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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anjucool

awesume update

i think maan had bad past tat's why he got angry with marriage word
waiting to know what happen in past
pls continue soon

yes u r right it is related with his past thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

superb updates. maan hates marriage?? precap seems to b interesting

thanks dear yes he hates marriage reason? u will come to know in the future updates
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CuteTommy

good one...nice update...

thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
continue soon😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KINGKHANFAN

awesome update

continue soon😍

Thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your constant encouragement and motivation. I have replied to comments. My reply starts from page 93
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PART 53

Geet: Suniyeji

Maan: Geet tumne kuch kaha?

Geet: Ji maine kaha k kya aapka irrada puri raat iss sunsaan raste mein gusarne ka hai kya?

Maan: Nahi Geet chalo chalthe hai

Both of them get into the car
Maan did not speak anything he was still engrossed in some thoughts and he had a serious expression on his face

Geet: (thinking) Najaane ye kaunsa dard hai jiske wajah se Maan andar hi andar tadap rahe hai...main inhe iss halat mein nahi dekh sakthi mujhe inke mood ko change karne k liye kuch karna hi hoga

Geet: Isse toh achha hotha k hum plane se hi Amritsar aa jaate

Maan: Kya kaha tumne?

Geet: Wohi jo aapne suna

Maan: Geet mujhe lagta hai tumhare dimag mein koi bahut bada problem hai abhi kuch der pehle toh tum keh rahi thi k tumhe car mein aane ka idea pasand aaya aur ab yun achanak se ye idea tumhe bakwaas nazar aa raha hai

Geet: Maine jobhi kaha wo sahi kaha hai samjhe aap

Maan: Ji Madam main toh samaj gaya par shayad aap nahi jaanti aise baat baat par mood change karnewale logo ko pagal kehthe hai

Maan: Waise ek baat bataiye Madam kya aap pehle kisi mental hospital mein thi?

Geet: Haan sahi farmaya aapne main ussi hospital mein thi jaha pe aap bhi bharthi the..itne jaldi bhool gaye

Maan: Kya tumne mujhe pagal kaha?

Geet: Hai meri itni jurat k main aapko pagal kahu na baba na...maine toh aisa nahi kaha par aapne aisa samaj liya iska matlab hai k sach mein aap kisi mental hospital mein the...

Maan: Geet dekho main keh raha hoon humara jhagda ho jaayega

Geet: Toh ho jaane dijiye main yahi chahthi hoon

Maan: Kya tum chahthi ho k main tumse jhada karu magar kyun?

Geet: Jhagde k bahane kum se kum aap mujhse baat toh karenge...yun ajnabeeyon ki tarah muh ferkar toh nahi baithegena

Maan stops the car

Maan could see some pain in Geet's eyes

Maan: Geet dubara kabhi bhi ye mat sochna k tum mere liye ajnabee ho...mere liye meri zindagi ka sabse anmol hissa ho tum...

Geet: Agar aisa hai Maan toh aap mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahe the...mujhe laga k shayad aap mujhse naaraz ho...

Geet: Mera yakeen maniye maan main aapko koi chot pauchana nahi chahthi thi...agar meri wahjah se aapko koi bhi takleef hui ho toh mujhe maaf...

Before she could complete her sentence Maan covered her mouth with his palm

Maan: Nahi Geet aisi baat nahi hai aur khabardaar agar tumne dubara meri Geet par koi aisa waisa ilzaam lagaya toh...

He starts caressing her face

Maan: Meri Geet mujhe kabhi bhi koi takleef de hi nahi sakthi infact jab bhi uska muskuratha hua chehra dektha hoon toh dil ko ek tasalli milthi hai ek sukoon miltha hai

Geet starts smiling

Maan: Bus humesha issi tarah se muskurathe rehna

Geet: Iss chehre ki muskurahat aaphi se hai maan aap bhi kabhi bhi gumsum mat baitna ye main dekh nahi sakthi

Maan: Aapka hukum sarakho par hai ji ab toh aap khush hona

Geet: Nahi...

Maan: nahi?

Geet: Haan pehle mujse vaada kijiye k aap uss dusht danav ko humare iss trip se dur hi rakenge

Maan: Geet tumne mujhe phir se Dhust danav kaha?

Geet: Maine toh uss sadu MSK ko kaha mere Maan ko thodi na kaha...

Maan: Achhaji ye achhi tarkeeb nikhali hai zara ye bataiyeji k aap meri taareef kar rahi hai ya burai

Geet: Main toh taareef hi kar rahi hoon mujhe uss MSK se kya lena dena mere liye toh mere Maan hi mere sabkuch hai

Maan: Hmm...Achha toh thik hai uss MSK ko hum humare aas paas bhi mandrane nahi denge ab toh khush ho na

Geet: Haan ab main khush hoon...toh chale

Maan: Jo hukum

Maan tries to start his car but is unable to do so

Geet: Kya hua Maan

Maan: Pata nahi Geet car start nahi ho rahi

Geet: Ofho Maan aapka itna bada empire hai kuch toh uska fayda uthaiye aur koi dhang ki car khared lijiye

Maan: Geet tum na...

Geet: Maan mujhse ladkar fayda nahi hai samajdaari issi mein hai k hum iss khatara car ko yahi chod de aur koi aas paas k hotel mein filhaal k liye chale jaaye

Maan: Kabhi kabhi samajdaari ki baate kar lethi ho Geet

Geet: Meri samajdaari toh main aapko bademein bataaungi pehle yaha se nikalthe hai

Both leave the car and start walking

Geet: yun thand mein chalne ka maza hi kuch aur hai haina?

