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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome story love it plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
😭 continue soon................but just dont let krips die 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was fab 😭 😭 i feel sorry for both of them.
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Posted: 19 years ago
šŸ‘ omg just read entire fan-fic too good i dont want her to die and i want them togehter 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
is she rly gonna die????
she cant
if she dies i;ll kill her ! theen i;ll kill u 😔
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Posted: 19 years ago
Girl just read it...plz dun't kill Kripa...it will be too sad😭..and if u do kill her than i will...i dun knw wht i'll do...but plz dun't kill her...me waitin impatiently for the next part...so plz cont. soon...
Luv Taniya
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Posted: 19 years ago
UMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM........CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
šŸ˜› really nice..but i just wanna ask u something who was trying to kill kripa when she was in comma..
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i will tell u later in the story
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Next morning kripa gets up and goes down to make breakfast. It was early around 7. She finishes and places it on the table. Angad comes down and sits down to eat breakfest. Kripa gets her food and sits on the floor like she always did.
A: sad voice) kripa
K: what?
A: why are u sitting there
K: becz this is where I always sit
A: sit on the table
K: I like to sit here it batter
A: kripa I said im sorry…I only told u to sit there becz I didn't like u that time…
K: im ok here angad..its more fun then there..( continues eating)
A: picks up his plat and sits next to her on the floor)
K: what are u doing
A: what are u doing?
K: im eating
A: so am I
K: get up and sit at the table
A: not unless u do
K: I really hate u angad
A: smiles big)

Both sit on the table across each other.
K: angad
A: hmmm…
K: I want to go out today
A: sure
K: alone
A: why..
K: becz I said so
A: where are u going
K: to friends house
A: ok..I have to go to work to

They both where in their rooms changing ..kripa went to angads room and knocked
A: u don't need to nock ..come in
K: can I talk to u
A: sure..sit

They both sit on the bed…kripa goes next to angad and holds his hand.
K: angad can I ask u for a favor
A: sure anything
K: can u plez do it…
A: u just say it jaan…
K: do u remember Mishti
A: how can I forget
K: can…can u fogive her
A: shocked and surprised that she wants him to forgive her) what are u talking about…how can I forgive her…after what she did to us..
K: plez angad listen to me first…I know what Mishti did was wrong but she is changed…she is a wife now..a good mother…
A: what?
K: I meet her after the day of our marriage …she was happily married…she has a son 2 years old khekhar…she is really happy..plez forgive her for what she did
A: looks away angry) I cant..I just cant…she separated us for passed 4 years and tried to kill me and u went to jail becz of her…
K: angad plez..if it wasn't becz of her we might never have meet…I know u cant forgive her but u could fogive a mother..a wife…a daughter-in-law
A: looks down) I don't know…
K: holds his hands) plez angad..for me plez
A: looks at her and hugs her) u have a really good heart kripa…after all this u still…(apart) can I ask u something
K: wipes his tears) sure anything
A: why are u so nice
K: I have no idea..hey im not nice
A: yes u are
K: oh yea
A: yea
K: we will see about that ( picks up a pillow and starts hitting angad) do nice wife's hits their husband
A: ouch…yes they do when they love them so much
K: looks at him mean) I hate u
A: quickly kisses her cheek) I love u to..
K: can u come with me
A: where
K: to…to Mishti's house
A: what? ..why? Why do u want to go there
K: vo acutely the other day she asked me if I could come to his sons birthday….she will be really happy if u come with me..plez angad..just once.after that I will never ask u for anything else
A: looks at her for few second than says) fine I will
K: happy) thank you soo much
A: but one condition
K: noo
A: u have to
K: fine what is it?
A: u have to come with me after the party to where I take u
K: fine
A: ok lets go

The reach to Mishti's house. As Mishti sees them she runs to them.
M: to kripa) hi kripa ( they both hug then they apart)
A: hi Mishti
M: gets shocked to see angad talking to her nicely)
M: ang..angad
A: kripa told me everything…I guess we could forgive u
M: thank you soo much angad ( gives a friendly hug)
M: let me introduce my husband ( she calls a man and he comes to her) angad, kripa this is my husband karthik..and karthik this is my friends angad and his wife kripa
Kr: shakes hands with angad and says hi to kripa
M: common in

