FF 'My Irresistible Kidnapper' thrd 8

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

so finally

some relief for us

goooddd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

wonderful parts...thank GOD that 🤬 was not able to tarnish her dignity...she gathered courage and fled from his clutches..
but why she is so scared now...I know she was touched badly by him and she must be having some creepy feeling but this doesn't have so bad impact that she is behaving like this with Maan...and now this pregnancy lie...tarnishing parents image in society and now Maan's image is also tarnished because he has declared himself responsible for her pregnancy...
I can't agree with this point that for her parents reputation is nothing in front of Maan's reputation...love is not so selfish that a children don't care about parents when they get love outside...
I think the best she should do is that time instead of creating this drama...she should have called Maan and tell all incident in front of him and her parents and make a plan to trap that person who is responsible for Anvesha's and her humiliation...
now I want to know Maan's action plan after knowing truth from stupid Geet..

thanx for pm

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

part 42loved it...so i think maan heard geet talks...i really want maan vuss kamine ko pakad kar maarna he... jis ne maan ki geet ko ithni torture ki...

continue soon dear...

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Anjali

@Gurlygirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

OMG OMG!! What an update. Oh god that filth is still alive. Plz god kill him. Suspense is gr8. Thank god geet is not pregnet. But our maan never can left her. I wish maan have heard but nevertheless maan is going to find out the truth. Thank u for not making suspense part so long. I want that person to be killed for tourting our geet to that extend. Plz update soon

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

waiting for maan's reaction wen he knows the truth

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Deepa

@harshdb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

Part 41

Oh my god the dialogues….killer dialogues I must say… u did awesome job…

the part is very scary, fear for geet, dramatic😉, Violent u showed all the emotions here

Precap:

flashback continues.. will be updating in few hours..

n guys geet not raped neither pregnent.. so just wait for rest😉

u played safe game here??? otherwise readers would have killed you😉

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Deepa

@harshdb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

here are my comment for the last part (for now😆)

Part 42

very looong part dear... u opened suspense here.. thank god nothing happened to geet.

You don't know

You can't see

What really goes on

Inside of me

My eyes shield

How I feel inside

You don't know

How much I've cried

My mouth restricts

What I'd really say

And make you think

I'm perfectly okay

I know you tried

You mean well

But I have things

I'd never tell

To truly laugh

To really smile

Is something I haven't

Done in a while

You'll never know

How I really feel

I don't know how long

It will take to heal.

Just know that

I still love you

After everything

That I've been through.

You'll never see

Inside my mind

I'm protecting you

From what you'd find.

I protect you because

I love you so.

This is my pain

You'll never know.

Geet monologue is

She flinches when he touches her,

and is afraid to get too close,

not because she's never trusted.

But only because she thinks

she don't deserve him anymore..

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Deepa

@harshdb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: anshra

I would like to thank(no thanks) a very special friend
shruthi Ajay
Who gave me motivation and strength to write these parts

luv u shruthi..
thanks for being there for me when I needed you