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Posted: 13 years ago

Rplyd to u all…

Thnks for ur love n support….

Chapter: 30

Mayank was sitting in his father's office with his legal advisor to make shape of his claims into a legal document, though he prayed that he must not be needing it, but than he has to be on bit of a safe side..

Legal Adviors: mayank wasy apki baat mein kafi points hai, magr baat wohi hai k yeah multi national compnies apny rules khud banati hain

Mayank: hum janty hain..bus ek try hai yeah..

LA: thik hai, hum dekhy hain

At house scne was complete opposite, nupur was as such taking all responsibilities and gunjan was enjoying her care free attitude.

Gunjan was as usual a later, she woke up almost at 11, she wants her breakfast, as nupur never said a word and willingly like a little sister serve her..

Gunjan: bhabiii…aj kya mjh juice milay ga nasthy mein aur apk hat k parhaty ..plss

Nupur: she smile n touch her cheeks…bulkily milay ga…ap bhaito hum latay hain….

When Samrat cums from office it was she who use to serve him tea, plus even Gunjan wants it to.

SA: gunjan apki shadi ko ek months se zayda ho juka hai , ab ap apni zemdari sambhal lay tu acha hoga, kal ap kheer bana rahi hain us k bad ap apni zeemdari uthni hogi,..

Gunjan: magr kal tu hum ami k yaha ja rahy hain

SA: tu mana kerdayin…hum se poch nhi rahy hain bata rahy hai

Gunjna: yeah kiya baat hoi , ap jan booj ker asa ker rahi hai taky hum na jay

SA: GUNJAN..zaban ko lagam day ker rekhy tu bhitar hoga ap k liyan, aur han yeah roz roz ap k mehkay jana band hai, is ghar ki zeemdari uthao, warna wahi ja ker bhait ja..

Gunjna: ap mjhy ghr se jany ko kah rahi hai…hum abhi Samrat ko pata thy hai…

She called smart and narrated whole story..

SA: tu ap hum se yeah kah rahy hain k hum ny galat kiya apki biwi se asay baat ker kay..

Samrat: nhi ami magar itna bari baat kiya hai aj ki jaga kal rekh laytay tu kiya tha..

SA: hum ny ek baar kah diya kal hi yeah rasam ada hogi, aur us k baad un k kam koi nhi keray ga, samhj gay ap…bus ab ek aur lafz nhi..

..

Gunjan: tu tum bhi mjh yeah hi kerny ko kah rahy ho

Samrat: dekho jan, aj man lo, ek rasam hai, pori kero, hum raat mein ami k yaha chaly gay I promise, dono kam hijay gay….

Gunjna: hmm aur agr tum mjhy lay ker ni gay na tu phir dekhna mein kiya kerti hoon,

Samrat: chill janu…ek kan se suno aur sdsoray kan se bahr nikalo..

Gunjan: aur suno..she rested her head on his shoulder..yeah hum se ghar k kam nhi hotay hain..

Smarat: tu maat kero…humaray kam tu kerdo…he pulled her close..

Gunjn: tht I can do..

Gunjna: bhabi humain kheer nhi banai ati, tu hum soch rahy hain k hum custard bany

Nupur: she chukled…hum batay hain ap bany..bani tu kher hi paray gi..yeah rasam hi

Gunjan: hum koi rasam nhi mantay…aur wasy bhi Samrat ko custard pasand hai tu hum un k liyan hi tub any gay

Nupur: nhi ap is ghar k liyan bany gi, sirf Samrat k liyan nhi…islayn apko kheer hi bani hogi..han chay tu custard bhi sath mein bana lay….miya ji ko khush kerny k liyan

Gunjna: un ko khush kerny aur bhi tarekkay hain,.she winked and nupur shock her head…

Nupur: chalein hum saman day daytay hain apk…

Gunjan: bhabi pls ap bhi yahin rahy hin …

Thought gunjan was supposed to make it yet, nupur end up making it , as whn milk was on boil , gunjan was busy adding the custard, so nupur added the sugar. Than stirring part gunjan has 20 calls to attend so she now and than left the kitchen…

So she did wht she decided made custard and kheer was done originally by Nupur

Gunjan: oki tum mera custard ready hai, aur as per ruital bhabi ny meray behave kheer baanli

GM: lol…ap bhi na wohi kerti hai jo kerna hai apko

Gunjan: ek baat mani gi tu hamesha sab ki tarah chalna pary ga mom..chalein hum chalty hain raat ko miltay hain..

