^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET FF} next thread pg 151 - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
maan gets sometime confusing
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan s very confused character..
nice one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet is such a cry baby...and this maan is really driving her crazy
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazingg updatee dearr...
geet s such a ronduu yaarr..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
this maan...tooo much complicated to understand...dont knw whts dere in geet's life...
loved it...
thank u very much fr d lovely update...
continue soon plz...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 64




He is feeling irritated as he is unable to make her understand in a right manner

She purses her lips to try harder to stay composed

G-But I didn't make your decision any easier to follow... I am sorry...

She gets up and switches on his tv

M-O shut up Geet!...I mean..NO...Damn!...NO!

He realizes what just slipped off his tongue

G-uh yes. offcourse.. sorry... [turns her face very slowly and determinedly into a face that is devoid of any emotions and is blank]

She picks her novel and sits on the bed and hides her face behind it

M-ufff!!!!!!! Why are you getting emotional? It was my general thinking about gals, it's nothing to do with you

She nods at him hiding her quivering mouth behind the novel

He snatches the novel

M-What do you wanna hear?!?

She snaps and backs up...she shakes her head

M-I was waiting for you and we were destined to be together...blah blah blah?????

In a nothing gesture, she is desperately shaking her bowed head

She knew it was all arranged but he doesn't have to go out of his way to hurt her..

He holds her chin and holds it high

She is crying silently

He wipes her tears with his fingers...slowly caressing her cheek with his thumb

She grows a bit red and hiccups...averting his eyes...trying to pull away

M-I know I am bad with words Geet, but...I never meant to make you cry

She nods at him

G-May I speak?

M-Sure

G-I know... it wasn't a love match or anything...it was...it was an arranged marriage for me too.. I am just sorry I made your life so dreadful afterwards... I cry and bother you all the time... and it must be...[her voice breaks a little]...it must be hard...to ... tolerate...

M-Geet

He looks into her eyes

G-...and maybe if I had been aloof and not so clingy I...

M-You know I never meant any such thing

G-...I am sorry for making your life so difficult

M-Damn Geet !!!!!!!! Can't you understand??????

She flinches at his words

G-I never seem too [she murmers]

M-I am talking about other woman...the majority, not about you!

She looks up now

G-I am... different?

M-I can't praise much...but I don't lie...and I have told you that I like you

G-You just say that..

M-Yes different...[he smiles, his charming smile]. I don't lie

G-I bother you too much...please go back to your tv... I am fine

M-You are my kid-adult girl

He smiles in a mischievous grin

Geet isn't sure at all if its compliment or a complaint...or even good or a bad thing

She slowly nods her head

As she looks up at him, Maan winks at her with a charming grin

Her jaw drops promptly at his wink

G-uh...oh... I.. uh. Hmm [Her cheeks acquire a pinkish hue]

She closes her mouth finally

M-hmm?..uh..emm?..eh? [he imitates her]

She can't help blushing like a bride

M-Shall we have the dinner, mam?

She looks away and tries hiding behind her novel once more

He snatches the novel again

G-ye..yes

He ruffles her hair playfully...he liked doing it... he never did it to a lady ever but knew she won't mind and she loves it...she feels somehow even with a bad start they have taken another step towards each other

Geet quickly gets up and heads to the table to serve him...rather it's more of an effort to hide her tremendous blushing

As they have dinner, Geet keeps sneaking glances at him throughout the meal

She would feel a tingling sensation all over her body whenever their eyes would meet

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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update...
finally baat kuch aage badhi..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
chal kuch toh improvement hua inke rishte mein...dekhte hai pyar kab hota hai...
loved it...
thank u very very much fr such a lovey update...
waiting fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally sum improvement..
luvd to c maan in a mischievous mood..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
glad to see some progress! pheww
loved it!
cute affection for starters will do

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