Maaneet OS& SS (Only Mine) Thread 1 .. (part 1-25) - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb brothers dear
lovely
great
update next one soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
just mindblowing...
so cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
thxn 4 pm

10 minutes lol


poor ranbir gaya kaam se

do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey ossumm yaaar ..
luved the concept ..
and the 1st part was also cool..
luved it thanks for the pm ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely starting dear...😊
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Nice start
Maan's family knows Geet and not Maan... how come????

Maan and Ranbir use to study together in london and became best friends but Ranbir never told maan than he had a sister because he was protective about her and did'hnt want anyone to know ... Dadi knew the Handa's they were friends .. maan was in london .. everyone has met maan except geet as the family wants to keep her safe and doesn't want her mixing with the world beacause she is too innocent and doesn't know about the outside world .. so maan thinks that handa's have only 3 sons because they kept their daughter protected .. i don't know how you people feel about this but when brothers become over protected they don't like even their friends knowing that they have sisters beacuse being possessive brothers they don't trust their frineds even .. hope it made somethings clear ?? 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
[SIZE=6]It IS AWSOME AND PLEASE CONTINUE THIS !!![/SIZE]
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok good sab geet k bhai nikle hehe starting mein i was thinking k ranbir kahi geet se shadi toh nahi karnewala
hmm...par maan office mein kya kar raha hai
continue soon
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you sooo much everyone .. i really love your comments .. They encourage me alot .. Thank you 😃😃😃
PART 2
The ladies came back from the pooja house and noticed ranbir standing alone while or he others in one corner .. first they did not get it but then smiled realizing Ranbir was the one because of whom geet was about to cry so how can hey forgive him so easily ..
Geet : Come i'll tie rakhi to all of you .. she said chirpily
With that everyone sat on the couch and Ranbir being the elder went first .. As per year each brother sings a song for geet telling her how much they all love her ..
Ranbir : Taaron ka chamakta gehna ho
Phoolon ki mahekti vaadi ho
Us ghar mein khush haali aaye
Jis ghar mein tumhaari shaadi ho
She smiled but then made baby face whe he said about her marriage .. everyone laughed
Yeh phool tumhaare zevar hai
Yeh chaand tumhaara aaina

He threw flower petals on her making her feel special
Har aaina tumko dekhe
Tum to aisi shehzaadi ho
He said kissing her forehead and everyone smiled seeing their love ..
Khushiyon ke mahelon mein baitho
Koi gham na tumhaare paas aaye
Na umr ka pehra ho tum pe
Mere dil ki dua yeh rang laaye
Geet then tied the rakhi on his hand .. put tikka .. and gave a bite of meethai to him .. He in return gave her chocolate knowing she doesn't like methai ..Before she could ask for a gift Ranbir handed him the car keys .. she smiled ..
Rab hasta hua rakhe tumko
Tum to hasne ki aadi ho
Everyone clapped and Mrs handa and dadi's eyes were teary seeing their princess soo happy
Then came Yash ..
Yash is althougha flirt but being with everyone else he becomes consious and dooesn't like to express his feelings .. He did'nt want to sing .. Geet tied him the rakhi and tikka .. she gave him chocolates and he made her eat chocolate as well .. She then told him to sing he refused .. She became sad and he could not tolerate that so for her hapiness he sang but little ..
Yash : Phoolon Ka Taaron Ka Sabka Kehna Hai
Ek Hazaron Mein Meri Behna Hai
Sari Umar Hame Sang Rehna Hai
Phoolon Ka Taaron Ka Sabka Kehna Hai
Ek Hazaron Mein Meri Behna Hai
Sari Umar Hame Sang Rehna Hai
She smiled and hugged him .. She was soo happy that he sang for her .. Every year he would some up with an excuse and she would not force but this year he sang for her and she was soo happy .. He smiled and gave her a diamond bracelet which was very delicate and had geet engraved in it on the inner side of the band ..
Everyone was pleasantly surprised when yash sang they had not expected it but then they knew he could do anything for his princess ..
Next turn was of Rahul ..
She repeated the same procedure with him and he gave her a huge teddy bear which was whiti in colur and a cute red nose written ' i love you sister ' on it .. She was overwhelmed .. he then sang this song to tease her ..
Rahul : Meri behna hai phool bahaaron ka
Meri behna hai noor nazaaron ka
Meri behna ke jaisi koi behna nahin
Bina iske kahin bhi mujhe rehna nahin
Jaise hai chaand sitaaron mein
Meri behna hai ek hazaaron mein
Hum jaise bhole bhaalon ki
Yeh duniya to hai dilwaalon ki

Everyone got emotional and vicky thought to ease the situation on his turn .. When geet was done tieing rakhi on him he held her hand and statred singing ..