At dining table both the sweets were served, and as ruital evry one tasted the kheer and blessd gunjan , she proudly take the credit , while mayank and shilpa both looked at nupur and were surprised.

Shilpa was very angery at nupur and gunjan both, and mayank was upset for her, he warned her yet she just cant get to know how easily people use her…and what actually Gunjan is doing with her

Shilpa: yeah do do mehty ksi khushi mein bany ap ny

Gunjna: Samrat ko meray hath k custard buhat pasand hai ilsayn …hum ny yeah un k liyan banaya hai…

Shilpa: ap ko ghar gherasti k koi andza hai, yeah sab itny arms kherach kerna asan baat nhi hai, aur woh bhi itna sara custard kis khushi mein banaya ap ny…sab zaya kerny k liyan

Gunjan: kiya ami itni se chees k liyan ap itna kyun bool rahi hai, ksis aur ko day day k freez kerdy k itna bara issue kiya hai….

Nupur: gunjan..she whispered

Gunjan: bhabi pls let me handle…she is said very rudely

Mayank was now dam angry…..nobody dares to talk to his wife like this..atleast who is younger in relation…this expression were clearly read by shipa

Shilpa: GUNJAN…apni bari bhabi se is tarah se baat kernay gi ab ap…han…..tameez tu ap ko hai nhi lihaz hi keralin..

Gunjan: Samrat…he just enter the house and found her weeping…dekho na mein itny payr se yeah sab banaya aur..

Samrat: kiya musbiat hai ami yeah sab…ap loog us ko waqt kyun nhi daytay…thora zzayda hi tu baan tha..addat hojay gi tu handle kerlay gi…itna bara issue kyun..her rooz k tamasha ban gaya hai yeah…

Mayank: nupur…mjhy ap se kam hai uper aay ..foran…he said tht to sternly..

She looked at shilpa..and she said her to go..

SA: aur gunjan kitchen saaf kerk sony chaiy ga…

Gunjan: subah kerdo gi mein abhi ami k pass jao gi..ab tu mein ny rasm bhi adda kerdi ha tu ab tu koi problem nhi hogi na..samrat ap kahan kah lay phir chalty hain…

….

Nupur: kya hua ap itny ghusay mein kyun hai..

Mayank: tu aur kiya kero…apko hum ny smahjay tha na, kayal rekhy, kheer apny bani thi, aur yeah baat ami ko bhi pata chal gi…nupur woh apki achi k bhi lihaz nhi ker rahin hain, aur ap…sigh….plss…asa nhi kero asy tu ap per sab kuch bar jay ga

Nupur: hum nhi ban rahy thy , woh tu unhony hi charhi thi, magar woh busy hogai thi tu dekhi many ….dood gir jata sab zaya hojata..bus islayn

Mayank: itni bewaquf kyun hain ap..ap ko dekhi kyun nhi day raha kis chalaki se woh ap k upper pyar pyar se sab daal rahin hai…

She lowered her eyes, n her face drop too..he sigh

He came forwards n hugged her from side and make her sit..

Mayank: jan meri, ap asay kero gi tu buhat muskil mein aajo gi, kitchen chor kern hi asakti thi…

Nupur: un ko help chaiy thi…

She said pouting

Mayank: tu help kero na…door door se..pora kam kyun kertin hain app…thori chalaki nhi la skati app

Nupur: woh hum kasay kerain gay…

He chukled…n looked at her in n aww….

Mayank: acha…ab hum yeah sab hum handle keray ga…ap nhi boly gi na humain rukhy gi…

Nupur: matlab…

Mayank: nothing…ap sirf apna kam kerain gi sab k nhi..thik hai…

She nodded scarly in yes, n he giiigled n kissed her forehead.."pagal"….

Nupur: ab woh kyun…she pouted….

Mayank: pata nhi kaun se duniya mein rahti hain ap….asay tu loog ap k hamesha nuksaan pochay gay..aur ap ko pata bhi nhi chaly ga….kyun hain asi ap…

He pulled her cheek..n smiled….

