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Posted: 13 years ago
Please update fast...
Cant wait to see Geet's reaction...
I hope she doesn't blame Maan for hiding the truth...
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Update soon i am waiting to see geet ka reaction..
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i m so excited to read the next part
waiting dear
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Mahsoos...
Part 8


Geet held her face, suppressing the tear, suppressing her scream. The ground seems like hot lava, burning the essence of her life. The hand fell senselessly and bashed against the cupboard with immense force. Maan jumped, trying to feel the torment, he walked close in order to support while geet suppressed her body against the cupboard in fear.
"geet... Geet!"
He was mere inch way, the heat was present, he could feel the burning skin like a hot lava. "I thought you knew..." he repeats again.
GEET starred at his eyes. Feared, petrified. She couldn't conclude or accept the fact he is blind. The pounding heart was beating senselessly. She have never imagined such thing, the mind went blank. Completely dark.
Maan came forward and held her arm which was shaking. She wanted to move back further but in vain it went no where. His presence started to fear her.
"talk to me what happen?" maan panicked as he could feel how scared and petrified she may be.
"y-...yo...yo-u c-ca-n-n-t s-s-se!" geets voice was shacking without any calmness. The fear, mind just became dead. The thought of your husband blind could not see, it shocked her.
Both stood there for silent, surprised at everything, maan couldn't understand how she did not know while geet felt like tearing her self apart...

Before anything else could happen avantika knocks on the door. Maan backs way, listening to the noise, thoughtless, both stood there not sure what to say or think, the shock...

Avantika walks in, finding them by the wardrobe. She smiles happily covering her eyes and then twists around, "sorry, but geet beta you have to go around your parents house for the ritual." avantika hurriedly takes her exit locking the door behind.
Maan had no idea what was going around while geet still stood there shocked, her pallu was lying on the floor, and then drop by drop tear flowed, the wet hair dripping the red bangle was senseless like her... Maan could feel the tense in air, how can he comfort? Her not knowing the truth was shocked to him self.
He backed way, freeing her soft senseless arm and walked out, again it gave no hint to geet that he is blind. She dropped her self to the hard floor, bashing the knee, the glass bangle broke with immense pressure just like her heart. She is married, that man was her husband, no matter what she was saying, blindly looking for something to comfort her mind and heart it wasn't working, hating her self. Hating everyone around her. She drank the saliva, crying like a small baby, hugged her knee. Her mind did not want to come to a conclusion about the future, she refuge to think about anything except her happiness, to be precise at this moment geets mind was blind like maan.

Maan stood against the door for sometime, unsure, frighten. He met geet just few hours back and already his heart was on fear of loosing the smell, the voice those warm touch. Everything about her was beyond special, it showed him the light, showed him new feelings and already it was in verge of breaking. He walked across the house, rushed to his mum beds room.
A wooden brown door stood infront of him, he felt the texture and knocked gently. It's unusual for maan to come around in her room, since his dad left maan never showed his face around, not that often atleast. Her heart knew by the knock it is no other then maan.
She slowly opens the door, looking at her son, "what happen maan?"
"do you know geet did not know the person she is marrying is blind!" he angrily looks at her. How many time he haven't ask, how many time he haven't question to conform that she knew everything...
WHY?
His scream roared across the long corridor to his room, geet jumps with the sudden voice. Wiping her tears, dragging the loose pally to cover her curve. She ran out, only to here maans voice echoing...

Maan normally a calm manner man. Who can tolerate anything to a extent but when something serious or he sense something Extremely wrong his anger was immensely dangerous as his love.

"no! Rano, everyone knows the truth!" avantika tried to confront but maan stops her in the middle.
"geet didn't. I am spending my life with her! NOT her family." he grits his teeth in anger, frustrated with everything. Today, at this moment. He was regretting. The biggest regretting of his life, why god was so cruel to take his eyes. Maan did not step in his mother room, stood fixed his ground.
One by one every member of the family started to gather around, terrified with maans sudden outburst. Everyone equally was petrified with his anger. It's something rare, very rare for maan to be angry. Last time the family member experienced this side of maan when avantika and his dad John had the divorce.
Geet climbed down the stair in hurry as the whole crowed gathered around the long corridor.
Maan was surprised how geets payel caught his attention but ignored overall...
"I told you. I have clearly told you does she know the truth?"
Everyone started to whisper & started to look at geet. She had red eyes. Dry tears Mark. She backed way little as everyone started to talk.
"maan... Trust me..."
Maan didn't listen, he knew well it's been a Chet. His long body spines around, faced direct towards geet and slowly walked towards her. This man was indeed surprising her, specially how he knew in the crowds she was standing there. He came by held her hand and walked off between the crowded. She senselessly looked at him, shocked, hating every second.

Maan brought geet in to the room, locking the door he slowly walked in to the middle, rubes his templet with agony. His red face was clearly visible. "it's my f-fault!"

He eventually broke the silence. Geet stood at the background senselessly, still having hard time to believe what just happen, she is married to a blind man. Geet parts her rosy lips to reply back, the torment was breaking through that senseless barrier. Breaking it's way. "it is your fault." she simply replied, cunning, hatred covered in each words.
Maan bends his neck, pointing the eat so he could here the silent voice better. It sounded broken.
"I was waiting for you that night, waiting for your call." she angrily grits her teeth. "you could have told me then!" she backs way even more.



Maan twists his body, his eyes started to fear her further. She couldn't conclude how she couldn't see, couldn't conclude, refuge to think through his prospective. Refuge to think even a blind person have all the right to live there life, she hated him, she hated him simply because there was no light in his eyes.

"you don't have to come back once you leave today... But if you want you can always be my wife and this door will always be open for you"






Part 7

Part 9

next- whats geets decision? or ?

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Part 8


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am also waiting for her deciosion
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting 4 decision.pity maan.hope geet cum back
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
waiting to see geet's decision
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Posted: 13 years ago
Her chock and fear were justified but the blame not they didn't let him talk to her the blame is on geet family
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tum to mujha firsa rula dia..superb...waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upd...
hw cn she hate maan yar...
so we cn expect another upd...yipee

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