A Pregnant Khushi, 3rd & last part pg28

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-Aicha-

@-Aicha-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

This is actually so cute, I love it :) You have me as friend, so please pm me your work, when you write something new, please? :)

Snehaa

Edited by -Aicha- - 13 years ago

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: JanakiRaghunath

I learned in Developmental Psychology that the hormone levels of pregnant women increase dramatically during their 4-6 mths, and that they feel sudden romantic urges during the most random of times...make Khushi get romantic urges while Arnav is at a meeting at work, and she calls him home urgently making him think she's getting pains, when all she wants to do is romance him.🤣 If you don't like that, you could also do an instance where Arnav and Khushi are shopping for clothes (for Khushi), and Khushi bursts into tears over something Arnav says, making the shop keepers think he is abusing her or something so he gets in trouble.😈

Green - I LOVEEE This Idea : D 😳

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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

thank you everyone!

sorry about taking forever on the update. i have the MCAT soon so really studying for that. 🤓

& Janu & Sanzz - I'll attempt that idea but sorry if I murder it. 🤣

Edited by aishi.muffin - 13 years ago

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: aishi.muffin
thank you everyone!

sorry about taking forever on the update. i have the MCAT soon so really studying for that. 🤓

& Janu & Sanzz - I'll attempt that idea but sorry if I murder it. 🤣

Don't You Dareee 😈 😆

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Aish! I just found out that you wrote an os (saw it in the newsletter) and couldn't resist reading it. OMG, it's hilarious! Anjali's lines were funny, but the dialogue between arnav and khushi at the end about the baby has the best! I couldn't stop laughing. Nice concept

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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Thank you everyone :D

Radhika - OMG it was in the newsletter? Could you give me the link of the page? 😳 thank you sho much btw!

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-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Awww! this is sooo adorable!

LOL! I can totally imagine Khushi naming her child jalebi! :D this scene fits them soo well! I hope in the future when this track comes in the serial, they have this type of scene with Arhi! SO CUTE! :D

You should write moreee! (:

--Garima

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WittyKitty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Too sweet!

Pls pm me for all future updates!

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

I love it!!!

🤣 arnav's last line was the best!!!!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Jalebi! Jalebi! Jalebi!!

Awww!! How sweet!!

Lolz!! This is pure comedy!!!

Love this part:

"It had only been six months since they were married, yet Khushi had all of his family members wrapped around her fingers. Every time he said something mean would result in a lecture from Anjali or Nani, and once, even Mami. Yes, Mami! How could his own aunt come to adore Khushi more than him?"

Lolz! Even Mami!! Hahaha…!!!!

And omg!! "'She told me every mean word you uttered! Now get up and make some jalebi before I spank you!'"

That's…. That's.. no words! You're hilarious!

Lolz! Anjali's interruption was just too perfect! And then they put on that "tu tu main main" faade and go back to fighting! Lol! "You started it!" "No you started it!" haha Your comedic timing is spot on! If anybody else had written this, it would have been so not funny. But since you did, it's hilarious!!

I love your interpretation. I too hope that something like this happens in the story later on. I don't want the creatives to make them all gushy and gooey in love once they get married, have kids, etc. Their comedy is what makes us want to watch them.

Edited by AishuJSKfan - 13 years ago