Nupur: lo ab yeah tareef hai k borai

Mayank: tareef..jo ap k liyan borai hogai hai….

………..

3 days later

Though responsibilities have been divided yet, gunjan was as stubborn as always, she never woke up early, nupur use to give Samrat breakfast, and was doing all household alone. Shilpa though said gunjan to do so many times, yet hearing so harsh word form her, she was now keeping silent, as to guard her own respect, plus she knew one thing nupur wont say a thing about it. So household will be handle perfectly by her. Problem was for none…just for Nupur…

It was the day when mayank didn't went with dad to office and stayed back as in evening MD has called him at home , so he was making himself prepared for everything..

Watching things haven't change a bit and plus shilpa is keeping her mouth shut, he was abit annoyed, taking with nupur..she do show tht yes now she gets tired yet she doesn't want to make issue out of it. What she should do, if Samrat is going office without eating anything she cant stop herself making him eat.

But yet this was for sure tht shilpa is not handling things properly she is only protecting her own self respect. it was afternoon when he went to shilpa's room…

Mayank: ami hum ajay..

SA: han beta bulkily

Mayank: ami yeah ghar mein kiya chal raha hai..

SA: wohi jo gujan k bad aker hona tha

Mayank: maagr is sab mein nupur k kiya ksoor hai …woh kyun yeah sab bardsasht kerain

SA: ap kahana kiya chaty hain…nupur ny kcuh kaha hai kiya

Mayank: ami ap yeah buhat achy se janti hain k nupur hum se khabi ghr ki koi shikyat nhi ki, aj hum ghar per thay tu humaray liyan kafi tha yeah ek sab dekhny k liyan, smarat k saray kam nupur kyun kerain ab

SA: tu mein kiya keron..un se bolo tu woh tu samny se asy jawab dayti hain k mein tu khsamosh hi hogi hoon , apni izaat apny hath mein…

Mayank: yeah tu sahi baat nhi hai, jis bahu ny ap se aj tak kahbi uchi awaz tu kiya sakat (stern)lehjy bhi baat nhi ki, us din bhi ap janti hai nupur galat nhi thi…phir bhi unhony ap se maafi mangi thi..tu kya us ki taraf ap k koi faraz nhi banta…

SA: han beta janty hain, nupur jasi bahu kismet se milti hai, woh tu uff bhi nhi kerti thi..aj bhi nhi kerti..

Mayank: magar ami ab hum bardastht nhi kerai gay, ap gunjan se kahien k ek din k pora kam woh keray aur dosary din k nupur, aur Samrat k kam woh khud keray gi

SA: beta per nupur bhi tu asi hain , Samrat ko tu woh mohaabt mein nasata day dayti hain, woh tu mana bhi ker rahy thy, ab preshan hai , gunjan se shadi ker k..

Mayank: magr ami aj yeah baat hojay, nupur ko tu hum dekhty hain….

SA: ji hum khoshish kertay hain…

Mayank left and SA was now in delima, mayank was right and now he will too speak for his wife, even if nupur say all this , even than its nt wrong, yet she knew very well that now wht gunjan will say to her.

..

Mayank: duwa kerain aj sab thik hoja…warna humari zidnagi buhat muskil hojay gi..aur hum apki ko kuch bhi nhi day pay gay

He said holding Nupur in his arms, n she put her hands on his shoulders

Nupur: hum tu hamesha dua kertay hain..aur ap asa kuch kyun soch rahy hain, humari zindagi itni achi guzarti rahy gi, mayank pasa sab kuch tu nhi hota na

Mayank: magar buhat kuch hota hai nupur, ap yeah janti hain…

Nupur: she placed her hand on his cheek, mayank dekhana sab kuch acha hoga, aj humari saari pershani khatam hogi dekhan,.

Saying so she hugged him, and he hugged her back squeezing her a bit , kissing her shoulder..

Nupur: bst of luck…ap bulkily nhi darna ..

Mayank: ji biwi sehaba..ap hain na humray sath tu kyun daaro mein…

He said smilingly…and kissed her forehead n left…

..