They stay at the party for 2 hours and enjoy.
A: to karthik )thanks a lot and congratulation to ur sons birthday
Kr: thank you
M: thanks for coming kripa
K: anytime
A: we have to leave now..there some work we have to do…
They say bye to each other and kripa, angad leave to the car
K: so where are we going
A: what time is it
K: looks at the clock) 7:00 pm
A: we are going for dinner
K: I don't want to go anywhere
A: u said u will go anywhere I ask u to so now be quit
K: fine

They reach the restaurant.
A: lets go
K: this restaurant
A: I know its our favorite

They take seat and order food.
They don't talk at all when they eat. After when they finish eating.
A: lets go
K: ok

Angad drives to the beach
K: angad what are we doing here
A: fun
K: looks around) no one is here
A: that makes it even more fun
K: what do u mean
A: lets go I will tell u

They get out of the car and sits on the big rock
A: kripa
K: looking at the ocean) hmmm
A: can u tell me all about ur life
K: looks at him) like?
A: from beginning what happen to ur life
K: that's a long story
A: we have long time
K: sights and starts her story..after few mints she finishes) will that's my story ( smiles to him)
A: just looks at her and doesn't say anything)
K: angad what u thinking
A: oh nothing just like that…
A: kripa
K: yea
A: what do u want to do next
K: will go home
A: no not that..in ur life
K: don't know yet
A: kripa can we live like a couple
K: I don't think so
A: why not
K: listen angad..plez try to understand…u have a good life a head of u… there is lots of other girls batter than me that will keep u happy….and u will be really happy with her….plez angad don't ruin ur life becz of me
A: im not ruining my life…u are the one who is…
K: that's why im telling u…marry someone else
A: ok portend that im married with someone else and im really happy with my life…what about u…will u marry again…will u be happy again
K: smiles to him) of course angad
A: can u live with out me
K: that's a simple question. Of course I could
A: tell the truth
K: u think im lying
A: yes
K: ok how am I suppose to prove it that I will be happy
A: swear upon me and say it that u will be happy with out me
K: angad…
A: swear
K: I don't want to talk about this anymore
A:why not
K: u don't understand. I don't love u..I don't want to be with u
A: what have I don't that u hate me so much
K: I don't hate u..I hate my self…I just don't want to be with anyone…I want to be alone…I want to leave free
A: u are free..im not going to do anything that u will not feel free…kripa…
K: angad stop this… plez just leave me alone ( gets up from the rock and leave)

Kripa walk at the beach. Water splashing at her foot. Angad just sits there crying in silence.
A: wipes his tears) I will not leave u like this kripa…I will make u main ( runs after kripa) kripa…kripa wait ( he catches up with her) hold up yaar…lets go home
K: I want to walk a little more
A: can I walk with u
K: If I say no will u not
A: lets go
They walk at the beach. Angad tries to put his arm around her. every time when he tries that she looks at him and he acts like as if he was stretching.
K: angad…
A: yea
K: stop it
A: stop what
K: ufff..if u want to put ur arm around me go ahead but stop portending ur exercising
A: smiles big) thanks ( puts his arms around her shoulder and they walk like that)
A: kripa
K: yea
A: tomorrow rahul and kushi are coming to our house
K: excited) really
A: yes
K: oh cool ( jumps in excitement)
A: why are u so happy
K: I just cant wait to see them…I love them soo much…since they where born I wasn't away from them this long
A: lets go home ( before he could finish his sentence kripa already runs to the car)
Kripa waved her hand for him to hurry up

The next morning kripa woke up early and got down. She was waiting patiently for the door bell to ring
Angad came down and was about to leave when kripa called from behind
K: where are u going
A: im going to work
K: first finish ur breakfast
A: sorry cant I will be late ( was about to open the door when kripa catches hir hand)
K: ur not going anywhere…first finish than leave
A: but
K: shut up
A: fine
Angad eats his breakfast fast and runs before kripa could stop him again. After few mints late the door bell rings. Kripa runs to the door and opens it. She sees rahul and kushi and hugs them tight
R,ku: hi didi
K: aparts) hi jaan…how are u?
R: we are great
Ku: and u di
K: im great what can happen to ur di
Rahul and kushi laughs
P: comes from behind) hi kripa
K: runs to her and hugs her) hi di how are u…I missed u so much
P: me to
They apart
K: come in di
P: I have to go
K: where
P: me, josh, harshini and prithvi are going becz of the busince two days out of town
K: oh ok
P: can rahul and kushi stay over for few days
K: of course di u don't need to ask
P: ok I have to go
K: bye di
R,ku: bye mom

next: how will three trouble makers drive pore angad crazy 😈

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