Maan: Maza? issmein mazewali baat kaunsi hai Geet?

Geet: Kyun agar koi special saath ho toh mushkil se mushkil raah bhi aasan ho jaathi hai toh ye toh bus ek mamuli sa safar hai

Maan holds her hand

Maan: Har mamuli sa safar ek yaadgaar pal bun jaata hai agar koi saath dene wala ho

Geet: Hmm.. toh aapko baate banana bhi aata hai
Maan: Tumhare sangathi ka asar hai
Geet: Wo toh hai...
Geet: Maan ye dekhiye yaha pe ek hotel hai
Maan: Haan chalo andar chalkar dekhthe hai
They enter the hotel
Manager: Hello Mam. Hello Sir
Geet: Hello
Maan: Hume 2 rooms ki zarurat hai
Manager: Par Sir filhaal humare hotel mein sirf ek hi room khali hai
Maan: Kya bus ek hi room itna bada hotel hai kya aapke paas rooms bhi available nahi hai. Chalo Geet chalthe hai
Geet: Maan bachpana chodiye ab aap hi bataiye itne raat ko hum doosra hotel kaha se dhundenge aur samajlo k hume hotel mil bhi gaya toh kya guarantee hai k waha pe rooms available honge
Maan: Geet par yaha bus ek hi room hai tum samaj rahi hona?
Geet: Haan main samaj rahi hoon toh ussmein kaunsi badi baat hai uss room mein aap hi mere saath hongena koi gair toh nahi toh phir main kyun fikr karu?
Maan: Are u sure Geet?
Geet: Manager sahab aap ye room hume de dijiye
Manager: Ji Mam
Geet: Mr. Maan Singh Khurana ab aap kis soch mein pad gaye?
Maan: Kuch nahi Geet
Maan: Manager sahab wo actually humari car bahar kharaab khadi hui hai kya kisi mechanic ka intezaam ho saktha hai?
Manager: Sir iss waqt toh thoda mushkil hai haan magar kal subah tak aapki car thik ho jaayegi
Maan: Good

He gets a call on his mobile

Maan: Adi ka call
Maan: Geet tum ye formalities complete kar doh main Adi se baat kar letha hoon
Manager: Mam Sir ka naam Mr. Khurana haina?
Geet: Ji aapko kaise pata?
Manager: Wo abhi aap unhe unke naam se bula rahi thina issliye
Geet : Oh...haan aap issi naam se room book kar dijiye
Maan: Adi humari car beech raaste mein bannd pad gayi hai issliye aaj raat hum waha nahi pauchh paayenge clients se kehna k hum unse kal milenge thik hai

He ends the call
Manager: Mam aap yaha pe sign kar dijiye

By that time Maan comes back
Maan: Chalo Geet ..room mil gaya na?
Geet: Haan Maan bus sign karna tha aap sign kar dijiye
Maan: Sign main karu ya tum kya farak padtha hai
Geet: Thik hai main sign kar dethi hoon

She does not see the name that was entered in the register as she was in a hurry

They take the room keys and leave

Manager was looking at the register

Manager: Mr and Mrs. Khurana...bahut hi pyara jodha hai..ekdum perfect couple
Maaneet enter their room
PRECAP:
"Kuch khaas hai kuch paas hai kuch ajnabee ehsaas hai 😳😳😳😳😳
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Love-Piya

PART 54: PAGE 122
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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once again a rocking update
inki understanding is getting so so strong day by day
geet and maan u just rock so do u piya
superbly written dear

geet ne kitne bharose se maan ke saath ek room mein rehne ko bol diya
yar mere pass words hi nai hai
what do i say now...

ur just the best

urs smiling angel...
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

pehle se hi bata rahi hoon...this update gonna be awesome..this am sure of...unlike what u were thinking of...lol...


u started with suniyeji...i guess i have lost count of how many times i told u that i really find this sweet from either of them...


yes geet...ur right...u gotta change his mood...but how...me so eager to know too...omg maan...why are u being nasty...cant u see the poor girl is trying to make u feel light...n in case u forgot maan...even u r in the category of mads coz even u have the habit of changing ur mood from time to time...hihi...


i love u geet for saying what i was wishing for...that even maan came from the same mental asylum as urs...this was too good...i just loved it...ji sahi farmaya aapne mr msk...she called u mad as well like i was wanting to tell u...hihi...


Maan: Geet dubara kabhi bhi ye mat sochna k tum mere liye ajnabee ho...mere liye meri zindagi ka sabse anmol hissa ho tum...


hayyyee...i so loved this from maan...i guess this was the best...pehle pagal kaha...ok...indirectly but she said it...lol..n now dusht danav...ab kya kya sunna baaki hai maan...


maan...befor i forget...lemme tell u...i just love ur car...i mean =...lok at her...even she knows that both of u need some privacy...lol...


ek hi room hai...am sure maan must b so happy deep nside...well atleast we readers are...she didnt see the name so obviouslt the manager might have written mr n mrs khurana...see i was right...mr manager ur right...they r THE perfect couple ever...


hey PIhu...u were damn right about the precap...u r using kuchh khaas...its one of my favourites...u remember we were wishing for this during maaneet's 2nd SR in the serial...


n now like maan even am gonna say...kabardaar agar tumne dubara meri piya ki update ko bakwaas kaha...warna...bUAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH...lol...


continue soon n thnxxx...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sabko marne ka iradha hey kya
asie precap dekhar
ossumpart dear
enjoyed it
waiting for the next one

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