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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

PART 3

Riddhima – Raju (horrified, grabs Armaan's hand)

Raju – sahee pehchana aap ne (looks at Armaan) lagta hai aap busy hai, mein baad mein aata hoon (leaves)

Armaan – yeh kaun ajeeb sa admi tha basket?

Ridz – (still scared)yeh…Raju

Armaan – Raju???

Ridz - haan….mere college mein tha, Armaan mujhe dar lag raha hai

Armaan – dar? Kyun? Yeh Raju se tumhara kya lena dena?

Riddhima – Woh actually… bohot choti story hai…. Meri best friend, Diya, Raju ki girlfriend thi, ek din meine use kisi aur larki ke saath mall mein dekha tha, woh uss larki ka haath pakra hua tha, aur pata nahin kya kya kar raha tha…

Armaan – phir?

Riddhima – Phir meine Diya ko phone karke usse mall mein bulaya aur usse sab kuch bata ke Raju ke paas le gayi… aur phir Raju aur Diya ka break up hua…tabse Raju mujhse badla lene ka koshish kar raha hai…aur ab woh yahan tak aagaya…Armaan mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai.

Armaan – don't worry….mein hoon na, acha per Anjali ya Dr.Shashank, sister Padma ko yeh baat pata hai?

Riddhima – nahin kisi ko nahin pata (Ridz still shaking because she's scared)

Armaan hugs Ridz to comfort her

Anjali comes in - oh, what should have I expected? (AR stop hugging) Ridzi Armaan, kabhi toh break le liya karo

Armaan – haan, dekho mein shareef larka hoon, tumhari behen hai na baar baar izat lootne ki koshish karti hai

Ridz – Armaan…jhoote, di yeh jhoot bolraha hai, liar!

Anjali – okay, okay choro, Dad bahar wait kar rahe hai…ghar jaana hai, see you Armaan

Armaan – see u… bye Riddhima

Riddhima - bye

RIDDHIMA AND ANJALI IN THEIR ROOM

Ridz texting Armaan

Anjali – Riddhima! Kya hai ab sirf Armaan hai tumhari dunya mein… mujhe bhool jao

Ridz – Di, aisa kuch nahin hai Armaan mujhe baar baar tang kar raha hai

Armaan cums out from the curtains – chal jhooti

Riddhima – Armaan tum yahaan…

Anjali – lo, dekha kya kaha tha meine

Ridz – diii…

Armaan - actually na mujhe Riddhima se kuch baat karni hai, akele

Anjali – ab aisi kya baat karni hai, anyway whatever mujhe waise kapre badal ne hai, aur neeche mom ki help bhi karni hai (leaves)

Ridz – Armaan tumhe is waqt kya baat karni hai? And it better be important!

Armaan – important hai! Mein yeh kehne aya tha ke Raju ko tumhara mobile number pata chal gaya, reception ne de diya… aur acha hua meine sun liya

Riddhima – Toh ab hum kya karenge?

Phone rings – caller id says private number

Armaan – uthao, aur speaker pe lagao

TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
yepiii i am first to comment...
hey awsome update yaar 😊...now ridz finds her comfort only with armaan...gosh what raju is up to...????😔 but armaan hain na...😉

pls update soon...and pm me😊

AR love for lyf
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved AR
Armaan Sooo sweet
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
great update dear
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15

awsum update..

wating to see wat armi will do..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Nice ff...post the parts jaldi jaldii...and add me to pm list...
Cant wait to read mre
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Hi Dear,
Im happy that you started this FF again
cause i forgot the whole story its like a new ff 😆
Coming to the parts amazing
Loved AR moments
And curious to know what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Update soon.
LoveSurat
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
nice ff!
loved AR moments!
cont soon
can u plz add me 2 PM list?

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Posted: 13 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: hotKaJen

nice ff!
loved AR moments!
cont soon
can u plz add me 2 PM list?


