IPKKND: Pregnant Khushi and her Jalebi - Page 4

Wow its superb...Its just mindblowing Os I love it...I undersatnd what brevity means while reading your OS as mine wa too long!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aaawww...sho shweet!

Originally posted by: niya2121

I loveee it !!!!! It was so much fun to read. Poor Kushi ! She's gonna have to go without her jalebis for 4 months. But hey !!!! I would trade all the world's sweets if it meant I could get Arnav's sweet.😳😆 Btw she's a smart girl, Kushi!!! LOL wanting more than one. Great Job !😊

Thanks! Haha, you're right. I would give up everything too in return for those 'sweets'! ;)

This is so adorable and hot

I loved the opening sentence abt how Arnav didnt trust himself not
to laugh.It was the best opening ever.One is so serious abt jalebis and the other find the misery so funny .

You have penned the OS soo well.

Originally posted by: Missbantu

👏awww, that was just amazing, i was at work and i kept reading it now and then, i couldn't stop myself from laughing.

I like when Arnav said "'Although you know in some cases the diabetes stays forever... and since you've spent about 25 years eating Jalebis on a daily basis, I think you just might be one of them." that just made me lol.

Please continue, plz plz plz 😆

Oh no, I don't want you to get in trouble at work because of me!

I really do think once Khushi and Arnav are in love he'll be a bit more naughty like this as you saw with his 'suhag raat bhi aaj hi hoga' bit.

I haven't really thought about continuing but if I can think of a good scenario I definitely will.

Originally posted by: ---Pari---

reserveeeddd! really looking forward to this one! edit

ok, can I just say, you BETTER write more cute ArHi OSs like this. And this is not a request ok?! This is downright BRILLIANT! And I REALLY want to read more like these!😳 plzplzplzplzplzplzplzzz PM me every time u write an ArHi OS!

Aww thank you, you're making me blush. I'll make sure to PM you if I do write more stuff!

Originally posted by: littlemoi

this was probably the sweetest os i've ever read!!

really enjoyed reading this!!!

awesome job!!

thank you soo much for the pm!!

Aww thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it.

Very nice OS...Very well written

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Nayika OMG this was adorable 😆

*Sigh* It would be a dream come true if it happened in the show ☺️

Fabulous stuff <3

xoxo

Aanya

Thank you! I know right, but I think we'd have to wait at least 2 years for anything like this :P