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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

Birdyyysss ghar ke ekdum paas hi hai... 😛

haayy..sach much birdys ka hai?😭😭😭
my fav...😛😛
birdys ka mousseee...😉😉😉
bulgerian dome brownie point...
walnut brownie RaB...
fresh fruit...oven freshh😛😛😛😛
and hangout ka bhi😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

haayy..sach much birdys ka hai?😭😭😭

my fav...😛😛
birdys ka mousseee...😉😉😉
bulgerian dome brownie point...
walnut brownie RaB...
fresh fruit...oven freshh😛😛😛😛
and hangout ka bhi😭😭😭

jab hum milengena tabhi khilaungi... ab rona band karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
haan haan!! mai wait karing!!
thank god nidz baby stalk mahi karing tumnko abhi..warna hum dodno loot jaate:(
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Posted: 13 years ago
meee

GRRR...on a scale of 1-10...i am so hating you at a 15...like seriously...u purposely try to torture me and u call me the torture queen...
Care to explain why yr lovely MnM make more contact than necesscary????? 😡 It's one thing that she cares for him...and wants to help him...but why is becoming so important for him? like why did she squeeze his hand?? and u telling me to imagine something else...😡...oh aashu...me wants to kill u...and they are bounded by pain...like HELL NO...the only person maan can be bounded in any way is his Geet...and no one else...
oh lord..this love triangle is killing me...and u are bend on increasing the torture...
Meera can be a gud friend...she can help him heal...she can help him find Geet...but why does she have to pretend like she knows him so well??? okay...i better stop about MnM cause i will only make myself more frustrated...😆

Okay...we shall talk abt Mrs.Khurana...Thank you for bringing her in 🤗
This is what i am understanding...that in the past...they were actaully togther as a married love..that they were in love...or atleast Geet was in love with him completely sharing anything and everything whereas he kept himself hidden...sharing nothing more than his body 😳 as you said...she thinks that he claimed to love her...that he didn't really love her
but just what did the boy do ? sighhhsss...i say this to jazzy too...i hate being on the recieving end at times like this...when the need for answers is just too much...
and who is this he that found her on the stairs the next morning?? like honestly...u are bringing another dude to this e-story...make me kill u aashu...make me kill u...
She claims that she once 'loved' him...who is she kidding??...the woman is still hopelessly in love with him...but what did the man do ????????

Sighhhsss...the update was awesome...but it left me with even more questions than before...not to mention that it increased my BP reading a certain part...

But me still love my DQ 🤗
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Super part.. although I could have done without the meera part.. lol.. sorry hun, I cant help it if I feel murderous rage when I imagine Maan holding meer's hand to stop her, or she crying openly in front of him while bandaging his hand and whatnot.

yup and shes good and nice but.. sorry.😆

So curious to know what happened in the past.. geets anguish and disillusionment , and Maans guilt rage revenge and disaster..

Do continue soon !


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Posted: 13 years ago
all u people out there who wanted geet in present, i accept ur thanks... yeah yeah my constant pestering and also sometimes emotionally blackmailing aash has worked well and she has been blaming me for the delay in the update...blaming that Gouri wants geet in present n coz of that the update is getting delayed...but yeh finally we hv the update and i must say aashu its very very well written... Geet's pain at her separation from her love yet wanting to live independently as she has always been ruled by the men in her life at all stages of life and maan having used her... geet's pain very nicely portrayed...well atleast we now know that geet is crying her pain out daily at night but is safe and is making a small living for herself...
maan after having reached a dead end on his search for geet is spending time drinking away...very bad maan... meera is as usual helping maan... but lady its good to help a frnd but not so good to try helping a guy u love... in the end u will end up hurting urself as u know that the one u love loves someone else and will nvr love u back the way u do...so atleast stay away from him for a while ... shooo away meera...
yeah sometimes women understand women's problem better but when it is a problem between hubby-wifey, its best left to be handled by them ... no third person's involvement is needed... its unwanted so meera shooo away...shooo from maan's life... shooo
aashu awesome update... moi loved it... lots of love to u for honouring my demand of geet in present... n anyway even if u hadnt honoured my demand i wud hv still loved u lots... 😆😆
wow maine itna bada comment diya so mere liye taliyan ... 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy Diwali to u n everyone! Read the update! Bt y no pm? Nywyas intense superb n rcoking update! Please pm wen u update. Loved it! Btw where is ur pm list??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aash indeed a long update..loved geet ka inner turmoil..finally she comes out of her den..thanks for showing her pov poor girl had never been given the independence to decide for herself feel so bad for her such a male centric society.. Maan had ulterior motives wen he married her..*shocked* poor geet her world must have come crumbling down once she faced reality.. All used her as though she is a piece of toy and not a human being.. Did maan pretend of loving her for so many days.. She loved him to bits and all he did was shatter her heart to a million pieces..he deserves all the punishment in the world.. Geet is all alone in the cruel world her family not by her side..how much ever she will try to show how strong she is when she is alone she cant fool herself..all her pain is so evident..the darkness cant hide her loneliness.. Me feels so bad for her..maan atleast has meera by his side with whom he can share his sorrow but poor geet.. Feel bad for meera poor girl just trying to help maan..trying to complete atleast one lovestory unite soulmates but maan and his attitude.. Bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha..how dare he shout at her..poor girl was just trying to help na..stupid maan..u leave at a cliffhanger..dare u disappear for more than a week now...so maan will tell meera what ill words he used or what doubts did he have on her integrity and fidelity..hope meera can help..what made maan fall for geet if he married her only for reasons other than love..madam update soon ok..
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Posted: 13 years ago
u write pain very well. it was beautifully portrayed.
meera is sweet and i don't like it that i can't seem to appreciate her at all. may b coz i'm a huge fan of men and women being friends but not whn they harbour feelings for eachother. those kind of relations in a 3 ppl setup always bring dirt at the end. my prejudice is not letting me enjoy meera's sincerity 😡
i'm dying to know what in the world maan did to geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
u updated...that too when the PC was in my hubby's kabza...
will edit in my comment aaraam se

edited:
i am getting so intrigued about the final reason that made geet leave maan...
geet thinks maan feels she betrayed him..😕😕😕
u made me feel geet's anguish without me knowing why i'm feeling it😉

i guess no one likes having a Meera B/w Maaneet...i too don't but feeling sorry for her at the same time...the pang of unrequited love, where there is no hope can be painful...
me an emotional being...always cried buckets with Danielle steel leading me to drop her ultimately😆
r we going to get a glimpse of past now?
PS: loved the movie of the song...
Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago

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