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Posted: 13 years ago
Mahsoos
Part 16

Oh tell me my dear
wat i want to hear ,
That words I much adore,
'Ilove u ' more and more!

Oh tell me my sweet rose
Tell me in a song and not in a prose
Your feelings from inside,
About the love i am to find !

Oh please say it to me,
Say it honestly
That u truely do
Love me so much as I LOVE U
❤️
Priya
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Maan scrolled the black limo glass while geet looked back.
"I will pick you up!"
"I will manage!" she quietly replies back, looking at people observing "what rich filth came in to there collage now!"
Maan nodes but still disagreeing, and geet new well even her no won't have any effect, he will be there waiting for her...

Maan had a very important meeting, He had a appointment with his dad, helping in a model of a holiday resort. Not that he had no keen interest in business he likes doing minimal work and spend time observing files, learning.
The model was made with special material, specially designed by khurana for blind people to feel visual. Mr John was very upset when he first found out maans eye sight could never reach the light, since then he have invested much money as possible making everything that won't make any blind person venerable, specially his son. Maan was taught with every normal skill that even for a normal human being is impossible... he learned from-self defense to imagine with his black world of every object. His hearing and the feeling was naturally strong which came as a bonus.

Maan steps out and walks into the office, no help, no stick, every part of the 10 floor building was known to his blind eyes. The rapid movement of the guards hand indicated how they were saluting maan. He formally smiled and walked towards the lift flowed by one of the security guard who was always been with him just in case.

John along with few other member was already present, sat in 20 chair table with many 3D design lying on the black glass table.
"oh maan you are in time! Perfect!"

...


3 pm, geet stood there watching her watch. Why she was waiting for him? She is the one who suggested she will manage her way! Then? Geer curled the edge of her long duppata with irritation. Not fancying to wait by the road side.
She takes her phone out, and wonders what's his number, she have been so lost in her little pool of misery that she completely have forgotten to save his number... "just wait until I am home!" she mumbled to her self!
10... 20... 30...

Another half hour ran by but still no maan or his limo. She thought about calling her parents for the number but surly that will never happen!
Suddenly maans car came by, her face lit up with excitement, taking a sigh breath but that soon disappeared when maan scrolls his window down, a girl was sitting at far corner of there limo...
"umm..."
Geet looked at her time. 3:30. He is 30 minute late.
"this is my wife geet, and this is pari." she looked at geet with one of those astonishing face. Rather over exited... Geet steeped in, sitting next to maan while not removing her gaze from the unknown girl.
"ok!"
"she is a student from our "light institution, I allow a top student to observe my lifestyle for a week. She soon to become a teacher..."
"she will be staying with us?"
Maan nodes which geet didn't like.
"it is a honer to met you mam. Out of 1000s I get this lucky option. I am fortunate."
"she also will create a file at the end of the week! After that we will chose if she fits for the job!"

Geet made a face. "ok!" she looked out of the window, still didn't forget maan was late and she does not have his number... As they arrived home she walked upstairs without any delay then looked back at maan. He was introducing pari to everyone. They happily accepted her...

Maan walks in to the room after 30 minute finding everything rather odd, very quit. "geet?"
She was sitting on the sofa in maans room, wondering...
Maan walks by there bedroom sofa, gently stroked the edge feeling any type of clue where she might be, he suddenly hard a small noise from his room, instantly guessing it's geet.
"what's wrong?"


Geet twists her neck, facing him. Her earring bashed against the cheek making maan sure where exactly she is...
"I was waiting for you. O have been waiting for 30 minute. You were 30 minute late. My leg gave up, they wanted to run way, but I had to convince them to stay, wait for you and what you do, you are 30 minute late." she complains, standing up on the sofa. Maan slowly loosens his tigh and walked towards her...
"then what happen to your leg?"
Geet made a confusing face as one by one, perfectly, without missing any spot he places his watch, wallet and the tih in three different place.
"my- l- leg?" she questions her self... Confusingly looking at maan. "my leg cried and complained that how cruel you are!" she shouts, stepping over the sofa, then quickly came in front of him. Looking at his wallet then his hand... He folds his sleeve up...
"acca!"
"yes!"
"next, how did your leg calm down?"
"are you making fun of me?"
Maan walked in to the bathroom and geet flowed. She rests both of her hand on the waist, looking angrily at him. He took a fresh towel out of the cupboard and puts it next to the shower. Then slowly puts his hand up to unbutton his shirt.
"no! Have you ever seen me laugh?"
"you were making fun of me. My poor leg stood under the scorching sun, waiting for you and you making fun of me!" she stamps her feet further and bang shuts the door. Irritated how he always is so calm.
She took her normal position in the bed, took the payel off, shoving it under the floor... "let's see how you like my silent!", then one by one, all her heavy jewelry along with cloths were off only a silk nightdress, with bra and nickers see through.. She went far corner of the balcony where the whole room was in clear view...
Maan walked out,his square face turned from one direction to another, he could not here her... He wiped his face quickly & put a polo shirt on, then spines towards the balcony. He did not require any other hint as the whole room covered with her smell... Her sweet aroma, a constant smell of of her perfume traveled with the wind telling him were exactly was she... Maybe play a little!
"geet?... Geet?"
A small smile became visible on geets face... "bingo.. Now see how you like that!"
"geet!"
Maan called few time she did not answer, to irritate her even further he opens the door and was about to go when geet quickly shouts "WHERE ARE YOU GOING?"
He stops instantly, turns his neck to the sideways... "what did you do with your leg next?"


she rolled her eyes, walked like a elephant towards him... "aha- you couldn't find me this time!"
She comes to the side. Looking at his face, "and which proves what!"
Geet bit her lips, it proves nothing. He is a simply a blind man, and what was the point,
"that suppose to annoy you! Why are you so calm?"
"what?"
"I thought you hate silent? You hate when I don't talk! You hate me!"
"do you have a disease of presuming stuff?"


