ArHi: A Vivid Array (OS Gall) [Blog Link : Pg 33] - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Yeah.. so about that, I think it's fudging amazing! So shut the heck up and don't cry woman! That hug waala scene, it better happen in today's episode! =D AND this was sooo good! You tell me my ArHi stuff is good, what the heck is this? Loved how their thoughts have been put into these words. I don't know how else to explain how freaking amazing it is, [plus I am short of time 😆] so I'll stop at that! But ya, awessommmeee stuff =D

Love youuu
🤗
Edited by ..Jojo.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Aanya!!
A beautiful piece of writing hun!
I love the contrast you've shown of the same emotion between Arnav and Khushi.
Brilliantly done sugar!!
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was beautifully written dear:) Please do write more...would love to read ur work!!!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
beautifully written luvd it x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Hello :)


So this is the first time I'm writing on ArHi, I've only written on Armaan-Riddhima as of now. However I just caught up with today's episode and this came to my mind. It's mostly what happened today with a bit of my own imagination at the end 😳 Read on -


Fear

She tried to focus, but it only clouded her mind more. Her head was pounding and Khushi clutched it in pain. Just as the haze was about to overpower her she was startled. Through the blur, she watched him beat the man to a pulp. He punched him, over and over again. The man had started groaning in pain but Khushi had never seen an angrier Arnav. He had never been this angry. Not when she annoyed him, not when she did that drama so that he stays back, never. And the animalistic rage in his eyes scared her. Her heart pounded and she screamed at him to stop but he wouldn't. And she was scared. Oh so scared. Scared that the same man who took care of her this morning could turn so feral in a matter of minutes. Her voice echoed but he didn't cease his beating. This was not the Arnav she knew. She knew the man who said "What the-" at the drop of a hat. She knew the man whose eyes had softened when the little girl had kissed him. She knew the man who had apologized to her, and this wasn't him. She watched helplessly as he pummeled the man with his fist. The fury in his eyes scared her. It terrified her that he was ready to beat this man to death just because he pushed her. In a last attempt to stop him she clutched his shoulder and to her relief a moment later, his shoulders sagged and he got up.

Arnav got up, his heart pounding and his breathing labored. He felt her remove her hand from his shoulder and he stood there for a moment, letting the anger ebb away. He couldn't help himself. It was alright when they beat him, he could handle it but something in him had snapped when he saw that asshole push her. And for a while there, he'd felt fear. Raw fear, when he saw her sway unsteadily. In that moment nothing but hot, pulsing bolts of anger, coursed through him. And he'd come close. So close in beating that bas***d. If only she hadn't stopped him. He looked at her. She was looking at him, her fear evident in her gaze. She was trying to figure him out, he knew it. He flinched mentally when he saw the unshed tears in her eyes. How did he always manage to do that?

They looked at each other, trying to calm themselves down. The fear had shaken them. Khushi tried not to cry, she would not do that. Arnav took deep breaths, he didn't remember the last time he'd felt so terrified for someone. He jerked out of his thoughts and recoiled a little as he felt her grab him in a hug.

Khushi hugged him , forgetting that she was supposed to be angry at him. She was afraid, she needed this. A tired sigh escaped from his lips. He gave trying to make sense of what had just happened and clutched her tighter as the residues of his fear left him. She was safe, it's all that mattered.

A few tears escaped from her eyes and the remnants of her dread left her as he rubbed her back. The one person who made her feel safe, was the person who had scared her in the first place. Arnav smiled wanly. It was she who calmed him and she who brought out the fear. Fear was a funny thing, they thought in unison.


--oo0oo--


Yeahh so about that...I think it's crap :P Oh well, read and comment you guys <3


xoxo

Aanya


I just had to quote this! 😆
I know I have a reserved place on top of this. . .but still!

Aanyaaa!!!!🤗 you are AWESOME!⭐️
I mean i've read something after eons, that moved me so much!
Its like, the way you've written it. . the way you portrayed their emotions! . . .its all so beautiful!😍
I'm still imagining the whole sequence!
Its not crap at all!
You've brilliantly written it! 🤗
Love youu!
Do write more!
And thanks for the PM!

-Sharmi

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Simply brilliant!! Khushi was really trying to figure him out but was scared and distraught at the same time all because of her confused feelings and Arnav's attitude!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww Aanya that is sooo beautiful!!!!!
i totally love that episode n u've written it wonderfully!!! it's not crap!!!
love it...

He was angry cuz that jerk hurt Khushi!!! aww he's soo awesome!!! n u too...Brilliant work!!!
Perfect ending with that hug!!!! Nice work on ArHi, ...after AR, they're really awesome!!!

Take care
Muahhh🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: mirnalini

Beautifully written!


Thank You! 😳

Originally posted by: purva_j

Very nice..Aanya, you are awesome writer.. 👏 very well written and described in words on todays Arhi scene..I wished your imagined part they would have shown😍...nice job..😊👍🏼


Thank You so much Purva! Haha I wish they hug too <3 :D

Originally posted by: SmokingDreams

OMG..You are a brilliant writer Aanya dii..Mashallah..I am now gonna respect your comments a lot more than I already did..Seriously, you are awesome and way to good..I loved it..It was short and beautiful..God Bless Jaani..

Love,
Amal

*Edited Sholly that OMKAJEN came in😳*


Thank Youu Amal! Pfft. Don't embarrass me like that 😆

Thank You so much <3

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19

Hey Aanya

Loved it yaar

Seriously

The way you show Fear of both

Awesome

Thanks for the PM

Take care

Lots of Love

GEET

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: RheaKSG4eva

Res.! :)
*Edited*
Wow!
That was AMAZING!
Eh Aanya dont call it crap please!
I loved it!
Very well written!
And aaj ka episode toh was sooo adorable...
I loved the way he fought for her!
But then her uncle is no more... :(
All because of that shyaam! ugh..hate him!

But hey, this was really nice!
Loved it!
Do write more on ArHi! :)

Love
Rhea


I didn't even know you watched IPKKND! 😲

Oh well, Thank Youu so much <3 <3

I plan to write more :)

xoxo
Aanya

Originally posted by: moon_mine

amazing!!!!

u were jst brilliant!!!!!


Thank You 😳

xoxo
Aanya

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