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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Hi Iyra!! I just read ur FF.. It is amazing and take off was really good.. The way Arnav and Kushi's feeling for each other was said well..👍🏼

Please add me to your PM list as well!! 😳

Update soon.

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Fab update dear!!!

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Nice one hun!

I really liked the jealousy element. You've written Arnav and Khushi's feelings beautifully!

😊

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sravz23

@sravz23

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Not because she was scared of finding something in his eyes, but she was scared of what he might read in her own'..

wonderful dialogue.

continue sooon.

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Very very good, don't stop... I'm officially addicted!

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654772

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Ur an awesome writer! Im falling for ur ff. Im falling hard!

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Hey Iyraa.. It was a nice update.. The way Arnav made Kushi to dance with him due to jealousy.. I loved that part..😳

You ended the chapter beautifully with Kushi's feelings..😊

Cant wait for next chapter.. Thanks for the PM dear.. !!

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farhacassim

@farhacassim

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Wonderful update...loving your ff. Thanx for the pm.

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Nice update continue soon and plz add me to your pm list...👏

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shaam91

@shaam91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

he looked at her knowing in that moment that she was all he ever wanted and all he could never have..he looked at her knowing in that moment that she was all he ever wanted and all he could never have..

lyraa u are a girl after my heart darling...im such a sucker for lines like these..:P

beautiful...keep the emotional quotient alive and soon ull have the most read ff..:)

im officially in love with ur ff...

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