Geet irritatingly stamps her foot and walks back in to the other room...

Dinner was served at usual time, geet again did not go down yet she felt restless for past 2 hours to walk down and help the lady... A guilt was stuck within that she is being little careless towards her new made relationship, even though she was still angry, angry at mostly everyone that nothing was letting her move forward...

Geet sat on her bed, surrounded by few shits that was given by the first day... Maan walks out of his room, faced his blank eyes towards geets bed...
"let's go downstairs for dinner, otherwise it looks bad." geet twisted her lips, curling the corner of her duppata. She did not want to join with maan, but she couldn't do anything either!
"umm-"
"lets go!"
He didn't give her 2nd thought, instead pressurized with words otherwise it looks very bad, not just for him most importantly her... 7days in to there marriage and they haven't attended a single dinner together.
She stood up, slides on the floor then flows him out.

Dinner room was gathered with people, table full of food filled with feast... Geets eyes instantly went on few of her favorite dish..
Few of her brother in law looked at geet with shock along with other family member.. "BHBHI!!!!!!" they shouted out like a classroom...
Two of maan bua came around, letting her sit, and then maan. One of the bua teased...
"so tell us maan,how much butter you have given to our poor geet to bring her down?" everyone laughed along the table...
While geet mumbles "butter or force!"
"I am sure it was bhabi who pushed him out of that beautiful room of his... Soon as I am married" vicky suggested "I am taking over that room. Can you believe the best room is given to him and we are stuck in square."
Maan took a bite of some pastry while shouts "CHUP, eat your dinner!"
Whole table went silent again. Geet looks up curiously... He is blind! He can't see fir god sake! Why are they scared?? Se annoyingly, silently popes one spoon to another in her mouth. Quick as possible...
"eat slowly geet!"
Last few words out of maan left her speechless again as the spoon fell on the plate.. Her wide eyes looking at him shockingly...
part 15prev- next-part 17
ok... supper poopper scared... pls tell me how this coming out..
bcs gosh idk...
i am pleading tell me...
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR all those lovely comments and like.. it
really motivates me allot to update
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh BTW me first😉👏

thanks for the update.

This is an awesome FF. I am completely hooked to it. Love the way Maan and Geet's relationship is progressing. I wanted Maan to be a little strict with Geet about her behavior with his family which you kind of took care of in this update when he insisted on her going down for dinner.

I understand that Geet is angry and confused and hurt but I hope she starts getting to knoe about his SUPER HUSBAND soon. Now that Pari is here, there would probably be some jealousy angle and may be Pari would indirectly make Geet realize what qualified and awesome person her husband is. And how much he has achieved even though he is blind.

I hope she starts falling in love with her husband soon😉

A question: if Pari is staying with them, isn't she also on the dinner table?

cannot plead and beg enough please please please update soon...please... cannot wait for next

Edited by anshimanshi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
rrr
keya...
i luv u i luv u
i luv u
i luv u
i luv u a lottt
🤗


what a beautiful update babes!!! loved every bit of it...👏
wow..she is angry yet she is expecting him to come for her
wow...so geet madam slowly opening up hun????😉

n the bestest best part...she threw away all her jewelerries just to irritate him...
but still he managed to target her!!!!!!
awww loving this maan so so so very much!!!!!!!😍

and tht sweet little aargument...probably they
hve spoken this long for the 1st time!!!!!!
haiye...me in mehsoosLand😳
want another update reall soon!!!!!


geet madam slowly falling for him...but still uncertain!!!

well good advancement in this update!!!!!
just super awesum!!!!

am really amazed with maan..his demeanor...

his way of handling things even when he is blind...wow...needs that much talent!!!!!

want another one real soon pleeejjj
prettyyy pleeejjj😳

me 2nd?????😭
Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

Yes, it seems she is rude...but then what are we expecting...??
She should be happy...enjoying her married life...??
If anyone thinks that her behaviour is not good then they cant understand what all she is going through...
It feels bad to see both of them in this situation...

Amazing part...i loved it...



thank you sooo much..
yes its not easy for geet specially after all this..
it have to come naturally... nothing happens by force..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: imaastha

Loved the update...
Geets rude behaviour is obvious...anyone in her situation would have behaved in the same way or worse...
She does have some feelings for maan...
Liking the way maan is supporting her. ...
Hoping that geets attitude changes soon...
Cont soon... ^_^



she sure does.. hehe
otherwise observing your own husband.. haha
:D
thanks yar for such lovely comment it means allot
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome update...
Loved it...
Loved maaneets cute fight...
Loved the way maan was teasing geet...
Finally geets behaviour is changing a bit...
Cont soon... ^_^
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks dear for the update
hope Geet gives Maan a chance and understand him
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

if they are her friends they will understand and will help her with the new situation she is in

or they have also left us to face everything alone
and maan .. he found her again ... i love when he always find her ...



thats true.. a true frind will support you no matter what..
but well we just wait untill geet finds that out :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice...
I want Geet falling for Maan now
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome lovely and mindblowing update

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