one shot:The fun begins..;)Imp note:pg123 by kathi

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kathie_berns

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Ok... I'm going to write part 21... everybody... Wait for it... Its gonna be legen...wait for it... dary...legendary...😆😆

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kathie_berns

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Recap:Both are on the dance floor with their respective partners..

Part 21:

Raj was a very good dancer but his moves were a little forceful which she was sure her angry young man wouldnt like her doing with any other man. She had been thinking of giving up the fight with him on the way to the party but his audacity to bring the woman she loathed to the party in which he wasnt even invited(of course they both had been invited, but Pinky was her freind) renewed her vigour to wage a war.

And that was just what she did by whispering in Raj's ears and giving a seductive laugh which did not go unnoticed by Maan who was standing very close to them. In response Raj turned her around and held her by the waist dipping her to the ground and pulling her up so that she collided with his waist. Geet was mentally laughing as she could literally see Maan's face turning red.

He would teach his wife a good lesson once they reached home, Maan thought. What did she say? Hadnt she falsely accused him of showering his attention on female employees. Well, that was nothing. She would actually see him in his snake charmer's mode today.

He whispered something in Sasha's ears and she smiled suggestively. Seeing this Geet clutched Raj's shirt so tightly that it was ready to rip at any moment. Buy, wasnt he enjoying her beautiful skin turn red!

Suddenly without warning, he pulled another girl present in the dance floor and turned them both with each hand, making them to recoil into his body. As the steps proceeded, Sasha and the other girl glided thier hands on his musceled chest as he swayed with them to the music.

All this was not going down well with Geet who had already gestured to Raj that she was tired. How dare those females even touch him, forget gliding thier filthy hands on his body? She would make him starve for life for her, she promised herself as she proceeded towards the bar to drown her sorrow.

Over to you guys...😆

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

GRRR KATHIEEE😡kya yaar yeh too EMOTIONAL ATYACHAR😈hai 😆😆mood bantay hi end aur phir boltay ho OVER TO U😡😆

awesome awesome part 21👏kathie love u yaar😃

Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago

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seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Amazing, loved it. plsss update soon yaar want more.

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

awesome KB wow
someone write part 22 cant control myself😆

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: sindu555

hey hun .. why dont u write .. 😍

me too saaaddd my parents r going to kerala 2day...don't know when they r going to come back...so chakkar katting to keep my mind off their trip...😭

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sweetkj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

ohh this is just going ausum!!!

loving it!!

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#198

hey there is just nine writers in here...where is the rest??????😭

Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Guys I started reading it yesterday and can't stop myself from saying...it is one of the best FF in making

Story line is wonderful and if at any point it falters, another great writer brings it back. I loved the way all the best writers are working together to bring life to this story. Because of this best elemenst of romance, humor and love have got ingrained. Hats off to you guys.

Also, because of so many of you writing it, we are getting parts on a regular basis. Loving the small spurts of wait and then something comes along to tease us further

Wonderful Idea Kathie and heartfelt thanks to all the regular updaters.

I may try something later in the day when I am back from work. But meanwhile...dhoom machade dhoom

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: euphoric

Sana🤗...

now its Ashu we talking abt😳... lets get realistic🤓

Ashu and Sudharna... does it even go hand in hand😡

kamini ashu... i knw u were tempted to put tht lal thopda of urs in tht khali dabba😆