Yes sure 😉 and thank you 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20

Hey guys heres part 4, i know it's short, but enjoy :) and i kind of ruined the story😕, but ill make it better 😆

PART 4

Riddhima picks up phone puts it on speaker

Ridz – h-hello (voice shaking, Armaan by her side, hand on Ridz shoulder)

Raju – hello Dr. Riddhima Gupta, woh actually reception ne phone number diya tha

Riddhima – j-jaanti hoon

Raju – oh, kher mein yeh kehne ke liye phone kiya tha ke, mujhe Diya se milado, warna

Ridz interrupts, angry – warna kya? Mujhe pata hai, jab tak Armaan mere saath hai tum kuch nahin kar sakte mujhe

Raju – aisi baat hai…theek hai, abhi mujhe jaana hai, per bohot jald hamari muleqaat hogi

Ridz puts phone down

Armaan – Oye Hoye, itna bharosa mujh pe

Anjali comes running – Armaan tum abhi bhi yahan ho, Papa arahe hain!

Riddhima – Armaan jao

Armaan – nahin

Anjali – Armaan mazaak karne ka waqt nahin hai, tum jao

Armaan – mein mazaak nahin kar raha mujhe nahin jaana

Riddhima points at window – Armaan please jao, papa ajae ge

Armaan – itne pyaar se bol rahin ho toh theek hai mein jaa raha hoon, per this is not fair, mujhse milti kyun ho phir? (climbing out )

Ridz and Anjali – Armaaan!!

Armaan leaves, Shashank cums in – Riddhima, Anjali abhi tak uthi kyune ho? Sone jao

Ridz – Gi papa

NEXT MORNING: SANJEEVANI

Ridz at her locker, Armaan cums in – hi Riddhima, kal raat tum mere aankhon ke saamne ho kar bohot acha laga

Ridz silent, acts as if she didn't hear him

Armaan – Basket kya hua? Tum mujh per ghusa kyun ho?

Riddhima slams locker – ghusa kyun ho matlab? Pehle bohot hero bante ho phir dusri larkyon ke saamne aage peeche ghumte ho, Armaan bohot hogaya hai, tum agar mujhse pyaar karte ho toh tum un larkyon pe lines nahin marte

Armaan – mein larkyon ke saath, Riddhima tum yeh kya keh rahin ho?

Ridz– phir jhoot, Armaan, I trusted you! Tum woh larki, kya naam hai….haan Sanjana ke saath flirting nahin kar rahete kya?

Armaan – Sanjana? Mein kisi Sanjana ko nahin jaanta

Ridz – nahin jaante? Acha? Theek hai, chalo mere saath

Ridz drags Armaan to the general ward, next to a patient – toh phir yeh kaun hai?

Patient (Sanjana) – Hi ammy darling, dekho tumhare liye mein Sanjeevani mein admit ho gayi

Sanjana holds Armaan's hand, Ridz mad/jealous, Armaan takes hand away and puts it in his pocket

Armaan – Riddhima mein ise jaanta bhi nahin hoon, I swear

Ridz – Armaan yeh larki khud keh rahin hai ke tum dono 2 months saath ho (crying) aur tum keh rahe ho tum ise jaante nahin, kyun Armaan? Kyun? (runs off crying)

Armaan – kaun ho tum? Aur tumne Riddhima se kyun kaha ke hum saath hai?(Angry)

Sanjana – as Riddhima said mein Sanjana hoon, asal mein toh Raju ki girlfriend per Raju ke liye, im acting as if im your girlfriend, aur yeh baat (raises one eyebrow) tumhe, mujhe aur Raju ko pata hai, Riddhima ko nahin, aur tum dekhna mein aur Raju tum dono ko barbaat kar denge, aur Riddhima ke liye barbaadi tumhara jaana hai, toh tum dekhna kese hum, Riddhima aur tumhara rishta tor denge (evil laugh)

Armaan – tum aisa kuch nahin karogi

Armaan runs to the stair case (fire exit) looking for Riddhima to tell her the truth

Armaan – Riddhima…. Woh ek jhooti hai, mere aur uske beech mein kuch nahin hai, try to understand

Riddhima – Aur mujhe kese pata agar tum ek jhoote ho? Tum bhi toh jhoot bol sakte ho

Armaan – per Riddhima

Ridz raises hand (signal to stop) – bus Armaan (still crying) mujhe kuch nahin suna. (leaves)

Armaan upset, more like angry, punches the wall

TO BE CONTINUED


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