Vicky : Bachnaa ae haseenon lo main aa gayaa
Hay, bachnaa ai haseenon lo main aa gayaa
Husn ka aashiq, husn ka dushman
Apni ada hai yaaron se judaa, hai ho!
Hai, bachnaa..
Everyone laughed ..
Tujhse Log Kahenge, Na Kar Pyaar Mujhe
Main To Lakh Bura Hu, Neend Chura Lu Hosh Uda Du
Main To Baahon Mein Le Ke, Raah Bhula Du Baat Bana Du
Chahe Jahaan Dil Ko Chupaa
Baaton Hi Baaton Main, Do Mulaqaton Mein Le Loon
Bachna Ai Haseeno Lo Main Aa Gaya
Ae Bachna Ai Haseeno Lo Main Aa Gaya
Husn Ka Aashiq Husn Ka Dushman
Apni Ada Hai Yaaron Se Juda, Hey, Ho
Bachna Ai Haseeno Lo Main Aa Gaya
Ae Bachna Ai Haseeno Lo Main Aa Gaya
When he sang these line evryone was okay except yash .. he knew vicky was a flirt and so was he 😉 that is why he felt uncomfortable when he was around his sister .. So he glared at him when he sang those lines and left dancing with geet and ran towards Mrs handa .. he danced with her romantically while all giggled ..
Aye Dil Laaya Hai Bahaar Apnon Ka Pyar Kya Kehna
Milein Hum Chhalak Utha Khushi Ka Khumaar Kya Kehna
Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj Ghar Hai Mera Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna
Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj Ghar Hai Mera Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna

Aye Dil Laaya Hai Bahaar Apnon Ka Pyar Kya Kehna
Milein Hum Chhalak Utha Khushi Ka Khumaar Kya Kehna

Mr handa sang this song .. joined by dadi .. mrs handa and then everyone contibuted and started to dance .. They were all so emotional but at the same timee happy that they forgot Ranbir was not forgiven lol 😉😆
After some time ..
Ranbir : princess ! Come i'll show you your car ..
Yash : No ! geet will not come with you .. you came late ..
Everyone supported him ..
Ranbir : But ..
he said and made a sad face and pleading eyes asking Geet to help ..
Geet : Bhai ! it's okay na ... I forgive him .. he won't be late next time .Right Veer jee ??
Ranbir : yes I promise !
Mr handa : That is exactly what you said last time also 😡
Ranbir gulped ! geet smiled weakly knowing he came late last time also ..
Geet : Acha papa i have an idea .. Veer jee you become a murgha for 10 minutes then they will start talking to you .. Theek hai na ??
All of them started to laugh at her suggestion .. geet too giggled .. And seeing her happy he did'nt protest and he became a murgha .. Yash and vicky clicked pictures and started to tease him saying if these went in the press who would believe the Ranbir handa .. MD of handa empire became a murgha .. But yes ranbir could have done anything for his sister if that was giving away his life he would have done that without even a second thought ..
After ten minutes of his punishment everything was normal and they went toward lunch .. but the ranbir's teasing session was endless .. They all had their lunch
All the while Dadi maa was admiring geet .. she had always loved geet for her bubbly nature and innocense .. she had always wished secretly for Geet to become her bahu .. But knowing maan she never brought up this topic .. He then went to london and now that he is back she thought he would have had overcome his wounds from the past but no he had become more stone hearted .. she sighed .. Making geet her daughter in law would remain a dream ...
After finishing the lunch they all went to their work and dadi back home ..
PRECAP : Geet requesting for something that shocked everyone 😲😲😲😲
Please do like and comment 😊 I will give the next update tonight or most probably tomorrow 😊 As i have holidays so i would most likely update daily 😊 I know you all are waiting for Maan to come in picture he will come in the next update or so .. 😃 Please comment and suggest further track ..
Thank you !
Naima !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome👏👍🏼⭐️😳
all songs are superb
cont soon
thanks for pm

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