Evening:

SA: gunjan samarat nupur sab yaah aay…

They all came in hall , and were very curious to know wht is happening exactly…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited.

awesome update Fiza

loved it loads ...

loved mayur a lottt ... specially mayank ... he is such a sweetheart...

poor nupur... bechari ko sara kaam ekele karna parta hia ... aur gunjan to maharani bani hui hai ... n samrat joru ka ghulam

finally mayank took some step and raising voice for his wife ... m very happy for that.

i hope, SA ll do something...

waiting for next update.

continue soon.
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update APIII...
loved it lodsss...
awww...
i sooo love my Mayank...
he is such a adorable hubby...By God!!!
i love him to d coreee...
he is d bestest hubby evr...
m sooo happy dat now he is also raising voice for his wife...
n yes!!! husbands alwaysss avoid dis if der wife is nt complaing...
so m veryyy happy dat my Mayank took sm step n talked wid Shilpa aunty...
n evn talked her abt dat day's mistake also...
sooo good...
i wanna gv him a *TIGHT HUG* if Nupur ko bura na lagey toh...waise bhi sali adhi ghar wali ri8!!!😳
n now Shilpa aunty also realised Nupur's value han!!!!!
m loving dis...
bt m tooo upset wid dis Gunjan...
kitni BATTAMEEZ N BESHARAM hain yeh ladki...
sharam lehaz toh hain hi nhi kisi ka...uff!!!
i hate d way she talked to SA...
i mean she was giving her DHAMKI😲😲😲 ke woh yeh sab jake apne shohar😲 n unke bete se😲 kahengi n keh bhi diya!!!!!😲😲😲
n uss JORU KE GULAAM,IDIOT,GADHE ne kya kiya!!!!!!!!
apni biwi ki side li...😲🤢😲
pata nhi iska kya hoga!!!!!!!
n yeh ladki iski itni himmat Nupur ko kya apni naukrani samjh ke rakha hain isne??? main hoti na toh acche se dekhati...
asa haal karti ke usse apni chalaki yaad rehti hamesha...*hmph*
ase ladkio ko toh thappar marna chahiye khud toh kuch kam nhi karti upar se jo unka kam karte hain unse battamezi bhi karte hain...*disgusting*
i dont like her...actually i hate her...
apni MA se ja kar maje se ye sab bolti bhi hain uff!!! YA ALLAH rehem!!!
ok now bht ho gayi isski batein...
my MayUr r such a BEAUTIFUL,PERFECT n BEST COUPLE na!!!!!!!
i love dem lodsss...
n now plzzz API prove my Mayank innocent ok!!!!!!!!!
i dont want him to suffer more plzzz
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update...
Im so glad that mayank is raising his voice for nupur even though nupur isnt complaining a bit...
Normally guys remain silent if their wife isnt complaining...And im also glad that mayank's mom is praising nupur and taking her side...
But what happened to samrat...why he isnt saying anything to gunjan now so many days has passed since their marriage...he is keeping his eyes nd mouth shut like a joru ka gulam...
Now hope everything will be fine and mayank will be proved innocent...
Cont soon...
Edited by Auroni.92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
This story perfectly describe typical family problems
Nice piece of writing
thanks fore pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Wooow Fizu this was mind-blowing part

Mayu such 1 in a million the best husband...
loved how he's stand up to his wife, and made to see SA wat she was ignoring such a sweetheart Mayank
Nupur as always adorable wife conceling her husband
they blessed to have each other
wonderful update sis
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
so close to reality
gunjan🤢 is not a home maker type
samart is just joru ka gulam😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt fiza
finally SA comes to know how good nupur is...hating gunjun she is too mean ,all the time she is using nupur & showing attitude...loved mayur moments..waiting for the next updt..cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
like ur update nice part now waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amazing update...
gunjan ko tu na...😡😡😡😡 aad hai kaisey ladki hai ...i dont like her...atleast apnay husband k kaam tu khud kerai. itn anawab pan bhi aacha nai... gunjan ko tu ghr oai band kerdain achayei...
bechari nuour pura ghr sambhla hua hai kab tak keray gi insan hai.kch kehti nai iss ka matlab yeh nai k vo thag nai jati hugi...hayei mera mayank wht a love ussi ko khayl haina phir apni biwi...😆😍
aab deikho yeh saas sahiba kia farmati hia...😆😆
loved it fiza...
amazing update
Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago

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