.
"look who decided to show there face!" she annoyingly points out the obvious. Maan completely unaware why she is angry at first place.
"hmm..."
"go... Go back to your little study!" she flapped her hand shooing him way. Frustrated.
"what?"
"don't you have any long Boring study to do to comfort those long fingers of yours?"
"I am done!"
Geet came close with a face, held his hand, gently hovered her soft small finger over his... "look it's so soft and smooth, go and polish a bit more!"
A small laughter was forming inside maan, he was only praying hoping he can hold it in.
"ap has rahi ho!" she could clearly see how his face was holding the laughter... "I can see! I have two eyes to see! It's not funny!"
She tip toes to be his height. While maan unknowingly held her bare waist just above the sari... She took a clear view of his face, "I can see you smiling..." she points at his cheek, then suddenly she lost her self completely... then realizing how close she is to him, remembering when she kissed him back at there sr, and that's how far it went... And that's how far it will ever go... She tries to go back but instead geets foot looses the balance and ended up relaxing in his arm completely...
Maan slides his hand around, and holds her even close...




"tum tik toh ho?"


the small smile from his face vanished, replacing with worry...
She quickly frees her self, backing way a bit. Embarrassingly looking down...


Geet slowly opens her eyes, 6am! He could here maan doing his exercise as usual. She slowly peps, this time glued to the wall, way from him, with far enough distance that he can't here!
"do you need anything?"
He came from no where again and before she could trip and land on the floor he holds her. Geet angrily makes a fist and rests over his chest. "chado!" she will curse the word "do you need anything" one day!


"what?"
"let me go I need to fresh up!"
"you nearly tripped!"
"and exactly how you know that?" she gave a angry glare, then realized he can't see. "I am angry at you, let me go!"
"why?" both stands up in a straight line. Maan was rather confused, was there any reason other then she is married to a blind man!
"what do you mean? And how did you know I was falling?"
"umm..."
"what is umm?"

Geet angrily snaps her foot, and walks off...

Maan dropped geet off to collage. As she walked in, first thing anjali reminded her was trip! "have you brought in the form and money?"
"what form?" geet have completely forgot and to ask maan, specially how he never fails to surprise and always she completely forgets about her question!
"no!"


"today is the last day!" she screams. Rolling her eyes. Teacher walked in with a list of people who will be attending the trips, and surprising enough geets name was there. Her ears couldn't believe, specially trip cost allot to. And she surly wasn't going to ask this stuff from her so called husband!
"this is so romantic, ji-ja-ji probably have done this!"

Geet couldn't believe her self. How did he know that she her self have completely forgot...



part 20-next-prev-
well.. another part..
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love the update...

Geet totally in dilemma... MSK missing his wife's cute tantrums ... totally in love with this story...

update next part soon...

thanks for updating and me now off to sleep...
Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..geet made maan smile:)..geet going out of her room and meeting the family good.. Maan is sweet but he should really stop that question everytime lol..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Trip jawoogi toh zaroor Maan ko miss karogi Geet!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww..im in love with this ff...love it alot..thanks for the update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update but i don't know wt u have stored for trip not the slit idea also but really love to c that maan n geet should talk each rather maan one question do need anything its irritated really then how can geet handle i really want geet come to know hw maan know the lifestyle of ormal people n he too normal inspite of blind then i think it changed the geet thinking persona which she always think that he is blind hw can he c continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
excellent one loved the update
continue soon

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