MG[SS]-The Yellow Dot of Eternal Joy[IMP Note Pg 1 & Pg 72] - Page 41

Originally posted by: ninand

its absolutely lyrical.. its just saved from being a poem or a song , when the characters actually speak.

Lolz...yeah. I realized it mid-way while writing😳...but then...went ahead anyways with it.😆

just the way he picks one thread of hers from his memory and goes spinning an entire cloud from it is so delightful..

in wisps of yellow yarn , of thee,

is spun this wispy filagree..

the soul in every blue , or bright,

my sun of day, my sun of night.😍.. sorry got carried away😆. but its just too delightful, this read.

I like it when you get carried away. This was beautiful!!🤗

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Jazzy,

since you are answering the comments, can i ask if you are updating ?

😳

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Nope...not now. And not this anyways😆 I am just velli right now.

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

You could give us a new year gift , you know 😛

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Lolz...I will give that in the new Year😛 I don't want to rush the next chapter...since it is the last part :)

Till then make do with MPGD😆

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Lolz...I will give that in the new Year😛 I don't want to rush the next chapter...since it is the last part :)

Till then make do with MPGD😆

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

moiii...whens u doing MPGD😳

Originally posted by: jazzerette

After you update SOL😛